Different

Hey everyone, I just wrote a new poem that is quite different from the type of poetry that I usually write, and was just wondering if anyone could take a look at it and tell me what they thought. It is called "Who Is He" and is posted in the dark poems category. I will be more than happy to comment on your poems if you would do the same for mine. Thanks!

Hey. I'll be glad to tell you what I think of your poem, please return the favor, if not, I'll understand :)
-Marta