plz read/comment my poems *it means alot 2 me*

hey ppl im pretty new at this site and ive been writing poetry 4 a while but never actually got commented on it...id REALLY apreciate if you could check out some of my poems...critisize plz...im not scared of a lil critisizm...thanx and hope to hear from you ppl soon ^_-
XXX byaz XXX lol (lots of love)
*tat!*