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CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED!!!!!

srry it got erased. stupid computers! lol. anyways the ppl who won are on the bottom!!!!!!

Can I please reserve a spot. I will try and write one if I can do it right lol.

-Jenna.

reserves done!

can I reserve a spot but can I do it without the {skippy sarah} Part?

Actually dont reserve me a spot, sorry cant write anything atm.

My name was in the other contest, and I did a poem on that... So, may I use that poem here? It's old, is that ok?

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Can I reserve pleasee? =P It sounds fun.

can i reserve please??? cause i wanna try this!!!

can i reserve a spot please?

Reserve please.

Dramatic....

Nicely done. I loved that one. =]

-Jenna.

Ooh i wanna play!

since the time that i read the original post ive already written a verse and a half lol

omg i love when it takes less then 3 mins to write a poem!!!!!!

Disturbed One

I may be disturbed,
I may be insane,
But I have the right to cry,
Whenever I feel pain,

I may be one,
I may be alone,
But I have the right to call,
Anyone on the phone,

I may be disturbed,
I may be one,
But you dont have the right,
To laugh just for fun.

haha my s/n iiiis my name. lol. wait do u mean this name? or could i use like my aim s/n?

ecstasy you can use ur old one but only YOU.

srry lauren but the spots r full.......

done reserving and all

Helping Hands {CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme}
by XTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Many helping hands greedily reach out to accumulate,
So lost and cold, something rests in Divine's hand; children's fate.
Broken, yet screaming in great delight, children grab helping arms,
Ignoring Creator's precious screams that those hands will do harm.
Eight-thousand children smile to the sky with forgotten ways,
Grabbing, reaching helping Angel's hands with more than final praise.
Thanking them for taking their lives and not letting their hearts stray.
For this is the most maliced in all of suicidal traits.
Picking up little children, smiling at them, uttermost charm,
As the 'helping Angel's' take the children's last and final days.

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Understanding: The children are young, but they lost all hope, for the wanted to kill themselves, but didn't know how (because they were so young). Thus, the angel's took them in their 'helping hands' and killed them... Taking what rests in 'Divine's Hands'. Thus, it is the 'ecstasy' (or joy) of suicidex.
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The CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme, a form created by Laura Lamarca, consisting of one 10-lined stanza.
The rhyme scheme for this form is AABBCCCABC and a syllable count of each line is 15.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

And thank you for letting it be old... I appreciate it. =]

whoa. that got filled quick lol. oh well!

=P

thank you, great job ecstasy suicide!

and i'm really srry lauren....maybe next time

bump

ppl who reserved, lol, where r you? he he he.....i'm so IMPATIENT!

Sureeeee you are sooo copying my idea!!!! lol jk ;0

haha guess what ecstacy....i think i submitted mine...and then later that night or the next night or one of the nights after lol...i got an idea and i used ur name in it =)

cool contest, wish i had have reserved a spot, =| oh well. good luck everyone

This is Sarah.

'This Beautiful Disaster'

Tears would gently brush my cheeks
And take away my laughter

He was beautiful,
But my heart forbade
That beautiful disaster

As the days blanketed malice fears
My nights were filled with sorrow

He was beautiful,
But I often wondered,
If he'd be beautiful tomorrow.

And as the power overtook me
I knew then, everything I'd lose

He was beautiful,
And my soul challenged
If his beauty portrayed truth.

Alas the tears still brush my cheeks
And steal away my laughter

He's so beautiful,

But my heart forbids...
This beautiful disaster.

a poetic soul as much as i loved ur poem but u weren't reserved and there's no spot left....i'm sorry.......so urs is not going to be jugded

Afraid of the dark

Fear not of the darkness,
Fear what lies within,
The feather light coldness,
That touches your skin.

The sound in the dark,
That drives you insane,
Spinning and turning,
Searching in vain.

The patter of footsteps,
That run through the dark,
The laughter of children,
In the still park.

The dripping of water,
When all should be dry,
A voice that awakens,
When none should reply

The strong smell of burning,
When nothings alight,
These are the things,
That go bump in the night.

Do not feel secure,
Because I’m not afraid,
When light comes again,
I will soon fade.

That patter of footsteps,
That ran through the dark,
That laughter of children,
That laughed in the park.

That dripping if water,
When all should be dry,
That voice that awoke,
When none should reply.

That strong smell of burning,
When nothings alight,
I am the thing,
That goes bump in the night.

Laura
XxX

i like it afraid of the dark.....it has a really great rhyming....how can ppl do that? i suck at it...lol

L aughing inside she hides the bottle; so
U nbreakable. The crocodile tears
S tream down, eating the make-up
H iding who she really is.

F orging the lies in her heart she
C ries. With the blade piercing
U ncontrollably into her back -
K notting out her hollow soul.

© Jenna Elphick
November 6, 2006.

--Kinda confusing? I don't know. I don't really like it so I might make a different one. I will let you know if I change anything in it though.--

-Jenna.

i like it....it very origianl and even it's sort of confusing, it's great! keep it up! and ppl, come on!!!!

Fallen Angel

I'm an angel that fell from above,
shot down from the gift of your love.
Not knowing what else to do,
but go on living life, loving you.
The fallen angel full from sorrow,
left my heart so empty, left so hallow.
No more life left in this heart,
torn to pieces, torn apart.
Consumed by love, not by hate,
dying inside, killed by fate.
Reserected by your touch, by your smile,
stuck on your beauty, full of denile.
That your mine, we can finally be,
together forever, for rest of eternity.

oh yeah, this is bryan. ^^^

great!

i want to talk about my nickname..... blaq diamond! well i think my nickname is unique b/c im an african american and im dark in skin color but i like to consider myself as a blaq queen but also i love diamonds so i decided to combine them b/c blaq diamonds are rare where i come from and i feel like the type of person i am is rare and precious and so is my spirit so i like to call myself the blaq diamond!!!!

im the only blaq diamond there is cause cant nobody b like me..im my own person!!!

i think ill write a poem about blaq diamonds aka me!!! lol ill get back with you on my poem!!!

umm....jasmine...the spots r full but if someone can't do it i'll definetly put u in.....and blaq meaning BLACK or really blaq? lol...i'm sort of confused. but i love the name!

ppl stop forgeting about this!!!!!!!!!!!!

i may not be here in the 11th so if i'm not u guys get extra time but if i'm here too bad and i will just r/r/c the ppl who joined and of course judge it!

3 are STILL not done!!!!!!

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