SAD POEM CONTEST

**competition has ended**

Waiting patiently under my bed
Don’t tell! Daddy said
Big black bruise covered in ooze
Why does he slap me?
For his amuse?
Mommy where are you
I need help!!
It is cold and dark in hear!
I’m not only frightened
I’m in fear!
My life is hanging by a string
I lost my hope and everything
He hurt me so badly I want to die
He hut me so badly I forget to cry

Mommy why did you leave me
Without you I’m never set free
Mommy how did you die
I think daddy told me why
But it was a big fat lie
Did daddy ever make you cry?
Did daddy ever hurt you?
Like he is doing to me too?

Mommy you said if I die before you do ill be in heaven waiting for you!!
I can’t wait any longer mommy!
I’m waiting patiently under my bed doing what you ever said
I want to go now!!
Daddies coming with his angry frown!!

I lay motionless on the ground
Daddy saw and what he found
Was an innocent girl so very hurt
As he whipped away his tear on my bloody shirt

Daddy why??

Silent Death

The day has come
I’m full of tears
I’m so confused
I’m in shock and fear

Her weakened bones can not lift her weight
She lays there hopelessly for her fate
The only thing that I can do
Is give her water through a tube
For tomorrow is the big 1bad day
With all my might I kneel down and pray
I can’t believe she is going to die
As I said my last goodbye

I lay in bed
I can’t go to sleep
Because I’m thinking of her and all the memories I will keep

The next day has come and 1when I 1wake
It will already be too late

I go to school the same day
I try to keep the memories and tears away
But they are always coming back to me
And every time I let it be
I see her looking back at me

I fell down today

I fell down today
And this is what I have to say
I cross my heart hope to die stick a needle in my eye
All I did was fall down on a swing
Daddy told me not to say a thing

Suicide
(i like writing sad poems but im not suicidal)

Is this the right time?
I'm all alone
no one is hear
at home
a tear hiding behind my black bruised eyes
no one can hear my soft delicate cries
I'm hiding behind all my lies
in the corner covered in flies
mommy and daddy are gone now they said they will come home
but yet it has been ten days now and I'm still all alone
i see the bullet and i see the gun
but day after day i have tried and i don't know how to commit suicide

My Living Graveyard

Same night with same darkness all around
and i enter the same house with no-one inside
years have gone by since nothing has changed
and now even my so called flesh has dried

faces of strange visitors roam in every room
painful voices could be heard from all the sides
they all try to speak with my shattered mind
sharing stories of the loved ones who have died

a bright ray of light coming from my door
as i wait for someone to show me sunrise
a mere vision i have almost forgotten
since life's music has turned to silent cries

voices of scratching nails echoes from every corner
feeling numb as i watch my still heart at the backyard
crimson stains glows in the stillness of darkness
far beneath the sacred dust of my living graveyard

My Heart
I was under too much stress,
I couldn't pass this test.
All I see is red,
coming from the wrists,
which I bled.
As tears fill my eyes
for the very last time.
This life was supposed
to be mine!
You controlling me made
me blind.
I only wish to have a life that's mine.
Only a little more time
I'm counting in my mind
I made one mistake
that I can't retake.
My last seconds are up at stake.
The only thing I have left is the stopping beat of my heart.
It's too late for me to restart.
Cause I no longer hear
the beating of what's
left of my heart.

when is judging now that it's over!?

It's over already? I was gonna send one in. I'm working on it right now.

I hope this is okay.

Frozen Tears And Broken Glass
by Marsha

She lays still on the icy floor.
In the cold room she once played in before.
No one by her side.
All alone with the pain inside.
She looked at the portrait of herself.
Sitting still on the shelf.
The girl in the picture was a stranger.
Her eyes were heavenly blue, blond curls framed her face, and fair skin as delicate rose petals.
She couldn’t bring herself to believe that that girl was once her.
She stared at her broken reflection in the cracked mirror.
Her hair a mess, her skin was pale, and her eyes black, and full of terror.
She threw a rock at the picture and it crack to pieces.
Her breathing slowed down and her hand trembled.
She breath was raspy as she felt the kiss of death.
Soon her dark eyes were blank and all her pain evaporated into the thin cold air.
Leaving her empty and lifeless in the room with frozen tears and broken glass.

When are ya gonna judge?

R.I.P KEVIN

When they called to tell me the news
Told me you were gone
My heart started to hurt
like it was hit by a bomb

Like I've been bum rushed
It took me by surprise
It wasn't long
till the tears rolled from my eyes

I prayed to God
and hoped that this was all a game
That when I wake up
Everything will be back to being the same

But still as I sit here
writing this poem to you
thinking about
all the things that we used to do

I know your not coming back
and I wont hear your voice again
But always in my heart
you will be my best friend

***** last breath

Take this breath
and think of me
let the breeze fill you up
and remember that breath was me
One of many you have taken
but this one different
for my essence screams sweet sorrows of your heart
I'm here, awaiting in this place
stick me in a tower
lock me up
because my thought of you are just as real
I no longer feel your touch
I'm left with that last breath you spared
as you threw yourself away from me
whatever the reason it may be
There is still one thing missing
and that is thee
Tempting as the apple awaiting on the tree
I miss the hectic signs you send that were crystal as the message eve received
Memories await
your rough hands touched my skin
stone cold is the thought as your heart felt the moment you walked away
leaving me a stray
Torn in two by many
you would not feel as bad
So many I alone have lost track
matter of fact I do not matter
For the last breath said it all
As I climb down this brick wall from the castle in my dreams
you strike my mind
For the many years I have thought of that minty breath and fallen apart
Now instead I fall down
I burn in fire
and now you breath my ashes
as you watch me fade
So take this last breath and think of me

********without you/ last words

Better off without the drama
Better off without the pain
Just spare me
I wish I didn't feel
I wish I could no longer love
Take this temptation from me
Free me from this misery
I want to be better off
Teach me your ways
I want to be like you
Speak it like it's true
and say things like "I can live without you"
and still mean it
jump off a cliff and enjoy every second of the fall
I wanna lose it all
just so that you will help me recover
At the moment your absence has parched me
and the memory of your smile will forever stay
So how long until I realize that you are gone?
I can see you lying there far below me
Waiting for the tears to roll hopelessly, and fail
as i sit dazed, and confused thinking of those last words you said
"i will always be there for you
I don't want to see you cry
and now I'm about to enjoy every last second
until the day I die. "
....
And then he hit the ground
I know that he's with me
and I'm not gonna cry
he will remain a memory in my heart as I
enjoy every last second until the day I die.

hey..if u need help or want me to judge or anything because your too busy i can...i dont mind..i can disqualify myself...just let me know..id rather lose then have EVERYONE lose..ya know? peace out:)

Gawsh soo many ppl entered after it was over. ha.

can I change my entry to: our end

Through this frosty glass
within it I can see my reflection
as I draw my breath upon it
the moonlight shines clearly bright
as the sparkles in my eyes show past memories that flash before me

Now i think of all the pain you caused
I wish I didn't feel
I wish I could no longer love
take this temptation from me
free me from this misery
I want to be better off
now let me rip
strip the pieces of my soul
and start from scratch
then there is no need for a patch that is always left forever unmended
it just rips again when unattended

Send it across the moon
I will hitch a ride on a shooting star
or on the tip of the arrow that was shot straight through my heart
thats flames from hell relinquish whats left of me

So what is left of me?
Whats left to see?
emptiness has only left me scars
not alone but accompanied by my tears and fears all held in the palm of my hand

I want to end it now
just to land unharmed
yet no fixing the damage already done
cant stop what you've begun

I see the rain falling down
and turn around to find you
at the time convinced that I was not afraid to lose it all
Now I am back where I started sweeping u my own ashes
trying to make my bed the way it should have been made

Now nothing left but to confess
I can't deny I faked it
I want-ed you to be mine
Notice the past tense in that phrase?

drowned my thoughts
that is what they are worth to you
tired of giving in
lame excuses
boy your useless
It is not just showing me a good time
why try?
My life seems as worthless as a clock watching time go by

So used to this garbage I am compared to trash
So I have forgotten my own worth
who is there in my time of need when all you do is abandoned me?
I wanna go home
not sure where it is
if this is it I no longer feel secure

You tell me the things I want to hear
some days you take away the fears
I want to get out of here
and thats when your gone

And there you are again
taking a crash back into my life
cleaning up the shattered heart you abandoned in the first place
You made a mistake
but so did I when I decided to take you back

And yet when I break down I hear that devilish laugh saying I told you so
all this pain because of your mistake
instead of confronting you choose to hide
you would rather leave those thoughts behind you
and now the only thing behind you is me

YOUR SOUL SCREAMS WHY?

Please tell me
WHY???
why do you try
to deny that voice
that ME
which speaks inside?
why do you refuse to listen
when in such agony
it sighs?
or is it a mere ghosts whisper
of halfheard words
behind your very eyes?
why do you try
so damn hard
to silence it
with alcohol
drugs
and lies?
why do you medicate
your mind
to try forget
your soul inside?
why do you try to flee
and in societies
illusions hide?
BUT
does it not
always find you
when your sober
by yourself
in the dark of night
all alone
with your fears
and your pain
and there is no sleep insight?
THEN
can you not hear its tragic screams?
can you not hear its mournful cries?
does its weak pleas
not keep you awake
as it shrieks
and begs you for its life
as in its own pool of blood
you try so hard
to it drown
but in your grip
STILL
it squirms and it writhes
and begs you to atleast answer
why it must die?
why must it be tortured so
until its death is nigh?
but are there any answers
or merely society's lies?
have the playthings of us gods
become your chains that bind
you to your sorrows
while ever trapped
behind your masks
never free
your soul
forever cries
so once more I ask you
WHY???

Lmao. People, 11 poems ago the competition was closed. Why do you keep posting?!

yeah, I was the last one who entered before it was closed, and then I saw all the poems and I was like: oookay..:P

im really sorry but ive been busy it was exam time for me

The winners are
1st place:sarah for the poem that was too long to post
2nd place: Snowy
3rd Place: Silhouette, of something unimaginable the halloween poem
thanks to everyone that entered!

when is gonna be the next contest?

Aww, thank you so much! Congrats to all!

lol ok so i lose again. oh well, congrats winners. 8th loss in a row..bummer:P next time:)

^ Lol, me tooo! =P But I think my list is longer, haha. Good job everyonee, I read a few poems and they were great! =]

bob y don't u run your own contest of some sort and judge it on grammar and all that if u feel that u could do a fair job of it. I feel we r all truly winners I am to late to enter this contest by about a month will there be a new contest?

Eh, mine didn't win either...
Oh well.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Why thank you, Bob.