haiku contest

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WINNERS:
1.sluvious
2. ♥ashleigh♥
3.Lush.Fcuk-*
4.Jpoet
5.xxEvilAngelxx

Prizes---
1.10 r/r/c
2.8 r/r/c
3.6 r/r/c
4.4 r/r/c
5.2 r/r/c
everyone else will get 1 r/r/c

I'll write one!

Can I reserve please?

&& what do you mean it can be about anything "except" seasons and nature? Haiku's are supposed to be about nature. How can we not write about it?

I'm going to write one about nature and if you don't like it I will remove it. =]

Tiny Dancers [Haiku]

Puddles of darkness
Brightened by tiny dancers
Glowing in the sky

I'll write one!

Can I please reserve a spot please? I'll try I may have to unreserve because usually my haikus are about nature lol, but I'll try. =]

-Jenna.

May I reserve a spot?

~Evil Endures~

Eyes gleam in darkness,
A slit of evil emerges,
The black cat subsists.

^ I think i did a good job! ^

Well.. now that i see this, the second line has eight syllables the way i want it... so if that will matter in the contest then I will change my entry to:

~Evil Endures~

Eyes gleam in darkness,
A slit of evil appears,
The black cat subsists.

Sweetness of my youth
Intertwines with all my dreams
As I sleep in peace

By: Jpoet*

bump =D

-White Lies.-

The little white lies,
Are killing what they once had -
Her shattered heart bleeds.

© Jenna Elphick
November 5, 2006.

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A haiku is a Japanese style poem consisting of three lines
with the syllable count 5, 7, 5.
A haiku is generally based on nature.

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-It's kind of weird but usually I write about nature for these and I couldn't think lol.-

-Jenna.

can I reserve? Thanks

reserve me please~

Foolish Death

Lying in the ground
Wanting to get out of here
I'm buried alive

cant be about seasons bryan.
ya i guess it can be double or triple, my rules don't say anything against it

damn, they had to be reseved.. -sigh- oh well.

Kristen- but arent senryus only about human umm problems or w/e?

go BOB!!!!! lol aka sluvious!

thankz for the advice bob!

Bob is sluvious? This I did not know...Hm.

yep it's him...

Wow.. I talked to 'Sluvious' today and he was rude and I told him he was and he then wished me luck on writing my book...
And I thought Bob was mean...Shows you never to judge people. I like Bob.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
Sorry, off topic. I'm done. I was just curious.

whoa. thats slightly creepy... i wrote a poem for /this/ contest.. called stolen innocence(or inncence stolen) only later to find out all spots were reserved.. but still. then to read it, i was all -shivers-. but yours was about something different. =\

x♥x:Lauren

I am now CharismaticCountryGirl...not Jpoet! Thanks!
Charisma*

WINNERS:
1.sluvious
2. ♥ashleigh♥
3.Lush.Fcuk-*
4.Jpoet
5.xxEvilAngelxx

Good Job everyone!
i enjoy reading these however some of u need to check your syllables

WOW! I didn't think I was any good at haiku's so Thank You very much for 4th!
Charisma* (aka Jpoet)

Thanks for the placing Hunn. If you don't mind, could you please do;

Eaten Alive [Parquette]
Smiles That Hurt [Italian Sonnet]
The Fourth Drink Instinct.
Sun Going Down Again [Acrostic]
Missing you
&&
Crash && Burn [Terzanelle]

I think most of them are on my featured, or on my latest. Thanks Hunn. (:

-Jenna.