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So when will the contest be over?

By the Lipstick {Parquette}

Sitting on a table filled with many things
A doll to the side, a comb and lipstick,
Looking into mirrors sitting in front of her,
Her smile is a smile that simply sings.

Sitting on a table filled with many things
A proding clock sets by and silently ticks
She's proud of her most prized possession she is sure.
This little child full of smiles is deathly sick.

Sitting on a table filled with many things
Is her pride and dignity by the lipstick
Holding in to her head, the hairbrush, eyes a blur,
Lukemia has taken over her.
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-Parquette-

It has four stanzas, each containing four lines.The first line of the poem is repeated in every stanza as the first line. Each line except the first has 10-12 syllables. The rhyme scheme is "AbcaAbcbAcbcAbcc"

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Thankss Sheena, they're great!

Ann Marie, the contest will be over when all the spaces have been filled.

Jess. LOL. How could I have not noticed =P

Keep them coming everyone!

Honestly this has been going for a while now, If I where you I'd end it, but that is just my opinion.

Peace, Joe

Eaten Alive.

She got beneath my skin and she ate me alive,
As she whispered her words of disgust in my ears -
And watched the desperate tears fall from my eyes;
Leaving me with shattered hope to survive.

She got beneath my skin and she ate me alive,
Cut me down to dirt in front of all my peers -
And screamed to me that big girls do not cry;
Because it wouldn't get me through my years.

She got beneath my skin and she ate me alive,
As she gently sang me her twisted lullabies -
And laughed as she unleashed my greatest fears;
Watching as my heart slowly began to die.

She got beneath my skin and she ate me alive,
As she stared back at me from behind my mirror -
Snickering at my disgrace of a disguise;
And smiled as I believed all her pathetic lies.

© Jenna Elphick
November 19, 2006

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It has four stanzas, each containing four lines.The first line of the poem is repeated in every stanza as the first line. Each line except the first has 10-12 syllables. The rhyme scheme is "abcaabcbacbcabcc"

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__ Sorry that I didn't get it in any sooner. Two of my best friends were involved in a car crash with my sisters childhood best friends Dad && my babysitter =\ ... if that made any sense. So I have been busy makign sure they are okay && all. But here it is. Sorry again for taking so long Hunn. __

-Jenna.

I've done a parquette already but is it okay to reserve a Malisus?
*Gem*

Thankss Jenna, and don't worry about taking so long. Hope you're okay?

Bryan thankss for answering questions! =P

Gemma, as Bryan said, that's fine.

Joe, thankss for the advice but I think I'll just wait a little longer and then judge it. =]

Sorry i thought i sent this.... guess i forgot... oopsies...

LIES AND DECIET
With kisses tracing her red, red lips
Immersed in the lies and deciet,
She steadily slid her hand over the locket
Heir to a kindgdom, covered in tears

Thoughts of failing, failing her king
Hid within her smile
Into her pale, pale white skin
She pushed away her fears

Together forever? were those his words
Or were they simply syllables
Before her eyes, he whispered her name
Everlasting?... or just more lies

Over and over, it goes through her mind
Vowing to be there forever
Everlasting... or were her
Red, red lips, emmersed in lies?

-Terra

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-Parquette-

It has four stanzas, each containing four lines.The first line of the poem is repeated in every stanza as the first line. Each line except the first has 10-12 syllables. The rhyme scheme is "AbcaAbcbAcbcAbcc"

Thankss Terra! =]

Anyone else? There are only a few places left!

Come on reserves, get your poems in!

Come on poets! Who hasn't tried a Malisus yet?

I'll try one...=]

Thankss sweetie! =]]

np np

Death After Life
[`Double Malisus`]

Heart
Split Apart
Tears Rain
I Succumbed To Pain
Eating Away
This Will Be My Last Day

Take All My Pain Away
Can’t Live This Way
Don’t Do This To Me
Debris
Hit My Head
Dead

there ya go... never tried that style before! =]
~Ciao xx

Xx Just Be Free - Double Malisus xX

Fly
And don't cry
For me
Again, Just be free
And fly away
To where the angel's play

And know that from the start
You had my heart
I gave it to you
So true
Don't be shy
Fly ©

*Gem*

(It took me half an hour =/ I had no idea how difficult this could be. I gave it my best shot. Hope it's ok..)

Good job everyone~
get your reserves in!!
ONE more place for Malisus!!

I feel better now =)

np anytime!

Ciao xx

*e-con[allineare].viene-il[dolor

i changed my name it is now

[baby]blue[baby]blanket

-Terra

Okay guyss. I think I'm going to close this now. Thanks so much for all the participation. =]

Results will be in soon!

awesome! can't wait!!! =]

Ciao xx

Waits paitently for the out come....*whistles* la de da dum de da do.....

any idea when this will be completed... i have little patences. ... haha but i love the anticipation of who will win... tehe :D

*ding dong the witch is dead.
which old witch
the wicked witch
haha :D

Lol, sorry you guys. The contest will be judged soon. Please just be patient =]

^ Okay, thanks Bob.

*Drum Roll*

The results are in!

Honorable Mention - goes to the lovely xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex!

3rd Place - goes to the amazing DarkPrincess©!

2nd Place - goes to the wonderful Gemma!

And 1st Place - goes to the brilliant Lush.Fcuk-*!

Well done everyone, your poems were all amazing and it was very difficult to judge! Thank you so much for all participating! Prizes will be given out soon. ♥

great job everyone!!! =]

♥Ciao xx

Thank you. =]
But, which was it that recieved the Honorable Mention? I sumitted both forms. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Omg... really?
Oh wow!
Now this has to be a sign that i need to branch out to more poetry styles!!
Thankyoooou!!!
And welll done to everyone who entered, you were all amazing!
XxXxXxX

Congratulations to all the winners.

Congrats to the winners

Jeannie