--use ur fav song title--

closed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey ppl! well, i'm almost done with another contest and there's another contest for a movie lyric. anyways, i'm holding again a contest that's [i guess] original and unique. [maybe]. The contest is to write a poem using a title from a song YOU love. so this is not a titled contest. and ur the one who's picking UR song. not me.

so..........pick ur fav. song's title, then write a poem. clear? any Q's ask me!

rule

[1] new
[2] cussings are ok
[3] use the SONG title u picked!
[4] any lenght is ok
[5] dark and sad, my favs.
[6] have fun

prize
[1] 5
[2] 3
[3] 2

reserves:

[1] Grotesque Angel [done]
[2] Lush.Fcuk [done]
[3] Donna [done]
[4] Bryan [done]
[5] Ciao [done]
[6] Who cares [done]
[7] Symmetrically Unique [done]
[8] BurgerQueen [done]
[9] DarkPrincess [done]
[10] Adriana [done]

DUE DATE NEXT WEEK! (NOV 17 2006)

xxleisaxx

My Sweet Prince

Never thought you'd make me perspire,
Never thought I'd do you the same,
Never thought I'd fill with desire,
Never thought I'd feel so ashamed.

Me and the dragon can chase all the pain away,
So before I end my day,
Remember

My sweet prince,
You are the one
My sweet prince
You are the one

Never thought I'd have to retire,
Never thought I'd have to abstain,
Never thought all this could back fire,
Close up the hole in my vein.

Me and my valuable friend,
Can't fix all the pain away,
So before I end my day,
Remember

Never thought I'd get any higher,
Never thought you'd fuck with my brain,
Never thought all this could expire,
Never thought you'd go break the chain.

Me and you baby,
Still flush all the pain away
So before I end my day
Remember

My sweet prince,
You are the one.

great job!

Reserve please.

-Jenna.

Bridge Over Troubled Water

Bridge over troubled water,
nowhere to be seen.
The water rages in front of me,
ferocious, strong and mean.

Feeling so exhausted now,
Got to do this all alone.
I give up looking for my bridge,
and start to build my own.

You want me to carry You,
a bridge I'm meant to be.
I am battered, worn and weak,
if You really looked You'd see.

Let me get my strength back,
it should not take me very long.
Let me build my own bridge,
then for You I will be strong.

I know I'm being selfish,
I just wish that You could see.
Extra weight on a weak bridge,
will bring You crashing down with me.

Bridge over troubled water,
I'll be stronger than before.
I'll carry You across with ease.
Right now, I am sorry... I can't do this anymore...

please reserve me leisa!! Ciao xx

can i reseve. thnx

I Won’t be There- Simple Plan

When you need me, remember one thing,
Remember the pain when you hear me sing.
Remember you hurt me, you broke my heart,
Just stabbed me with a poisonous dart.

Remember everything you told me was a lie,
Didn’t even care when I said I want to die.
You’re no good to me, but I miss you so,
But there’s one thing you should know.

When you need me, I won’t be there,
You can cry and scream, but I won’t care.
You can call me up, I’ll let it ring,
It’s all your fault, you ruined everything.

Told me of your plans to take me from this hell,
Just another lie that your mouth did tell.
Said you loved me, but you have no heart,
Day after day the pain would restart…

I thought you cared, but I was wrong again,
No more Ms. Nice Girl, you’re not my friend.
I thought you cared, why and I ALWAYS wrong?
Now all I can listen to are sad songs.

When you need me, I won’t be there,
Remember I loved you, but now I won’t care.
You can continue to hurt me, continue to stare,
But it’s too late baby, I won’t be there.

~*W.C?*~
hope this is ok...

all done!!

Nothing Else Matters ~ Metallica

Nothing Else Matters
by Ciao xx

Nothing Else Matters
Baby, now my world is shattered
You told me you have to go
Baby, when you come back, will I know?

Nothing Else Matters
Honey, now our love is scattered
You promised me that you'd stay
But how can I go one another day

Nothing Else Matters
I feel like my heart's been splattered
Against a hard, brick wall
I hope it was worth it all

Nothing Else Matters
I'm so cold, my teeth chatter
Without you by my side
There's a whole in my inside

Nothing Else Matters
You're serving my heart on a silver platter
Cutting it up for the world to see
I guess you never really loved me

Nothing Else Matters
Now my heart is shattered
I guess you'll just never know
I had never wanted you to go

[Nothing Else Matters | That much was true | But now all that's left | is the "Me" without the "You"]

Ciao xx

wow u guys r pretty fast! lol.

All Time Lows [Deception]

Unspoken deceit leaks from truth,
Turmoil and unexplained fear fuel evil ways,
A misconception is but what remains,
As honesty is written out of this phase.

Killing thoughts from innocent minds,
Bending words through homophones,
Blissful unawareness buys you time,
Ignoring turmoil exchanged through groans.

Pain reflected through salted mascara,
Whisking away every ounce of perception,
Blinded by what they cannot see,
This is the common trait of deception.

I wrote this for this contest, then submited it on my other account because I couldn't find this contest, lol. I hope that is okay.

jess ~

ok....great!

just wondering did u make the poem up? it's really good!

xxleisaxx

Reserve me A SPOT!!

A lesson to learn

You were a lesson to learn
I should have known not to let you return
You never even thanked me for the things I did for you
Never once did you apologize for the stuff you do

I should of known you would be like this
your always trying to make up with a simple kiss
but this time I want you to feel the pain that I felt inside
Your gonna feel so bad as the days go by and by

I'm gonna hurt you so bad like you hurt me
and I'm gonna just leave you indeed
You don't have to worry about letting me return
because I'm not coming back
you were a lesson to learn

could you reserve a spot for me please?

srry loganl. the spots are full............maybe next time.....

xxleisaxx

i just got finished with it too. whatever though. ill get over it.

i don't wanna compete with Georgi... she's GOOD! lol

who's georgi? lol

xxleisaxx

yes. sorry i've been SO buxy.....well, i haev to do my homework and all, so i guess i'll judge this in monday, hopefully! sorry ppl!

xxleisaxx

bump

Jeeze, I forgot!! Sorry

All That I'm Living For

Bitter intoxication fused
Deep and dark beneath
A veil where I will drink
For the souls of lost abuse

The moon is bitter today
While flames engulf within
the temple of crystal tears
poison and death begin

Death, I will not bow down
to a word that means so little
Though you tear at me inside
I'm worn but still not brittle

I live for the remaining hope
That I'm not the only one
Who fades within my own shadows
Afraid of the raging sun

thank you dark princess!

xxleisaxx

Awe darn, forgot i've been so busy. I'll write one right now though, sorry!

-Jenna.

it's ok. i thougth for a moment that u forgot...lol

The Fourth Drink Instinct.

With a fake ID and her Daddy's credit card,
She steps her innocent feet inside the bar.
Heads turn and eyes watch from all around,
As she sits down and orders up the first round.

Shot after shot she drinks her past away,
Drowning her tears as the bartender turns to say;
"Girly, you're way too young to be in here,
And this life that you've chosen, isn't the best dear."

And she looks up with blood shot eyes and slurs;
"This habit of mine, it used to be one of hers,
And some would say it's what I'm destined to be,
For Mr.Jose Cuervo has sure grown on me."

And she stoops her head and asks for one more,
As the gentleman watches her from beside the door.
And later tonight, he will find that bed so easily,
But in the morning, he'll lose all credibility.

The fourth drink instinct starts to kick in,
As she feels his breath dampen upon her skin.
She stumbles toward the door as tears fall down,
Ending her night with a stranger and a bottle of Crown.

© Jenna Elphick
November 19, 2006

__ Lol, yeah I've just been really busy helping some friends that were just in a car crash and stuff, but here it is, I wrote it as quick as I could. Thanks for waiting and all. __

-Jenna.

welcome!

so..is the contest like..over?

yep...i'll judge it on monday!

here it goes the one you've been waiting for!!!!!

Caio i think ur having a great day cuz u won first place and the other poem contest thing....lol

[1] CIAO
[2] WHO CARES
[3] SYMETRICALLY UNIQUE

congrats! and leave ur titles!!!

xxleisaxx

2nd sweet thnx:)

Congrats everyone :]

OMG!!!! *faints*
I won first! =O
That song meant so much to me and I chose it because I knew that I could put so much emotion from my past into it... Leisa, thank you so much! You are a DOLL! =) *hugs*

Ciao xx

Titles:

Its Just You And Me
The Secret Behind Holding A Hand
Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again
Nothing Else Matters
To The Person Who Knows What NEM Means

Thanks again!!

ur welcome! and i will r/r/c the poems this week. hopefully at 23

xxleisaxx

i'll do this maybe somewhere next week, i'm too tired and sleepy, and have homework left to do. srry