Entertain me with your best poem in one category

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    Passion within (Love Poem)
    by Italian Stallion

    Passion within
    My heart I see
    The light from above
    Oh what could it be?

    Passion within
    Your smile I see
    Nothing but the beauty of thee
    Thee who holds the key to me

    Passion within
    My eyes I see
    The wonderful girl
    That is soon to be

    Passion within
    My soul I feel
    Nothing but your warmth near
    Oh how I wish it was so real

    Passion within
    Loving minds
    As I kneel before you
    And watch what Love finds

    My heart is beating
    Oh so fast
    The presence of you
    Makes it last

    My eyes wondering
    All over the place
    I can't stop, but to look
    At your face

    Your smile is so big
    Your eyes are watering
    You let out a sigh
    And say, "where have you been?

    I've been searching
    Every second, minute, week, month and year
    To find the perfect man
    I liked to be near

    Here you are
    Making my dreams come true
    You're everything a women wants
    And that's why I love you dear
    Of course I'll marry you"

    © Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

  • Tine
    18 years ago

    Summer's Come (about life)
    by Tine Deliën.

    Desperation in this room
    filled with sun
    screaming for attention
    a cry in need for hope

    Smile so filled with longing
    leaves floating on a breeze
    falling on the ground
    suddenly all alone

    hunted by a fading dream
    keeping you away from sleep
    as the day goes
    and the night begins

    a shade on water surface
    troubling the calmth
    of everything
    showing the agony on his face

    You lay asleep
    upon this bed of twigs
    unknowing of all
    nobody notices you but me

    It lasted for a tear
    upon a snowy field
    but now it has gone
    leaving you in dispair

    You don't seem to know
    what's happening now
    you sleep so tightly
    I hope you'll be awoken

    Summer has gone
    and comes again
    to show this land of hope
    what it's living for

    x

  • Michael D Nalley
    18 years ago

    Although this poem, from my perspective, could fit any of your categories I am going to enter this under reflective poem When I wrote this poem I was very infatuated with a women whom informed me that she had been treated for the same mental disorder that my then brother in law suffers from
    I was desperately trying to get her into my life at the same time my sister was tying to get the manic-depressive she had been married to for forty years out of her life
    The title Free Bird was significant because my ex brother in law went by the nick name Hawkeye.

    Also in a love poem I wrote for the woman that is was in love with, I referred to her as the bird of paradise
    When I read the poem to my sister whom was getting divorced she could not hold back her tears even though she could not resist a chuckle at the humorous ending.
    I can also relate to the bird because I was warned I would feel the pain of a broken heart

    Free Bird [Reflective Poem]

    Once there was a bird, hopping with a broken wing
    Hopping through the forest, the bird began to sing
    No fear of the trouble, its carelessness would bring
    Just enjoying the beauty of the trees and everything

    In the bliss of the bird’s singing it didn’t notice at all
    A dangerous pit, where the poor bird was about to fall
    Indeed it did fall in the pit; and in fear it did call
    O my Lord, someone help me, Quickly! Do not stall

    The Lord looked down mercifully, and an angel was sent,
    To rescue this poor bird from an unfortunate incident
    But in the bliss of its falling, the bird became content
    Mesmerized by free falling, it forgot about its descent

    And when the angel caught the bird it demanded to be free
    It said I am enjoying the bliss of free falling! Don’t you see?
    Please let me fall just a little longer then you can rescue me
    Don’t you know how wonderful the feeling of falling can be?

    The angel, in its wisdom, knew this was a very bad mistake
    But now the angel was helpless; and its heart began to ache
    Because free will is a gift from God, even an angel cannot take
    The angel knew it had to let the poor bird fall, for heaven’s sake

    The angel pleaded with the bird; but its pleadings were in vain
    The angel had to let go of the bird. There was no time to explain
    After enjoying the brief fall, the bird hit bottom, and felt the pain
    Then replied; Lord I asked for an angel’
    But I should have asked for a brain’.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    It was hard to choose, for I wasn't quite sure how you would feel about this poem. But, it is my favorite and I felt my best written in this category. But, for all I know, I may not be able to write a proper love poem. I want critism and I want to know how to do better. I value your opinion. Thus, I will post this. Enjoy.
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    The Love of Fate {Love}

    Protest against a simple love,
    Sweet and charished from above,
    Dolled eyes through love of great,
    Finding that you mustn't wait.
    From above does greedy eyes steal,
    Something that does not seem quite real.
    Tragically wishing upon star stricken moons,
    For doves are touching you this noon.
    A simple love so touching, gracious, benign,
    Cannot, willnot, give up by cruel time.
    Feast your eyes upon something so great;
    The love of loves, the love of fate.

    Held in your arms, a thought is displayed,
    Is this truth, forever delayed?
    Gracious touch simple by shouting sound,
    Everywhere around you this love is found.
    High above the sky is a magestic creation,
    Where fate of love makes a splendid sensation.
    Falling grandiosely to gentle song,
    You must carssess it simply and strong.
    Just feast your eyes upon something so great;
    The love of loves, the love of fate.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Tammy
    18 years ago

    Rise Above (poem about life)

    Sometimes life is good
    at times it may be bad
    always live and learn
    from every experience had.
    Look for the good
    in everything you see
    once you master this
    your heart will be free.
    Never let life's worries
    get the best of you
    no matter what you face
    you'll always make it through.
    Don't look at where you are
    but where you're going instead
    put your toubles behind you
    focus on what's ahead.
    There's nothing in this life
    you can not rise above
    if your heart is pure
    and overflowing with love.

  • Deana
    18 years ago

    Armed and dangerous
    They roam the streets
    Gangs of children
    Learning deceit

    A family of violence
    Loyal and true
    Dying for colors
    Red and blue

    How many children have to die
    How many try to be too strong to cry
    Murders hidden,thieves in the night
    A world with new rules of wrong and right

    A twelve year old
    With a gun in his hand
    Destroys a family
    Takes down a man

    Prison bound
    Before they`re sixteen
    Minds filled with hate
    From the things they have seen

    Eyes with no feeling
    Just anger and hate
    Walking our streets
    Lying in wait

    How do we turn back
    The hands of time
    Where children were children
    With innocent minds

  • swill
    18 years ago

    Category: Sad

    Night
    ---------------------------------------------------------

    Darkness.
    Sinking around my skull, and slowly
    submerging me in its velvetiness.
    Penetrating and permeating.
    It enters like cold molten lead
    and drowns me in its heaviness.
    It numbs me, or maybe hones too much-
    I do not know.

    I can't breathe.

    The night wind howls, but I think it feels
    like music to me; until it dies down.
    Stillness welcomes the pain that hides;
    but it seems to savor the veil it wears.
    Or could it be that it cannot expose
    a face it hasn't seen?
    I do not know.

    I can't breathe.

    The raw, stark sky screams
    of needed frankness;
    and I start to yearn for clouds
    just because the truth lacerates.
    When I cannot feel love,
    the moon glares down and taunts
    rosy thoughts; but I don't fret-
    you can't jeer at corpses.

    I still can't breathe.
    (maybe I don't want to)

    ---------------------------------------------------------

    All Rights Reserved
    Dhaval

  • Misstress
    18 years ago

    -Union of Souls- (Love Poem)
    -Misstress-

    By the moon dappled water
    her smile
    illuminates a garden.
    Circling warmth
    as it traces
    the lines which are about
    to intertwine.

    As the bells warbles
    pensive notes,
    a melody uncoiling
    with every beat of my heart,
    every step she makes,
    closer now
    to where I stand,
    breathless.

    As cold breeze
    stirred the bland air,
    her brown hair breathes life,
    tangled with
    soft Lilac petals
    her skin glistened,
    wafting
    through the pathway,
    the altar and into
    my heart.

    Gently
    as I reach for her hand,
    the creaking sound
    of a new door opening,
    together now,
    our first step we make,
    closer now
    to evermore.

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Chaotic (Sad)
    by Natalie__x.

    Hushed secrets cached beneath septic skin,
    Anemic bones tormented from pain within,
    Enhanced nerves tremble blood streams,
    Tarnished tears gush upon open wounds,
    Chaotic mindset awoke believable dreams.

    Isolated visions engulfed muzzled thoughts,
    Taped skeletal frames escaped triple knots,
    Languished emotions controlled innocence,
    Injected fears revealed unknown past scars,
    Chaotic mindset hushed in complete silence.

    Narcotic fumes consumed troubled airways,
    Fainting portraits stood strong on displays,
    Collapsed future stared fear into the eyes,
    Regretful memories flashed beyond lights,
    Chaotic mindset prayed for final goodbyes.

    7th September 2006
    Copyright (C) Natalie

  • John (Mr. Whuppy)
    18 years ago

    Poem about life (one of my older poems)
    by John

    WAR
    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    The wars are still around us
    Soldiers fight on soil
    Is it just religion
    or is it all for oil

    Tanks and guns are firing
    weapons glow red hot
    innocent people dying
    little children shot

    Israel invades Lebanon
    fighting terror they say
    I just don't believe it
    so to all gods I pray

    that man will soon see reason
    and there will come a day
    when those in power do answer
    and to the people say

    We just made terror an excuse
    to fight for our own greed
    It's oil and land we are after
    to satisfy our need

    So come the day of judgment
    Will they be judged true
    did they fight for justice
    for those like me and you

    did they fight for justice
    for innocents to save
    or did they fight for possession
    for the things they crave

    only they can answer
    only they can know
    we make our own judgments
    they will have to show

    will they all be innocent
    are they squeaky clean
    these worldly men that lead us
    the truth will soon be seen

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    The Shop on Willow Street [Children's Poem]
    By: Twisted Heart

    Inside a shop on Willow street
    You may stop and chance to meet
    The man who has collected things
    From lands that he has seen.
    Unique, they are, in design
    Critiqued by him, over time
    Funny looking, ordinary, things

    He's seen so many things its clear
    From dreams inside his mind, they rear
    He'll change simple little notions
    With strange goo from a potion.
    Resisting all the common parts
    Persisting, as he wields his art
    As he puts his hands in motion.

    With grace of hand that never strays
    He'll take a vase that's made of clay
    And slap a little of his goo
    A map he'll trace as he goes through.
    Omitting all the mundane things
    Submitting it with lively rings
    Then places it upon a shelf for you.

    No longer does he sell his art
    Much stronger, he, to be a part
    Of all that is less ordinary
    And called a man extraordinary.
    Redeeming things with simple tools
    Beaming like a silly fool
    He proudly dances as you tarry.

    He'll gladly show you all his treasures
    And madly glow with his pleasures
    As you ooh and aahh in glee
    Its true you'll leave more happily.
    You'll swear you'll return one day
    It's hard to tear yourself away
    From the shop on Willow Street.

  • katie!
    18 years ago

    It's my favourite recent.

    To be a Touretter (Poem about Life)
    by Katie!

    Reflecting, As I do so often, whilst listening to Harry Potter
    On tape
    I realized that I hate
    I really do hate
    Having Tourettes

    I can't say it's anything novel, to be coughing whilst trying to talk
    Nor has it come to mind, that it's fun to be twitching while you walk
    In fact it's pretty annoying when I punctuate words with KERBAM
    With a cough and a sniff, a nice POW for good measure and who could forget dear KAZAM

    Thinking, Which is so enjoyable, whilst drinking ovaltine light
    In a mug
    I realized that I hate
    I really do hate
    Having Tourettes

    I'd be lying to say I enjoyed it, that each tic brought my face a new smile
    People staring is never much fun, makes me jerk even more, it's so vile
    When my arm flicks itself to my mouthpiece and my neck pushes up to the sky
    To be honest, it's getting quite tiresome, to be SHOUTING whilst trying to cry

    Hoping, Which is quite pointless, whilst eating mars bars
    From Sainsbury's
    I realized that I hate
    I really do hate
    Having Tourettes

    If I could express it in writing, my poems would be as follows
    I wander POW, lonely as a KERPLAM cloud, BOOM COUGH COUGH NO
    Does it follow an iambic pentameter? Is it brilliant? I hardly think so
    Does it make Shakespeare proud, or Wordsworth applaud, a simple answer would be COUGH NO

    Talking, Which is a passion of mine, Whilst ticking
    With my body
    I realized that I hate
    I really do hate
    Having Tourettes

    *I really do have Tourettes Sydrome

  • Liz
    18 years ago

    I Sent You --- (Religious Poem)
    by Póετε§Š Call Me Glen-Duh!

    Sometimes we curse the wind and rain,
    even the sun that shines so bright.
    We curse the morning when we wake,
    when we can't sleep we curse the night.

    Just sit and think for one quick moment,
    why all these things are sent your way.
    When you hate everything around you,
    someone thinks of you each day.

    That's why I'm writing this today,
    I send this poem with my love.
    And when you get this in your hands,
    you'll realize what I'm speaking of.

    When your day was dark and gloomy,
    I sent the bright rays of the sun.
    To bring a smile to your face,
    to lighten up your days to come.

    When your eyes were full of tears
    I sent the rain to wash them down.
    To keep away all fear from you,
    to wash away that saddened frown.

    But when the rain seemed like too much,
    I told the rainbow to come out.
    To reassure you of my promise,
    of my love you'll never doubt.

    When you were tired, hot, and weary,
    I sent the breeze to kiss your face.
    I made sure it was soft and gentle,
    yet strong enough to leave my trace.

    You were in your room; afraid, alone
    I told the birds to sing to you.
    To send this message through your window;
    my child know, that I love you.

    When the world was lost in endless sin,
    I sent my Son to preach what's true.
    To rescue souls that were lost,
    but years ago...they cursed him too.

    © Glendaliz M.

  • FlirtingWithDeath
    18 years ago

    ~My Protector~ (love)

    It was you who brought me peace
    You swept me off my feet
    You placed your hand upon my heart
    And told me nothing will tear us apart
    You wrapped your arms around my soul
    You made sure that I will never fall

    No tears will shed from my eyes,
    You have never made me cry
    I have no fear when you are near
    Your smile and grace
    Is all I need from you my dear.

    Your voice sings to me
    It makes me want to fly
    Grab my hand lets dance
    Into the starry night sky.

    Forever and ever
    We will be together
    Forever and ever
    You will be my protector.

  • Darth Tater
    18 years ago

    This is a really short poem I wrote once and don't know why. I guess it just reflected my mood at the time.

    Memories in the Mists (reflective)

    As I roll through the memories in my mind
    Twisting and turning through time
    Looking for something I thought I knew

    How things change and stay the same
    How they differ, but keep the name
    My memories, tangled up in blue

    Diving ever deeper down
    But never far from the crown
    Always the same, nothing new

    Finally it comes to me
    How hard it can be
    When everything has flew

    Off to never never land