Disney Contest

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Lol kai, I will get on it right now! Should have it in soon! Thanks Hunn. (:

    -Jenna.

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    No it works, it has the same theme as Lady and the Tramp and the judges have accepted it. =)

  • Suchapoetictradgedy
    18 years ago

    “Lady and the Tramp”

    Lady by day, something everyone
    Figured was true, yet peering deep
    Within, you could see the real woman,
    The façade that hid her life was so immense,
    Soon she even forgot who she was.

    Lady and the Tramp,
    One in the same,
    Lady and the Tramp,
    Forgot to hide it well,
    No longer a lady, only a Tramp.

    Her secrets lie down with her at night,
    Never can she rid her heart of all
    The heaviness it has grown accustomed to
    Knowing, she is no longer who she was
    Supposed to be, no longer a lady.

    Lady and the Tramp,
    One in the same,
    Lady and the Tramp,
    Forgot to hide it well,
    No longer a lady, only a Tramp.

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    Okay, the judging is gonna start as soon as i remove the names from who did what poem and give them to the three judges.
    So good luck everyone and thanks for entering!
    XxXxX

  • *Charisma*
    18 years ago

    just wondering when this would be done by...was looking in the forum and found this a page back...just curious. Thanks!
    Charisma*

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    I wasn't in college yesterday because of something involving my nan so i couldn't collect the votes. I'll be going in this afternoon however.
    Sorry for the delay =(

  • *Charisma*
    18 years ago

    That's fine. No problem. Cool way of deciding the winners!
    Charisma*

  • LiveForHim
    18 years ago

    hmmmm... I want Pinnocio or aristocats

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    Okay Hi.
    I've chased up the judges and i have all the votes in now. (there was numerous people judging so it would be more fair) And the winners are as follows...

    1st 'Peter Pan' (CharismaticCountryGirl) and 'Beauty And The Beast' (ily)
    2nd 'Cinderella' (Lush.Fcuk-*) and 'Robin Hood' (Twisted Heart)
    3rd 'Sleeping Beauty' (Oscar)

    Now if you check the top to see what awards you have won, i would appreciate it if you left me a list of what poems you want me to check out. So it's your choice. =)
    And don't forget, everyone who entered gets a comment on thier choice of poem as well.
    Thanks everyone for participating =)
    *Gem*

  • *Charisma*
    18 years ago

    Oh my Goodness!!!! First place!?!?!?!?! Thank you to all who voted. That is so cool! Thank you so much. I will post the poems when I choose the ones I want. Thanks!
    Charisma*
    LOL just decided to edit this post and show the titles. Mostly I had to choose some you HADN'T already commented on. lol
    In the Shadows of the Sun
    Quivering Tears
    Dodging Bullets
    Lonely Love
    These are some ones I like! But honesty is the best policy when you comment! Thanks.
    Charisma*

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Thanks for the placing! :DD If you could, please do..

    Love Letters and Cigarette Ashes [Italian Sonnet]
    Eaten Alive [Parquette]
    &&
    My Mother [Ode]

    -Jenna.

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    Charisma and Jenna.
    Le comments and le votes are done =)
    I tried to go into depth on each one, but i think i rambled on a few *sheepish grin*
    Thanks for entering and congrats on the placings =)

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    yay i won, send my thanks to all the judges, can you please do

    My Guardian Angel
    Reflection

  • *Charisma*
    18 years ago

    all the comments are greatly appreciated. Thank you for your honest feedback both Gemma and Tara. I did make a correction to one of my poems. Thank you again!
    Charisma*

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    Gemma,

    Thank you so much for 2nd place. Would you please do:

    Invisible
    Is it Passion
    and
    The Christmas Bike [some assembly required]

    Thanks again
    Jeannie

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    Jeannie. I finish work tonight so i'll get right onto your comments when i manage to get home =)