First Round! :]] ENTER!!

  • Leanne
    18 years ago

    don't know if i've missed the deadline but i thought i'd enter anyway =D

    Mum

    So many tears we've cried
    The countless fights we fought
    These things all brought us closer
    Thats one lesson I was taught

    Your laughter gets me smiling
    You wipe away my tears
    I've always been able to share with you
    My deepest darkest fears

    When life knocks me down
    You make me stand up tall
    Thats what family is there for
    To catch us when we fall

    But I am a girl that feels lucky
    Knowing I have someone like you
    Because not only are you my mum
    But also a friend that is true

    You really mean the world to me
    If i lost you I don't know what i'd do
    Just know one things for certain
    My heart would break in two.

  • Jenni Marie
    18 years ago


    To My Little Sister

    All the words in the world
    Could never be combined
    To show how much I love her
    And how I pray she's always fine.

    I could never emphasize how much she means to me
    It is an impossible task
    So there's no point in even trying
    So don't even bother to ask.

    When I stare into those bright blue eyes
    I'm so overcome with love I just want to cry.
    When I play with that beautiful little girl
    I just know one day she's going to stun the world.

    As I said before
    No words could ever be combined
    To show how much
    I love her deep inside.

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    Is this gonna be judged?

  • robin milford
    18 years ago

    u have 17 now so u may judge like u said

  • Teria
    18 years ago

    Winners Are:
    Ian
    Dhaval
    DixieDaisy
    LIsa Carter
    Rocky
    Absolute Sorrow
    Lush.Fcuk
    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    [beloved[
    leanne
    LuvSuxGetDrunk.

    This was the hardest contest I've yet to judge.
    And, they were all very wonderful poems.

    I'll have the rules down for the next round on another post.
    Named:
    SecondRound. :]

    K?
    Good Luck to Everyone.

    ANd, everyone on here will get a comment on the poem they entered. :]
    I'll have them done soon as possible.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Did you change your screen name?? =/

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Yeah, I do alot. :|
    Sorry, I forgot to tell you guys...

  • Bryan
    17 years ago

    i did too, im not absolute sorrow anymore, and congrats to all!!!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    I'm very excited for the next contest.. Thank you for picking me. I enjoyed writing that poem as well; it was for a friend. =]
    Congrats to everyone else as well!

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Daisy if you do
    17 years ago

    Thank You, I am honored to be going to the second round.

    Dixie