Give Me Your Best

Hey thank you for the comments - they were very helpful =) As for the subjects of those poems, well I only wanted to see what you thought about my vampire poems so that's why they are all about the same thing, except for Lacrymosa which was different.
Anyway, thank you again =)

Thank you so much for choosing my poem for 1st place. It was one of my favorites to write. As for the poems that I would like you to comment on:

1] Something Killed Me, Inside
2] When Death Comes Knocking
3] I'm Waiting
4] Faded Whispers
5] Night Candles

The two I wish you to critique are:

1] The Oracle of Dawn [A Raven's Song]
2] Shadowed Secrets

Shadowed Secrets is rather long [really long] and if you get bored before you finish it, believe me, I understand. Again, thanks for choosing my poem and so glad you enjoyed it.

Happiness
Jeannie

Oh, I am so, so sorry! The poems were very well written, though... I hope I didn't offend you.

Twisted Heart--
You are more than welcome. It was amazing all in all. Great job. I"ll get on the comments asap.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

hahaha wrong one! heehee
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