My second contest

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This one is gonna be a bit different. I'm gonna have 4 topics. And then choose one of their topics. Contest ends when all topics are done or by the 8th dec.

Rules:
New or old
No cursing

Theres gonna be one winner from each topic n one HM.
Winners get 5 comments each. Hm gets one comment.

Friendship:
You are my best friend (Done)
Bestfriends stick together (Done)
I love you like a sister (Done)
I'll stand by you (Done)

Love:
I cant live without you (Done)
You mean the world to me (Done)
I'd do anything for you (Done)
Please dont leave me (Done)

Depression:
Just leave me alone (Done)
Something killed me inside (Done)
I just want to lay down and never wake up (Done)
My tears are running heavy (Done)

Humour:
I thought I saw a clown (Reserved: Afraid of the Dark)
I dreamt of you last night(Done)
My teeth are falling out (Done)
The dolphins will eat me (Done)

Good luck!

Can I please reserve My tears are running heavy? (:

-Jenna.

Done!

I want "Just leave me alone"

can i reserve I thought i saw a clown please. . .
cheers
laura

Such a difficult decision.. pondering friendship or depression.. errmmm think I've written enough depressing poems recently, so can I please reserve 'You are my best friend'

Can i reserve 'you mean the world to me' please? x

Can I have "I just want to lay down and never wake up" Please?

My first time doing this on here :)

All reserved!

Depression- Something Killed Me Inside. Please

Something Killed Me, Inside...
By: Twisted Heart

Something killed me, Inside the darken tomb I lie
No words were spoke to me, no form of an alibi
My words were crushed just as fast as my breath was taken
Sending ripples of the death, upon the wounds forsaken.

Something killed me, I see the reaper drawing near
His shadow casts a dampened depth, within my haunted fear
He reaches out with bony fingers, taking hold my soul
Leaving me chastened by the winds, hampered by the cold.

Something killed me, My eyes, now, turn inside
Sifting through the memories, that my mind no longer hide
Seeking recollections, of a thought that I can find
Forever lost within, the fatal trappings of my mind.

Something killed me, I see the darkness fall
Inside my mind, the lamp of life, is extinguished by it's call
My heart gives one last thump before it slowly dies
Leaving me inside this shell, without a place to hide.

love i can't live without you please!

can i have please don't leave me?

this ends on my bday if it runs that long:) WOO

Please Don’t Leave Me

Baby, I know you love me, I know you care,
Please don’t leave me, if you do it’s not fair.
I know deep down inside, the flame is burning,
I know you can feel it too, I see your body yearning.

Baby, don’t leave me, it’s not too late,
Give us a chance, I think we’re fate.
Babe, I’ll be good, I swear I will,
I loved you then, and I love you still.

Please don’t leave me, I’m on my knees,
Give me one more chance, PLEASE?
I love you so much, and I couldn’t take,
You leaving me, my heart would break.

Sweetie, please don’t leave me,
Love is written on your face ever so sweetly.
Hold me in your arms, tomorrow will be all right,
Just take me back, and no more will we fight.

You Are My Best Friend

It brings me to tears when I think of You,
the amazing person that You are.
Out of everybody I have ever met,
You are the greatest one by far.

Trying to explain how much You mean,
I don't know where to start.
All the words in the dictionary,
can't describe how I feel in my heart.

Who would have thought on that friday night,
at that party where we first met.
Through coincidence, chance or just pure luck,
a strongest friendship in gold would be set?

We've had our fair share of ups and downs,
challenges thrown at us through the years.
There's nobody else I'd rather share all this with,
whether it's laughter, pain, heartache or tears.

Secrets been told, We've spent many nights crying,
helping each other stay strong.
Trying to make sense of unanswered questions,
of how life at times is so wrong.

Laughing so loud at the silliest things,
until we found it hard to breathe.
Still bringing things up and giggling,
from past memories that'll not leave.

Four shoulders between us of which are all drenched,
from the millions of tears we have cried.
Knowing all there's to know, inside and out,
and still we stand strong, side by side.

I would do absolutely anything in my power,
to stop all the tears that You cry.
Knowing You would do the same for me,
which is why for You, I would die.

I'd never think twice about placing my life,
in control of Your trustworthy hands.
You'd only do right, would hold my life tight,
knowing all my fears, secrets and plans.

If this was to be my last day of living,
if my life had to come to an end.
I could only die smiling with You by my side,
because Carla.. You are my best friend.

I'll do the humor one "My teeth are falling out"

Help me! Oh No!
My tooth fell out of my gum
I held it in my hand
And asked my mommy how come?

She said its part of being young
Our baby teeth will go away
We’ll get stronger and newer ones
They come within months not days

She said to put it under my pillow
And a little man with wings
Will make a surprise visit in my room
And I’d be surprised at what he brings

Mom tied a string to my tooth
Then tied it to the door
Just three weeks later
I had already lost 2 more

I’ve been getting lots of money
The tooth fairy is my best friend
He’ll put a dollar under my pillow
For every tooth I send!

I talked to my Grandma
She said to put my money in a glass
Because I’ll have to buy fake teeth when I’m older
And they’re a pain in the a**

I’m not sure about this tooth business
If Grandma says they won’t come back
I don’t want to have fake teeth
Perhaps I should try to keep my teeth intact

Best Friends Stick Together

And so here comes the reason why
I couldn’t understand
Best friends never have to lie…
Don’t let go of my hand

I promised you I would be there
Until now this much is true
With everything that’s happening
My thoughts lead back to you

You found another girl, I know
And I am always glad to see
You are happy that you’ve fell in love
But what happened to me?

No more text messages at night
Saying ‘Sleep tight sunshine’
But that’s okay, I still love you
And I’m getting along fine

And what about those nights
Where I lay there teary eyed
You would sneak into my window
Holding me tight while I cried

And now I only see a vacant glance
But I’m giving you another chance
One day you’ll realize, soon you’ll see
When heartbroken, you’ll run to me

But best friends stick together
Why did you walk away?
I love you and I need you
Please, change your mind and stay

OK get ready I'm going to sound incredibly stupid. . . .

What does HM mean?

I'll Stand By You please!
Charisma*

HM stands for Honourable mention.

I'll Stand By You

When the colors change on the trees,
New seasons come and old ones leave,
When the sun takes the place of the moon,
Just remember, I'll stand by you.

When the stars don't shine bright,
And you're alone out here at night,
When it seems there's no way through,
Just remember, I'll stand by you.

When photographs fade over time,
And the mountains are too tall to climb,
It seems that life paints only blue,
Just remember, I'll stand by you.

When old friends take a different path,
And you've forgotten where you're at,
To the left or right, you cannot choose,
Just remember, I'll stand by you.

Years can break the best of friends,
Who swore their bond would never end.
Trials tear the strongest of hearts,
And you're left to watch it fall apart.

But true friends know that tests make strong,
What false friends leave to move along.
So when these problems come into view,
Just remember, I'll stand by you.

By: Charisma*

I'll take I love you like a sister.

I love you like a sister.

My frowns not always perfect.
My smile hardly seems to fit.
My tears fall way too much.
And, love breaks me at the touch.

My dreams shatter continually.
And, new years resolutions are broken annually.
My hairs always a wreck,
And, I have that hideous rash upon my neck.

My eyes are never the same color.
And, boyfriends are one after another.
My teeth always shine way too bright.
And, my nose gets glossy, almost giving off light.

My mouth is a never ending thing.
And, my attitude is rarely the same.
I give off dirty looks without even knowing.
And, I my love has a weird way of showing.

I tend to smoke too much while under stress.
Yet, you're my friend, and at that the best.
You've looked past all my disappointments..
So, I love you like a sister, that's heaven sent.

I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT YOU

inside I'm hurting
and no one can see
i still have the feeling
that we were meant to be

i wish and dream
but nothing has happened
i cry and scream
because i can't pretend
(not anymore, not anymore)

i can't live without you
you're made just for me
i want to be with you
only if you can see
just give me another chance
and i can prove to you
we can still have one last dance
and we're meant to be, it's true

give me your arms to hold me tight
give me the feeling, that feels so right
give me your lips that will be with me forever
give me your words that we'll always be together

i can't live without you
you're made just for me
i want to be with you
only if you can see
just give me another chance
and i can prove to you
we can still have one last dance
and we're meant to be, it's true

let's live together like nobody exist
just both of us alone in our own world
so I'll stop cutting this scarred, bruised wrist
and you can call me your only girl

call me your love like you used to do
hold hands while everybody see
that we're together me and you
forever and ever...we'll be happy

i can't live without you
you're made just for me
i want to be with you
only if you can see
just give me another chance
and i can prove to you
we can still have one last dance
and we're meant to be, it's true

xxleisaxx

bump

My Tears Are Running Heavy.

Torn photographs are
Scattered along the bare floor
As I pick up the bottle.

Slamming back my past
With old Mr.Daniel's and
My tears are running heavy.

© Jenna Elphick
December 3, 2006

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The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.

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**Not very good, but twas my first attempt at a Sedoka lol. **

-Jenna.

Only 2 days left.

unreserve me, sorry.

I will take bryan reserve spot got the perfect poem

Sleeping to Never Awaken
People laugh at me
when I cut.
They don't realize
I am trying to escape and failing.
They see the scars on my wrist
I don't bother hiding them.
When someone takes my attemps serious,
They put me in a padded room
and prescribe all kinds of pills.
After a short stay
they send me home with my pills.
Here I am with all those pills.
I'll swallow handfuls
then I'll have myescape.
I'll go to sleep to never awaken again.

I'll leave this open for another week or two.

thanks for letting me in

ok i'm gonna keep this open till Sunday, my time.

I'd do anything for you

Saw you today,
as you passed me by,
on the street.
i just wish
i never had
the chance to meet.
You.

Bumped my in the shoulder,
never even looked
Up at me.
Don't act as though
you couldn't see.
Liar

Damn, i friggin hate,
You so much, its true
and want to retaliate
on you.

Don't look back.
Keep on
your straight and narrow-
Path.
Honesty-
Thats what you lack.
Liar.

Oh, well,
Sure-I'm totally swell.
I feel like i am
Burning in hell!
Now i am
The liar.

Dammit its true
Isnt it?
i was such
a fricken fool.
I thought you loved me,
wanted to be with me,
Cherish me.
You didn't ever.
Liar.

You know what's
the Saddest part?
In my sad lonely heart,
I know that its true-
No matter what
you tell me or do
Is simple-
I'd do anything for you.

just wrote it hope ya like it. -haha. not my best.. at all.

x.x:Lauren

ok i'm gonna leave this open till all the topics are done.

..come on ppl this shoulda ended on my bday!!!!!!! lets finish it lol im anxious

OH DANG sorry forgot i reserved one >< Sarah I talk to you everynight you should of said something!!!!! ok i'm working on it now!

~Just leave me alone~

Curled up by myself
A hard outer shell,
Tears fall down
Just leave me alone.
No smile upon my face
Blood shot eyes
I am such a disgrace.
God has ignored my cry
No guarding angel
By my side.
I am disowned
By my own heart
It has gone and left me forlorn
Every night I cry
Please….Just leave me alone.

can i plz reserve: I dreamt of you last night

I dreamt of you last night

I dreamt of you last night
With tears running down my side,
Your eyes so blue,
Your hair so blonde

Your wife not there,
All of them gone,

Dead,
I killed them,
I had to - for the sake of my own heart,

We had a life you know,
But then it fell apart –

You married that,
That
Thing,
On her finger you put a pretty ring

She cried
She begged,
She kicked
And screamed

My heart stone cold,
Her face grew old,
with Worry and fear.

I did it all for you my dear.

But then I woke up –
And I admit that I’m sad,
I know,
Because I dreamt ‘bout you last night