KT's first contest

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Changed again- this is taking forever and I'm going crazy, it's ending on dec. 10 noon. no questions ok...i'll let you keep your reservations but if they're not in by the 10th then i'm sorry

Rules-
1- must be new, i want to challenge you
2- keep it semi-short( more then 10 lines less then 50)
3-try to keep minimal cursing

I'm going to have four topics and each topic can have five people writing on it. But make them origional. I love depth and feeling in wat i read so helpful hints there. dead line wil end when all 20 spots are taken or until Dec. 15. you can reserve but if i don't have the poems after 3 days of reserve then i'll put it back up for grabs. also i prefer love poems but it's fine if it isn't, just know ur chances r prolly slimmer.

topics

Losing someone special
1. Twisted Heart (done)
2. Happy Endings are Fake (done)
3.Charisma (done)
4.Pip (done)
5. Who cares (done)
Missing the one beside you
1. Leisa (done)
2. Me
3. Jenna
4. Emily (done)
5.
Best you ever had
1. Gemma (done)
2. Bryan (done)
3.Champ (done)
4.
5.
Regretting saying yes
1. Sarah (done)
2.
3.
4.
5.
extra
1. Cellerina (done)
2. Rocky (done)
3. Lauren (done)
4.

Reserve me a spot under 'Losing someone special', please.

Thanks
Jeannie

Can I reserve a sopt under Losing someone special?

Thanks

losing someone special (im gonna do it like a broken relationship if that's ok.)
Charisma*

Can I reserve a spot for losing some one special please? (I'm going to do losing my uncle to cancer I hope that's ok) I should have it to you before Friday.

Pip xxx

My life was falling apart
One inch at a time
Step by step
It was like a backwards climb

But you were there for me
You helped me through
All my problems and pain
There's nothing you wouldn't do

Now my life is falling apart again
Because you left me here all alone
I dont know what made you leave
But I should have known

My life is no longer complete
I am no longer cheerful
Because today
I lost someone special

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Hope you like it.

lol every1 else said the topic i want...but i wanna b special...-sigh- o well..can i have mising someone special? lol

missing someone special isalready filled up! crap! lol. umm....how bout missing the one beside you! thankz!

xxleisaxx

Darn the one I wanted was too. Can I please have missing someone special?

-Jenna.

Can I reserve a spot for ''missing the one beside you''... I'll try my best to get it in...

Can i reserve one under "Best you ever had"

can you reserve one under "losing someone special" please

Best you ever had. :]
PLEASE & THANKS!

You've Ripped the Heart Out of Me [losing someone special]
By: Twisted Heart

Another day has gone by, Night is now upon me
The moon is sending teardrops to comfort faithfully
Upon the edge of sorrow there comes a sweet embrace
That takes away the memories that time can not erase.

In slumber, dreams seem distant, there is no alibi
The desire of conviction, that the heart cannot deny
Soon finds a place among the stars that shine within my soul
Fallen on the heartache of a pain felt long ago.

My thoughts have traced a path inside my troubled mind
With only emptiness there is an open wound to find
The barriers been breached by a simple memory
Shaken by the mindless thoughts of love eternally.

Faith has found resistance by a heart that lost the war
Stumbled in persistence it now lays upon the floor
Of souls that drown inside the many pools of empty dreams
Scattered in the ashes, when you ripped my heart from me.

Best you ever had. :]

I've lost my way, in this unmemorable world.
I've lost my battles, armor and sword.
I've lost my dreams, hopes and way.
I've lost it all, but my love for you shall stay.

I've drifted oh so far from the homeland.
I've mounted upon the dusty white sand.
With thoughts of you floating through my mind.
Oh, how home I'm lingering to find.

I'm searching, in me, for the best.
Leaving behind all the rest.
I'm becoming all you want me to be.
Just so I can make you happy.

I've lost my dreams, hopes, and even my way.
But, baby my love for you shall stay.
Forever and ever.. It shall not end.
Even through the storms, my love shall accend.

And, I promise you..
I'll be the best you ever had.

This one goes under 'Regretting Saying Yes'

Go away. Regret.

You looked so perfect in my eyes
Different from all the other guys
I thought we could make this be
And now,
I drown in misery…

You took my hand, promising truth
But I felt lost…And I was used
Now I lie here; black tears falling
I hate you. And you keep calling
Go away.
Mistake.
Regret.
I wish I never told you yes.

can i reserve a spot

IN THE END

So
here in the end
i am
falling
crying
grieving
my hearts gone
so cold now
frozen tears
it is weeping
and though even
entombed in sadness
my soul still marches
across the night sky
laughing blackened tears
it is yearning
for my angel
left behind
so distant
i wonder
if she still hears
my haunting cry
i love you
i love you
i love you
i scream
across this night

Missing the one beside you reseve, please.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Leaving Me Crying (losing someone special)

Watching you go is slowly killing me inside
To see the pain you suffer, it just isn't right
I find myself crying, though you're still here.
One day you won't be, and that's my greatest fear.

So I soak up the moments I still have with you.
And regret the ones I lost when I had better things to do.
I know there are things I can never make up for,
And still you loved me even all the more.

This only makes it harder to accept that you'll be gone.
How am I supposed to get up and keep moving on?
You've been here my entire life in many memories.
One day I'll make new ones and you won't be with me.

When I have a question, where do I run too?
For all of these years, that person's been you.
When I have a fear, who will chase it away?
I'm shrinking by the minute, dying by the day.

How many I love you's can I fit in before you go?
There will never be enough, and sadly this I know.
For the sake of my heart, and the thoughts in my mind,
I'll say I love you, one final time.

By: Charisma*
I decided to do it as losing someone to death instead...I can relate to it.

ok LOSING SOMEONE SPECIAL IS FULL!!! but i have 4 free extra openings that u can claim on that topic or ne other one that is full u might want

Jenna and Who Cares did you mean missing the one beside you or losing someone special???

yes Rocky just under wat topic

i'll take Missing the one beside you. please o:)

Edit. I can't have the one I reserved... I've become too busy. Sorry. Forgive me. =[

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I meant missing the one beside you, please. (:

-Jenna.

I'll have mine posted by tonight or tomorrow.
Great contest =)

is this ok? it's technically losing someone special..like a boyfriend...BUT..not them like dying..idk what u meant exactly. sry if this isnt right..lemme know

Loveless Night

Here I lay alone in my room,
Waiting to reach my lonely doom.
Wondering when it'll finally arrive,
Then death can take me in it's strive.

You left me; you said it's over,
How can it be that you love her?
I thought I was special, but I'm wrong,
Did you even like me all along?

I remember when you told me you loved me,
Those three words made me so happy.
Held me in your arms and protected my heart,
Told me you loved me, from the start.

Well then, baby, why'd you leave?
As I lay here, wiping the tears on my sleeve.
It's not fair you left me for my friend,
So, baby, this is where the story ends.

Another loveless night, thought they were gone,
But the lord knows that I'm always wrong.
Well, baby, you can have her, though I'll miss you.
Someday, I hope, that you will miss me too.

Yes another loveless night, here I lay alone,
You broke my heart and cast into stone.
I'll be fine, but I love you, but I will not cry.
Have fun with my friend, your girlfriend...

I guess this is...goodbye.

i promise i'll do this tomorrow! thnx

Losing You Darryl

Darryl I remember the way we used to joke
about how you wouldn't come home when I was born
or how I got you with the coffee

Most of the time you had a smoke lit up
none of us really minded
we would've if we knew

when you had cancer the first time
we were worried out of our minds
how did we know it would come back

loosing you Darryl made me incomplete
the pain still shows even after this long
i know you are happy now but it was so sad loosing you.
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Dedicated to Darryl McCallum. Died 20th July 2006 from tumors caused by smoking. May he rest in peace.

Pip xxx

Xx Best You Ever Had xX

You say I’m the best you ever had
In friendship, love and trust
And that the feelings you have for me
Are so much more than lust

You say I help you through bad times
And make everything all right
I keep you happy through the day
And hold you through the night

You say I own your heart and soul
And keep them locked with mine
And that there’s nothing you like more
Than our hands intertwined

You say you need me desperately
And you love me more than life
You gave me that special ring
To symbol becoming your wife

You say it’s us against the world
And we’re surely going to win
Because we have a love that’s true
And burns deep from within

You say we’re meant to be together
It’s written as destiny and fate
You say I’m the best you ever had
And it’s because I’m your soul mate ©

*Gem*

(God, that was hard. Damn writers block! =(

Missing the one beside me

I'm missing the one beside me
The one I love so much
I feel we're sitting miles apart
Even though our shoulders touch

I shouldn't be so happy
Why do I feel this good?
We're sitting together as best friends do
Though I would be more if I could

Everything he ever does
Every clever thing he says
Every powerful moment between us
Simply takes my breath away

I cherish each memory we share
And write it down in a book
I can open it up whenever
In the quiet, I'll take a good look

All these good things cover the bad;
Every moment I want to frown
I miss him so much even though
He's there beside me, sitting down

I miss the way he would give a hug
When I needed one so badly
I miss the way he'd smile at me
When my head hung down so sadly

I miss the way he made me feel
When he was telling a story
I miss the way he gave me life
And let me take the glory

I miss the way he'd whisper to me
Tell me secrets no one knew
I miss the way he'd laugh as I fell
But he would help me back up too

Now I'm missing the one beside me
The one I really do care
I feel we're as close as friends can be
Yet he doesn't even know I'm there

xx-hope this works!

missing the one beside me

i'm missing you and i'm here all alone
up in the tree i don't want to go home
there's nothing to do but play back the memories
how i loved you so much and who's still the one i miss

we haven't talked for so long because i'm too scared
because all i know is now you don't care
right now you might be thinking about someone else
who's better than me, who hasn't fell

the one who's perfect and made just for you
who you might actually think about and pay attention to
the one you'll never leave, the one you'll love
who's going to be beside you no matter what

she might be the future and i'm only on the past
the girl who thought this love could last
she'll be there, making you happy
and i'll be here, wishing it was me

xxleisaxx

sorry, i had to resubmit it, it got deleted.

Where You Sleep (Ode)
Bryan

My heart and soul
are what you keep,
so now I worship
where you sleep.

Absolute perfection
I see in your eyes,
as you sleep
my heart forever cries.

Beautifully mastered
how you stole my heart,
sorrowful arrogance
tore it apart.

Without you here
I cant help but weep
so I sit here and pray
where you sleep.

Minutes turn to hours
hours turn to days,
but where you sleep
is where I pray.

Ode is a dedication to a person thing or place that you worship.

Bryan Hunt © 2006

My Poem - You & Me.

If you look really deeply,
Into my dark brown eyes.
You will see the story,
Behind all these lies.
You cut me so deep,
As deep as the sea.
But I will never give up on you,
The way you gave up on me.
There are so many times I've looked at you,
Every time you pass me by.
There are so many times I've cried for you,
Thinking I would die.
I've always loved you,
From the first day of my life.
And every time I don't see you,
It cuts me like a knife.
I care & love you,
Really, I do.
And I've waited for years,
For someone like you.
Baby you're an angel,
An angel from above.
Sent from heaven,
To provide me with love.
But I guess it's all over now,
And we'll never ever be,
The way we were long ago,
When it was just you and me.

I'll take a regreting saying yes slot

"Move it on"

When we started out we were friends
not good ones but friends
I thought you needed some nuk
You took my play serious and for that I am sorry
Iam not sorry for following my heart
even tho it lead me away
You feel I went astray
But I was never yours to begin with
I followed my heart to another
now you sat in pain
feeling sorry for yourself
I left so move on live your life and get over it
If you want a friend for the journey
I may give you that but not much more
I am sorry for your pain
I am sorry you tookme serious
My hearts with another
So get over it and over me

Submit for extra.(it started out for regretting saying yes.. but ichanged it.)

That Fateful Night

They say one night can change you life
And I know that’s true for me.
What happened on that December’s night?
You’ll just have to wait and see.

A met a boy in the spring of `o6,
and I swore he was the one,
The emotions that we shared together,
were simply more vivid than the sin

Inseparable they said we were,
For I never left his side.
Nominated for *Cutest Couple*
I was his, and he was mine.

Finally school was over,
and I could see him every day.
And I did until that fateful night,
Now things will never be the same.

Boiling days and sticky nights,
Simply drifted by my mind,
Nothing seemed to matter,
Without him by my side.

School began up again,
but I simply didn`t care.
I didn`t do any of the work,
and half the time I wasn’t there.

So I guess you probably want to know;
How all this has to do with one night?
Let`s just say it started out with a kiss.
And ended with a blatant lie.

sry wrong one...lol

Writing mine right now, sorry it's taking me so long Hunn.

-Jenna.

bumppp =)