KT's first contest

  • DarkPoetess
    18 years ago

    CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED

    Changed again- this is taking forever and I'm going crazy, it's ending on dec. 10 noon. no questions ok...i'll let you keep your reservations but if they're not in by the 10th then i'm sorry

    Rules-
    1- must be new, i want to challenge you
    2- keep it semi-short( more then 10 lines less then 50)
    3-try to keep minimal cursing

    I'm going to have four topics and each topic can have five people writing on it. But make them origional. I love depth and feeling in wat i read so helpful hints there. dead line wil end when all 20 spots are taken or until Dec. 15. you can reserve but if i don't have the poems after 3 days of reserve then i'll put it back up for grabs. also i prefer love poems but it's fine if it isn't, just know ur chances r prolly slimmer.

    topics

    Losing someone special
    1. Twisted Heart (done)
    2. Happy Endings are Fake (done)
    3.Charisma (done)
    4.Pip (done)
    5. Who cares (done)
    Missing the one beside you
    1. Leisa (done)
    2. Me
    3. Jenna
    4. Emily (done)
    5.
    Best you ever had
    1. Gemma (done)
    2. Bryan (done)
    3.Champ (done)
    4.
    5.
    Regretting saying yes
    1. Sarah (done)
    2.
    3.
    4.
    5.
    extra
    1. Cellerina (done)
    2. Rocky (done)
    3. Lauren (done)
    4.

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    Reserve me a spot under 'Losing someone special', please.

    Thanks
    Jeannie

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve a sopt under Losing someone special?

    Thanks

  • *Charisma*
    18 years ago

    losing someone special (im gonna do it like a broken relationship if that's ok.)
    Charisma*

  • Miss Pipp
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve a spot for losing some one special please? (I'm going to do losing my uncle to cancer I hope that's ok) I should have it to you before Friday.

    Pip xxx

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    My life was falling apart
    One inch at a time
    Step by step
    It was like a backwards climb

    But you were there for me
    You helped me through
    All my problems and pain
    There's nothing you wouldn't do

    Now my life is falling apart again
    Because you left me here all alone
    I dont know what made you leave
    But I should have known

    My life is no longer complete
    I am no longer cheerful
    Because today
    I lost someone special

    -----------------------------------
    Hope you like it.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    lol every1 else said the topic i want...but i wanna b special...-sigh- o well..can i have mising someone special? lol

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    missing someone special isalready filled up! crap! lol. umm....how bout missing the one beside you! thankz!

    xxleisaxx

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Darn the one I wanted was too. Can I please have missing someone special?

    -Jenna.

  • Void
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve a spot for ''missing the one beside you''... I'll try my best to get it in...

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    Can i reserve one under "Best you ever had"

  • Cellerina
    18 years ago

    can you reserve one under "losing someone special" please

  • Teria
    18 years ago

    Best you ever had. :]
    PLEASE & THANKS!

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    You've Ripped the Heart Out of Me [losing someone special]
    By: Twisted Heart

    Another day has gone by, Night is now upon me
    The moon is sending teardrops to comfort faithfully
    Upon the edge of sorrow there comes a sweet embrace
    That takes away the memories that time can not erase.

    In slumber, dreams seem distant, there is no alibi
    The desire of conviction, that the heart cannot deny
    Soon finds a place among the stars that shine within my soul
    Fallen on the heartache of a pain felt long ago.

    My thoughts have traced a path inside my troubled mind
    With only emptiness there is an open wound to find
    The barriers been breached by a simple memory
    Shaken by the mindless thoughts of love eternally.

    Faith has found resistance by a heart that lost the war
    Stumbled in persistence it now lays upon the floor
    Of souls that drown inside the many pools of empty dreams
    Scattered in the ashes, when you ripped my heart from me.

  • Teria
    18 years ago

    Best you ever had. :]

    I've lost my way, in this unmemorable world.
    I've lost my battles, armor and sword.
    I've lost my dreams, hopes and way.
    I've lost it all, but my love for you shall stay.

    I've drifted oh so far from the homeland.
    I've mounted upon the dusty white sand.
    With thoughts of you floating through my mind.
    Oh, how home I'm lingering to find.

    I'm searching, in me, for the best.
    Leaving behind all the rest.
    I'm becoming all you want me to be.
    Just so I can make you happy.

    I've lost my dreams, hopes, and even my way.
    But, baby my love for you shall stay.
    Forever and ever.. It shall not end.
    Even through the storms, my love shall accend.

    And, I promise you..
    I'll be the best you ever had.

  • Sarah Ann
    18 years ago

    This one goes under 'Regretting Saying Yes'

    Go away. Regret.

    You looked so perfect in my eyes
    Different from all the other guys
    I thought we could make this be
    And now,
    I drown in misery…

    You took my hand, promising truth
    But I felt lost…And I was used
    Now I lie here; black tears falling
    I hate you. And you keep calling
    Go away.
    Mistake.
    Regret.
    I wish I never told you yes.

  • Rocky
    18 years ago

    can i reserve a spot

    IN THE END

    So
    here in the end
    i am
    falling
    crying
    grieving
    my hearts gone
    so cold now
    frozen tears
    it is weeping
    and though even
    entombed in sadness
    my soul still marches
    across the night sky
    laughing blackened tears
    it is yearning
    for my angel
    left behind
    so distant
    i wonder
    if she still hears
    my haunting cry
    i love you
    i love you
    i love you
    i scream
    across this night

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Missing the one beside you reseve, please.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • *Charisma*
    18 years ago

    Leaving Me Crying (losing someone special)

    Watching you go is slowly killing me inside
    To see the pain you suffer, it just isn't right
    I find myself crying, though you're still here.
    One day you won't be, and that's my greatest fear.

    So I soak up the moments I still have with you.
    And regret the ones I lost when I had better things to do.
    I know there are things I can never make up for,
    And still you loved me even all the more.

    This only makes it harder to accept that you'll be gone.
    How am I supposed to get up and keep moving on?
    You've been here my entire life in many memories.
    One day I'll make new ones and you won't be with me.

    When I have a question, where do I run too?
    For all of these years, that person's been you.
    When I have a fear, who will chase it away?
    I'm shrinking by the minute, dying by the day.

    How many I love you's can I fit in before you go?
    There will never be enough, and sadly this I know.
    For the sake of my heart, and the thoughts in my mind,
    I'll say I love you, one final time.

    By: Charisma*
    I decided to do it as losing someone to death instead...I can relate to it.

  • DarkPoetess
    18 years ago

    ok LOSING SOMEONE SPECIAL IS FULL!!! but i have 4 free extra openings that u can claim on that topic or ne other one that is full u might want

  • DarkPoetess
    18 years ago

    Jenna and Who Cares did you mean missing the one beside you or losing someone special???

  • DarkPoetess
    18 years ago

    yes Rocky just under wat topic

  • emmerz
    18 years ago

    i'll take Missing the one beside you. please o:)

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Edit. I can't have the one I reserved... I've become too busy. Sorry. Forgive me. =[

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    I meant missing the one beside you, please. (:

    -Jenna.

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    I'll have mine posted by tonight or tomorrow.
    Great contest =)

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    is this ok? it's technically losing someone special..like a boyfriend...BUT..not them like dying..idk what u meant exactly. sry if this isnt right..lemme know

    Loveless Night

    Here I lay alone in my room,
    Waiting to reach my lonely doom.
    Wondering when it'll finally arrive,
    Then death can take me in it's strive.

    You left me; you said it's over,
    How can it be that you love her?
    I thought I was special, but I'm wrong,
    Did you even like me all along?

    I remember when you told me you loved me,
    Those three words made me so happy.
    Held me in your arms and protected my heart,
    Told me you loved me, from the start.

    Well then, baby, why'd you leave?
    As I lay here, wiping the tears on my sleeve.
    It's not fair you left me for my friend,
    So, baby, this is where the story ends.

    Another loveless night, thought they were gone,
    But the lord knows that I'm always wrong.
    Well, baby, you can have her, though I'll miss you.
    Someday, I hope, that you will miss me too.

    Yes another loveless night, here I lay alone,
    You broke my heart and cast into stone.
    I'll be fine, but I love you, but I will not cry.
    Have fun with my friend, your girlfriend...

    I guess this is...goodbye.

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    i promise i'll do this tomorrow! thnx

  • Miss Pipp
    18 years ago

    Losing You Darryl

    Darryl I remember the way we used to joke
    about how you wouldn't come home when I was born
    or how I got you with the coffee

    Most of the time you had a smoke lit up
    none of us really minded
    we would've if we knew

    when you had cancer the first time
    we were worried out of our minds
    how did we know it would come back

    loosing you Darryl made me incomplete
    the pain still shows even after this long
    i know you are happy now but it was so sad loosing you.
    ----------------------------------------------------------
    Dedicated to Darryl McCallum. Died 20th July 2006 from tumors caused by smoking. May he rest in peace.

    Pip xxx

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    Xx Best You Ever Had xX

    You say I’m the best you ever had
    In friendship, love and trust
    And that the feelings you have for me
    Are so much more than lust

    You say I help you through bad times
    And make everything all right
    I keep you happy through the day
    And hold you through the night

    You say I own your heart and soul
    And keep them locked with mine
    And that there’s nothing you like more
    Than our hands intertwined

    You say you need me desperately
    And you love me more than life
    You gave me that special ring
    To symbol becoming your wife

    You say it’s us against the world
    And we’re surely going to win
    Because we have a love that’s true
    And burns deep from within

    You say we’re meant to be together
    It’s written as destiny and fate
    You say I’m the best you ever had
    And it’s because I’m your soul mate ©

    *Gem*

    (God, that was hard. Damn writers block! =(

  • emmerz
    18 years ago

    Missing the one beside me

    I'm missing the one beside me
    The one I love so much
    I feel we're sitting miles apart
    Even though our shoulders touch

    I shouldn't be so happy
    Why do I feel this good?
    We're sitting together as best friends do
    Though I would be more if I could

    Everything he ever does
    Every clever thing he says
    Every powerful moment between us
    Simply takes my breath away

    I cherish each memory we share
    And write it down in a book
    I can open it up whenever
    In the quiet, I'll take a good look

    All these good things cover the bad;
    Every moment I want to frown
    I miss him so much even though
    He's there beside me, sitting down

    I miss the way he would give a hug
    When I needed one so badly
    I miss the way he'd smile at me
    When my head hung down so sadly

    I miss the way he made me feel
    When he was telling a story
    I miss the way he gave me life
    And let me take the glory

    I miss the way he'd whisper to me
    Tell me secrets no one knew
    I miss the way he'd laugh as I fell
    But he would help me back up too

    Now I'm missing the one beside me
    The one I really do care
    I feel we're as close as friends can be
    Yet he doesn't even know I'm there

    xx-hope this works!

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    missing the one beside me

    i'm missing you and i'm here all alone
    up in the tree i don't want to go home
    there's nothing to do but play back the memories
    how i loved you so much and who's still the one i miss

    we haven't talked for so long because i'm too scared
    because all i know is now you don't care
    right now you might be thinking about someone else
    who's better than me, who hasn't fell

    the one who's perfect and made just for you
    who you might actually think about and pay attention to
    the one you'll never leave, the one you'll love
    who's going to be beside you no matter what

    she might be the future and i'm only on the past
    the girl who thought this love could last
    she'll be there, making you happy
    and i'll be here, wishing it was me

    xxleisaxx

  • Shad0w0faPh30n1x
    18 years ago

    sorry, i had to resubmit it, it got deleted.

    Where You Sleep (Ode)
    Bryan

    My heart and soul
    are what you keep,
    so now I worship
    where you sleep.

    Absolute perfection
    I see in your eyes,
    as you sleep
    my heart forever cries.

    Beautifully mastered
    how you stole my heart,
    sorrowful arrogance
    tore it apart.

    Without you here
    I cant help but weep
    so I sit here and pray
    where you sleep.

    Minutes turn to hours
    hours turn to days,
    but where you sleep
    is where I pray.

    Ode is a dedication to a person thing or place that you worship.

    Bryan Hunt © 2006

  • Cellerina
    18 years ago

    My Poem - You & Me.

    If you look really deeply,
    Into my dark brown eyes.
    You will see the story,
    Behind all these lies.
    You cut me so deep,
    As deep as the sea.
    But I will never give up on you,
    The way you gave up on me.
    There are so many times I've looked at you,
    Every time you pass me by.
    There are so many times I've cried for you,
    Thinking I would die.
    I've always loved you,
    From the first day of my life.
    And every time I don't see you,
    It cuts me like a knife.
    I care & love you,
    Really, I do.
    And I've waited for years,
    For someone like you.
    Baby you're an angel,
    An angel from above.
    Sent from heaven,
    To provide me with love.
    But I guess it's all over now,
    And we'll never ever be,
    The way we were long ago,
    When it was just you and me.

  • robin milford
    18 years ago

    I'll take a regreting saying yes slot

  • robin milford
    18 years ago

    "Move it on"

    When we started out we were friends
    not good ones but friends
    I thought you needed some nuk
    You took my play serious and for that I am sorry
    Iam not sorry for following my heart
    even tho it lead me away
    You feel I went astray
    But I was never yours to begin with
    I followed my heart to another
    now you sat in pain
    feeling sorry for yourself
    I left so move on live your life and get over it
    If you want a friend for the journey
    I may give you that but not much more
    I am sorry for your pain
    I am sorry you tookme serious
    My hearts with another
    So get over it and over me

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    18 years ago

    Submit for extra.(it started out for regretting saying yes.. but ichanged it.)

    That Fateful Night

    They say one night can change you life
    And I know that’s true for me.
    What happened on that December’s night?
    You’ll just have to wait and see.

    A met a boy in the spring of `o6,
    and I swore he was the one,
    The emotions that we shared together,
    were simply more vivid than the sin

    Inseparable they said we were,
    For I never left his side.
    Nominated for *Cutest Couple*
    I was his, and he was mine.

    Finally school was over,
    and I could see him every day.
    And I did until that fateful night,
    Now things will never be the same.

    Boiling days and sticky nights,
    Simply drifted by my mind,
    Nothing seemed to matter,
    Without him by my side.

    School began up again,
    but I simply didn`t care.
    I didn`t do any of the work,
    and half the time I wasn’t there.

    So I guess you probably want to know;
    How all this has to do with one night?
    Let`s just say it started out with a kiss.
    And ended with a blatant lie.

  • DarkPoetess
    18 years ago

    sry wrong one...lol

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Writing mine right now, sorry it's taking me so long Hunn.

    -Jenna.

  • Sarah Ann
    18 years ago

    bumppp =)