help!?

  • robin milford
    18 years ago

    Both of my parents have passed and I wrote poems for them both "Mother of all" and "My Superhero". I also wrote a poem for a friend who passed away called "Death Angel" read these they maybe what you r looking for. Why r u looking for these type of poems?

  • *Charisma*
    18 years ago

    I read your plight and it moved me to write a poem. I hope that this helps you express what you're feeling. I have posted this under my name as well.

    Fixing What's Broken

    I want you to know I miss how things used to be
    When I confided in you, and you trusted in me
    I long for the past because things were better
    You loved me so much, so here's this letter.

    Once again I failed to do the right thing
    I try to fly, but fall without my wings
    They hadn't quite healed from my last soar
    When I only fell, hitting ground once more

    But in my heart and mind, I'm ready to change
    Yet you still see me as me, and this I can't blame.
    But I ask for your forgiveness and helping hand
    To prove to all, I can do right again

    I know that trust will only come through time
    When I've proven to you I'm different inside.
    That this change is real, and comes from the heart
    But without out you both, I can't even start

    So please look past my failures, and attempts gone wrong
    On my own, I'm too weak, but with help I'm strong
    These aren't just lines rehearsed to be said,
    But words meant to heal all that I've shred.

    I love you so much, from the depths of my soul
    I'll do what it takes to patch up these holes.
    But I need you now different from then
    Because I'm fixing what I know I've broken.

    By: Charisma*

  • *Charisma*
    18 years ago

    i believe I posted this in the wrong category. sorry robin.
    Charisma*