What do you think of my poem?

  • Tiffy
    20 years ago

    I thought you and me were best friends
    I would have done anything for you
    Fight your fears
    Dry your tears

    Make you laugh on a rainy day
    Make sure everything was okay
    Run a mile to make you smile
    It was your number everyday I'd dial

    But then we changed
    It wasn't just my imagination
    Our friendship became rearranged
    It seems like we have no relation

    Now I cry myself to sleep
    I don't know if you too weep
    Now I don't know what it is I seek
    I can't go on; I am too weak

    I thought you and me were best friends
    I would have done anything for you
    But now...
    It's impossible

    I was kind of unsure whether to post it or not...it's very personal.

  • Not Bulletproof
    20 years ago

    I think it's a lovely written poem, but so sad...I'm sorry you lost a friend...maybe if you showed this to them, they'd want to be friends again...good luck to you...xxx
    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • Tiffy
    20 years ago

    Thank you. =)

  • Tiffy
    20 years ago

    Thanks!

  • Alya
    20 years ago

    I like it...I think all poems are personall less or more...so it is ok.