Lanturnes

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well its been awhile since i've done one, so I thought i'd do one on the Lanturne Style of poetry.

Lanturne is a style that consist of a five-lined verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of one, two, three, four, one.

Rules:
New
No Profanity
Up to 2 per Poet
Can be a Double or Triple, i like creative poems

Prises:
1st- 6 r/r/c and add to favs
2nd- 5 r/r/c
3rd- 4 r/r/c
H/M- 3 r/r/c
every one else 1 r/r/c

ends when I have 10
or Dec. 25.

ex:
The Day You Left (Lanturne)
Bryan

.............Tears,
...........Forming
.........In my eyes
.....The day you left
...............Me.

Bryan Hunt © 2006

.........Faint.........
......Snow falls.....
...On the ground...
... In the distant.....
........Woods.............

© Jenna Elphick
December 17, 2006.

With you (Lanturne)

..........With
..........You I
.......Am happy
......Even when I
...........Cry

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

good work guys, jenna, your 3rd line has 1 too many syllables, (onto) is 2 syllables, you can make it (on the ground).

Title: Time Ship

------Time
-----Passes
---Like a ship
--In the ocean
------Blue.

By: Charisma*

I like contests where I can try new things.

title: everything

----------i
-------can be
-----everything
-you ever dreamed
---------of

xxleisaxx

Only One Who Cares

.......Love........
....Hurts when..
....You are the..
..Only one who.
......Cares........

That was fun... I love this stlye! =]

♥ Miss Ciao Bella

my other lanutrne [if it's okay]

kill me

----------kill
--------me just
------like how you
--killed my heart that
----------day

great job keep it up, and yes its ok to do 2, but no more than 2.

Love With You

------Love
---Feels good
----When it is
-Spent thinking of
-------You

By: Charisma*
My Second entry

3 more and ill judge

.....................You.....................
...................Always..................
.................Try to be.................
.............Like somebody.............
.....................Else.....................

..................You're....................
..................Never....................
...............Happy with................
...........Yourself and your..........
....................Life......................

....................So......................
.................How are.................
.............We supposed..............
..........To know the real............
....................You.....................

....................Be......................
................Yourself..................
............You might like..............
.............It. You never..............
..................Know....................

*Gem* ©

(A quadruple one, lol)

addictive drug

.......................will.......................
....................u please...................
..................hook me up................
............with that drug called..........
.......................love......................

love these poem, and Gem, i like your creativeness.

even though i said 10 ill accept the last one

CONTEST CLOSED!!!!

also i need to know the titles of your poems.

what i meant was for the name of some of the lanturnes, i found them so its ok, sorry about that jess.

ok i got the winners

1st- Jenna- i loved the flow of your poem, it was touching

2nd- Gem- I loved the creativeness of your poem

3rd- was a tie, Ciao/ Joe, your two poems are very good, it was too hard to choose.

HM- charismatic girl, your poem was very good i loved the flow. (by the way, it was your 1st entry)

everyone else will get a comment,
(WINNERS), LEAVE TITLES OF THE POEMS YOU WANT DONE OR I WONT COMMENT ANYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations to all the winners.

Can you please do,

Let's Make Love
Maybe It's You (Terzanelle)
Passion within
If you were...

Thank you, Joe

Wow! Thanks, I didn't even expect to place!
Here are the titles I'd like done
Missing You My Friend
Thunderstorm Tears
Dodging Bullets

Thank you so much! Meant a lot since it was a new style for me!
Charisma*

hi bryan, could you plz comment tears for me? oh, congrats to al the winners!

congrats ppl!

for some reason my computer wont let me on the site much, so it might be a few days but i will get the poems done,

Thank you for your comments, and a fun contest!
Charisma*

Heya Brian.
Thankyou so much for the placing =)
Congrats to everyone else too =)

Could you please do my newest five? Is that ok? lol
Thanks again!
*Gem*

hi B, thanks a lot for the comment! much appreciated!

done all but jenna and ciao, i need to know what poems you want done.

thnxz for the comments bryan! :)

wow I am delayed here! thanks a bunch bryan!! idk what ones you haven't done... *checks*

okay here are some older ones
`*Dead Of A Heartbreak / How Can You Still Call Me Beautiful
`*Signed A Crimson Red
`*Someone To Love Me (newer)
`*Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again

♥ Ciao (sorry I was a little delayed here =] )

done!

.... i cant believe i didnt enter this! :O

Missing you.
Sun Going Down Again [Acrostic]
Truest Lies [Acrostic]
Crash and Burn [Terzanelle]
Innocence.
Smiles That Hurt [Italian Sonnet]

...Most of them should be on my featured.

-Jenna.

ahh crap i did a poem too but i forgot to submit it =(