[DARK and WHATEVER{titled contest}]

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    close 4 judging!

    a contest...wow....

    here are the titles..

    -everything about death [D : SUPERTERIA]
    -killing me inside [r : oscar]
    -hiding away [D: forever lonely]
    -memory of a letter [r : lush.fcuk]
    -your photograph [r : baby blue baby blanky]
    -music is my life [r : ecstasy of suicide]
    -no one i can trust [r : condescending heart]
    -you're just another jerk
    -kiss me on my forhead [D : gem]
    -pretend, fake, smile

    dead line: dec 29
    prizes
    1 [5]
    2 [3]
    3 [2]

    it's a contest you can do whatever you want to do...
    no rules but [NEW] and [RESRVED only by DEC 28]

    xxleisaxx

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    Can I please reserve hiding away?

  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    can i reserve your photogragh please :D

    -/2 Terra

    i will do it xmas morning.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Memory of a letter please?

    -Jenna.

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    can i reserve killing me inside

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    Can i reserve 'Kiss Me On My Forehead"

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    Hiding away
    -----------------

    I'll hide away, far away
    Waiting to be found by you
    One more awful bashing
    Just for something to do

    I'll hide away, far away
    Waiting here frightened
    One more purple bruise
    Just for you to be lightened

    I'll hide away, far away
    Waiting here playing with sticks
    One more drop of blood
    Just so you get your fix

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    'Music Is My Life' Please.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    great job! i'm impressed ppl!

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    Xx Kiss me on my forehead xX

    Kiss me on my forehead
    And lay me down to sleep
    Kiss away my tears
    And pray my soul to keep

    Hold me in the darkness
    Chase away nightmares
    Hold me tightly to you
    Far from accusing stares

    Whisper softly to me
    Quietly through the night
    Whisper words of love
    And cuddle me so tight

    Hold my hand in yours
    Lay so close together
    Hold onto this feeling
    We'll make it last forever

    Kiss me on my forehead
    As I slowly close my eyes
    Kiss me on my lips
    As we say our last goodbyes ©

    *Gem*

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    great job!

  • CondescendingHeart
    18 years ago

    -no one i can trust please.

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    okie...done

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    come on ppl! reserved ppl! lol

  • Teria
    18 years ago

    Everything About Death, Please. :]

  • Teria
    18 years ago

    Everything About Death.

    Everything about death,
    once seemed to scare me.
    And, everything about death..
    Now, sets me free.
    Giving me this feeling,
    Of security.

    Dreams of,no troubles,
    worries or fears.
    Passions of love,
    heartbreaks and tears.
    It seems to put me at ease,
    as I give cheers.

    Nothing to harm me.
    nothing to hurt me.
    Nothing to break me,
    or tear me in three.
    nothing to run from.
    Nothing, I can't see.

    The fear of death,
    has drifted away.
    The need of death,
    is here to stay.
    Everything about death,
    Will happen one day.

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    only 3 submitted and after tomorrow....no reserves anymore!

  • Liquid Dreams
    18 years ago

    reserve pretend, fake, smile. thanks

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    My best attempt. This was harder to write then I thought. Sorry, it's bad.
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    Music Is My Life

    Dance to a song, deep within your head,
    This is a song, a tribute to the dead.
    Flowing to the music, they slowly tread,
    Upon the horizon of the golden red.

    The melody dances, with a smile and a laugh,
    Promenading across the bodies that felt its wrath.
    The notes walk around, in hand galant staff,
    Pointing it at the absurd words, breaking them in half.

    Who needs words, when you have a melody?
    Triumph gladly as the notes play with glee.
    Who needs words, when you have a melody?
    You need no words; we'll set them free.

    A glorious dance to a song in our head,
    A across the music the melody treads,
    Breaking words and conquering dead,
    Flow with the music; go where you are lead.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    Your Photograph

    Black and Blue
    She wept, staring at
    An old dusty photograph
    Memories hidden behind the frame

    Times of swing sets, and bicycle rides
    Where she would fly into the sky
    Her smile was white and perfect
    As she flew in the arms of freedom

    The aura or whiskey now filled the air
    As she held the photograph
    Within her shaky, sweaty palms
    She looked upon her reflection

    Shining through the glass
    Her eyes filled with tears
    Of pain of the present
    And the aching memories

    Memories hidden behind the frame
    Of an old dusty photograph
    She wept, as she gazed
    Upon the black and blue

    -/2 Terra

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    i'll judge this tomorrow

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    When is this going to be judged?

  • CondescendingHeart
    18 years ago

    Ohgod... ummm i reserved a poem and forgot ALL about it... please dont judge it yet... just give me tell like tomorrow after noon or sunday :)
    PLEASE :)

  • CondescendingHeart
    18 years ago

    Heyyy there;; Okay well i hope im not to late...
    if so just let me know. I changed the title to 'You' instead of 'I' If thats not ok just let me no as well... hope you like it...

    No One (You)I Can Trust;;
    Condescending;Heart.

    The music is going,
    You feel the beat inside,
    Dancing on the dance floor,
    As your bodies collide.

    Sweat rolls down your face,
    As you know you've done your job,
    Center of attention,
    As your heart begins to throb.

    You take a break to catch you breath,
    And choke down that last drop,
    Your mind grows dizzy,
    But its never occurs to stop,

    Grinding upon his body,
    Feeling your hands shake,
    The strobe light flashes,
    As your feet begin to ache,

    The air caresses your face,
    As you step out side to smoke,
    He sees you in perfection,
    And trys to pop a joke,

    Sooner then you know it,
    You cant control you heart,
    Though it beats a mile a minute,
    As you see this man depart.

    You couldn't dare to let him go,
    But you knew you simply must,
    Its time you now go home,
    For hes no one you can trust.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Is this being judged soon? =/