Forgotten Poetry

I'm really sorry you guys that this is taking longer than I thought it would. I'm trying really hard to judge it but there's a lot to read here. So it'll be a couple more days. I'll try not to get so behing next time. Sorry again and thanks for you patience. :)

np take your time! Good luck everyone!!

*`Ciao

WINNERS!!! DRUM ROLL PLEASE!

1st: Oscar - October Rain
2nd: Emily - Missing the One Beside Me
3rd: Captive Lightening - Brief Captivity

Congrats to everyone and I'll try to comment as soon as possible but I also have two other contests to judge so next time I promise I'll only do one contest at a time, :). But thanks for the support and everyone will get at least one comment....I just hope that you got more exposure on them, not just from me. Thanks and congrats again!

yay! thanks so much!

and take your time on the comments if you want...im in no rush to get them ( and you can do whichever ones you'd like)

=)

Emilyy.-x

Congrats to all winners!
Charisma*

congrats to the winners

congrats!!

~Ciao

~When the light comes alive~

The light slants through the window,
Illuminating the floor,
But moves away as the curtain flickers,
Now pausing on the wall.

It dances all over my room,
A duet with the breeze,
As soon as the curtain becomes still,
The light itself will freeze.

It becomes brighter as a cloud frees the sun,
I try to shield my eyes.
The light keeps on partying, stronger than before,
Inviting more friends inside.

The whole room is filled with light now,
Every flicker of light is an individual being,
They chose my room to have a disco,
So exhilarating, definitely worth seeing.

I get up and join in,
Dancing, getting to know the light
We are wild, ecstatic all through the day
Until suddenly it is night.

The room is no longer alive,
The wild vibe that was there has fleed.
The curtain is still flapping,
But the light has gone to sleep.

yay thanks, you can just comment on whichever ones you like.