...♀ Day Contest ♂...

You post what ever poem you wish here.

but it has to have been made after christmas

and it has to be at least 15 lines long.

Prizes:
First Prize: 10 Comment, Vote, Add to Favorites
Second Prize: 5 Comment, Vote
Third Prize: 3 Comment
HM: 1 Comment

-/2 Terra

~I love you~

I love you more then all the stars in the sky
I love you more
With each second that passes by.
I love you more then all the
Roses in the world
What would I do?
If I did not have you?
I love you with
All the breath that I have
You make soar
Into the night sky.
I love you forever
From the bottom of my soul
You are my everything
That I have been looking for.
And when you look
To the high heavens above
Always remember
You are the one that
I love.

~I love you Chris ~

Evaporated Tears

I wonder if the rain is just evaporated tears.
It would explain why so many fall from the sky.
Maybe it's the surmounting of our fears,
Pouring down upon us when we most need to cry.

It sprinkles on days when I'm missing you.
Falls steadily on days I'm depressed.
Showers because I don't think I'll pull through,
And merely drizzles out on the rest.

But when it thunders my heart is gone.
And the rain comes down in thick sheets.
I'm in the place where I can't move on.
Hanging on to a thread of your memory.

The lightning flashes across my eyes.
My heart shakes as the ground does too.
It won't fizzle out for days when I cry.
Thunderstorms are the closest I get to you.

By: Charisma*

Clear the Rain:

The storm outside
Hides my liquid pain
My tears fall in rhythm
With the heartless rain

I need to be concealed
From all reality
This hurt is no good
It reminds me of my mortality

...........

Yes I used to feel this way
But I'm trying so hard to change
But I can only do this
If these tears will go away

Yes I used to feel this way
But I will change only to good
I'm going to get through this
I will be understood

So clear the rain for me
As I dry these tears
I'm trying so hard to beat this
Instead of drowning in these fears

I'm no longer attached
I've broken this earthly chain
I will get through this
So clear this horrid rain

Hope yah like...and when's the judging going to occur? :)

the juging will be either when i get home late tonight (around midnight) or tomorow afternoon

Make Me Perfect {Kyrielle Sonnet}

Make me perfect, make me your doll,
Hold me close, and I will not fall.
Make me just like an endless time,
Make me perfect, a thoughtless crime.

No one's perfect; I am a twist,
Hold me close, and I won't be missed.
I am finally at perfect prime,
Make me perfect, a thoughtless crime.

Now caress such a perfect face,
A perfect thought, not perfect waste.
But, this will only take some time,
Make me perfect, a thoughtless crime.

Make me perfect, make me your doll,
Make me perfect, a thoughtless crime.

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Kyrielle Sonnet consists of 14 lines (three rhyming quatrain stanzas and a non-rhyming couplet).
Just like the traditional Kyrielle poem, the Kyrielle Sonnet also has a repeating line or phrase as a
refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza). Each line within the Kyrielle Sonnet
consists of only eight syllables. French poetry forms have a tendency to link back to the beginning
of the poem, so common practice is to use the first and last line of the first quatrain as the ending
couplet. This would also re-enforce the refrain within the poem. Therefore, a good rhyming scheme
for a Kyrielle Sonnet would be:

AabB, ccbB, ddbB, AB -or- AbaB, cbcB, dbdB, AB.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Broken December
by ♥.me.h8.you

Echoing ever so softly,
snow falls to the ground
whispers, whispers, whispers.
concealing the lies they surround

December, my truest love,
what ever have I done?
poor freshly fallen, virgin snow,
soiled by the crimson blood.

My lovely, cold, chilling Winter's night.
I never meant to grant you such pain.
I know , I knew the events of that night,
could've happened during a night of rain.

Freshly fallen pure red snow
I regret what I have done to you,
I would give anything I never had
to bleach back your sparkling hue

Now I sit, forever locked indoors,
Never to feel your frigid wind
I've broken you, my lovely December..
I've killed you with one wretched sin

Sitting by the open fire
Yet forever chilled to the bone.
December, my only love,
Death is now what I condone

When A Loved One Dies
-becca

Increased silence
An empty room
A dreary house
Filled with gloom

Shutting doors
lock up tight
things left untouched
and out of sight

tears are falling
hitting hard
no ones letting
down their guard

depression lurking
in the air
you cant escape
whats everywhere

Sunlights hitting
Floating dust,
Falling down
And covering up

A house forgotten
A Chaotic mess
Dishes piling
With the stress

a lack of smiles
Filled by cries
Its just what happens
When a loved one dies

i will begin judgeing in about 2 hours....

-mountain time... Edmonton alberta. 11pm

Am I too late?
I call it 'Songs the We Sing'

The chords strum lost sadness,
reverberating through a medium of color,
but only colors of that sadness.
Keys wavering sweetly,
black and white.. If only it could be so easy.
Fantastic fingers guide the emotions
that you tried to keep a secret.
I say, sing a little softer.
Your voice sounds so beautiful
when you've retired from the fight.
The cabinet drawers you left shut tight,
open them, just tonight.
And play me the song you hide there.
Play me the song you hide there.

Silent Agony;
by Condescending;Heart.

Shes hurting badly this time,
No one around will know,
cause she hides herself quite nicely,
since she broke some time ago.

She doesn't have a reason,
to lock herself away,
Except she has lost her pride,
And became afraid to live today.

It wasn't what he did,
Or what they seemed to have said,
But more a long the lines,
that her heart was cold and dead.

She didn't really care,
that he had caused her so much pain,
just the fact that he had left,
and she'd never love again.

So she cried to herself alone,
shutting everyone out,
hiding what had become of her,
hoping to do without.

But when they looked at her,
straight into her eyes,
They could see the truth of everything,
hiding behind her lies.

but her pain was just a secret,
that no one knew about,
a silent agony,
she could have done without.

Contest is now closed. i will begin judging this just after i finish up these last few poems.

-/2 Terra

I Love You:
I like this poem, it sorta reminds me of how felt earlier today :) great work. So simple, so controlled, so full of.. love :)

Evaporated Tears:
Well put. this poem has great rhythm, and really got me deep, there is so much happening in the poem, yet any less and it just would not work. Well done.

Lovers Sin:
Wow, this was a great poem. I love the comparison, at first I wasn’t sure where the poem was going but wow. Haha, that’s about all I can say.

Clear The Rain:
Another well-written poem. So much feeling behind it. The before and after effect was a great way to add a completed feeling to the poem. Great work.

Make Me Perfect:
Excellent writing. It was so simple, yet so complex... umm… I don’t really know what else to say about it….

Broken December:
Wow. I loved this poem. It was a good read. And a wonderful story line. Great Job.

When a Loved One Dies:
this poem was touching. I really enjoyed reading it. Actually... It made me cry a little bit. Good work.

Songs the We Sing:
I didn’t really get into this poem… so I don’t really have anything to say about it.

Silent Agony:
Good poem. I enjoyed reading it for the soul purpose it reminds me of... me… lol or at least the once upon a time me. Good work.

First Place: Lovers Sin (choose 10 poems)

Second Place: Clear The Rain (choose 5 poems)
……………... Broken December (chose 5 poems)

Third Place: When A Loved One Dies (choose 3 poems)
…………… Crimson Kisses (choose 3 poems)

HM: I Love You (choose 1 poem)
… Evaporated Tears (choose 1 poem)
… Make Me Perfect (choose 1 poem)
… Songs the We Sing (choose 1 poem)
… Silent Agony (choose 1 poem)

please specifu which poems you want me to do.. if you do not.. then i will not comment.

thank you for this these are the poems i would like commented
-under the influence
-dead words
-chains unbroken

Thank you very much for the placing and congrats to everyone else! :)

These are the poems I'd like you to comment on, and thanks again:

- Who Would Have Known
- Dale
- Understood
- Without a Trace
- So Here's to Yesterday

Congrats.

Congrats specially to Midnight Sun my best friend and great poet! I knew you'd place in this one!
And thanks for the honorable mention. lol could you comment on shattered memories? thanks
Charisma*

Charisma i commented on that poem already... when my names was [baby]blue[baby]blanky

another poem?

satans always chasing me please.

i have completed everyones comments.

any other?

"She Only Wants To Be Held" Please
Thank you.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

oh wow! didn't know that was you. lol okay. um lol...Do my one The One You Forgot. Thanks a ton, and sorry bout the mixup!
lol
Charisma*

A Sad Christmas

And congrats on the winners =]

i will get to these as soon as i can. alot of shit just came up and i dont no if i will get time tonight.