express yourself though your words (titles)

A walk in your Shoes

I took a walk in your Shoes
To prove I can do something better
Than all the lies you always told me
Scaring away all empathy
You brought this to a change
Who made life so tough
Without you

I put on your shoes today
And Told you all I’d never say
Along the canal we walked together
But both we were still alone
And so lost without the road
We used to walk together
never on our own

Black pearls were
shining upon the ground
The street that I was walking
caught me and it frightened me
Seemed to be whispering your name
Like some foolish game
I used my legs and ran

Your shoes are on the ground now
Outside in the dark where they belong
Because they have scared me as much as they did
Even though they carry your memory
It still is hid
And you aren’t here anymore
Time has gone through without you
And so will I

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When is this when going tobe judged.

its closed january 23. and its being judged by the 25th.

i put it in the rules. but i guess you didnt see lol. anywhooo. yeah so make sure all poems are entered by the 23rd

tomorrow is the last day to submit!!!!! HURRY UP GUYS/ GALs!!! anything submitted after tomorrow WONT be counted so make sure you get it in by 5PM tomorrow!!!!!!!!

It's almost to be judged! ^^ jej! ;D

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HEY GUYS!!! here are the winners!!!

1st place goes to: shattered dreams by;xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

2nd place goes to: crowded room by;ForeverLonely[Skippy Sarah]

and 3rd place goes to: the truth about heaven by;Wings Of Flames

GREAT JOB EVERYONE!!! and to those of you who won pleace let me know which of your poems you would like me to comment on!

CONGRATS TO EVERYONE! you all did amazing jobs. thanks for submitting

01. Change Can Hurt
02. Acid Hate
03. Capture
04. Silence of Sound Cry {Ottava Rima}
05. Make Me Perfect {Kyrielle Sonnet}
06. Love's Only Everything {Triolet}
[And if you don't like love poems or can't comment them do this:]
06. My Enemy {Homosexual Poem}

Thank you for first place! I was so excited when I read I won... I didn't think I would. Congradulations to everyone else!

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

1. I'll always love you
2. After you said goodbye
3. I will not give up
4. Me

Thank you. And congrats to everyone else.

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