...♀ Day Contest #2 ♂...

  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    well right now all i want to do is keep myself busy. so here is your next contest

    First 13 People can Enter
    One Winner- 14 comments. +add to favorites.

    Enter Your Favorite Poem that you have written Sense the start of this year. 2007

    Good Luck.

    -/2 Terra

    Contest ends at 9pm mountain time on January 4th

  • Wings Of Flames
    18 years ago

    Let

    Let the enchanting oceans crawl,
    Let the birds come from the trees,
    Let nothing stop the rain,
    Let peace end lonely pleas,

    Let depression become scarce,
    Let suicide become unheard,
    Let tears become a smile,
    Let good thought become a word,

    Let nothing stop the joy,
    Let evolution cease the pain,
    Let anew become unforgotten,
    Let no crack in window pane,

    Let the sky be the limit,
    Let survival be the prize,
    Let media lose control,
    Let the heat end the rise
    Let

    Let this dream be of truth,
    Let us smile, breathe and kiss,
    Let resolution be a saviour,
    Let nothing end this bliss,

    Let next year be the one,
    Let it change greater good,
    Let our happiness run wild,
    Let it be as it should.

    ~Em

  • *Charisma*
    18 years ago

    Pawn of Love

    Surrendering myself without a word
    Into the unknown I fearlessly go
    Flying with wings of the most graceful bird
    What lies in store for me I do not know

    But your own eyes are calling me nearer
    With unspoken love, we both seem to share
    As my heart beats, the truth becomes clearer
    Hold it gently, leave me not with despair

    I tremble no more as I hold your hand
    A calmness issues forth throughout my soul
    This feeling I wished for but never planned
    Is melting me softly, taking its toll

    Time could stand still, but our love would go on
    I feel your the king, and I'm just a pawn

    (a type of sonnet!)

    By: Charisma*

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    The Greatest Gift Of All

    I always looked in the wrong place for things
    Looking for love the wrong boys would bring
    Living my life the completely wrong way
    Trying to move on day after day

    I met you when you came suddenly into my life
    You helped me deal with all my strife
    We talked for hours and hours on end
    I can now call you my best friend

    Along the way, our seriousness grew
    I knew I could put all my trust in you
    You will always be there to catch me if I fall
    You, my friend, are The Greatest Gift Of All

    ♥ Ciao

  • debbylyn
    18 years ago

    A Poet's Pen Is False Release

    A poet's pen with dexterous hand
    Ink to paper often can
    Woo a heart, bring on a tear
    Soothe a soul or beckon fear.
    A harbinger of ecstasy
    Written word but fantasy.

    A poet's pen cannot replace
    Feelings held when face to face.
    Two hearts beating skin to skin
    As passions fan the fire within,
    Eyes and lips light gaze to blaze
    These can't be captured on a page.

    A poet's pen is false release,
    The ink and paper outlet brief.
    Though poem penned will time withstand
    It traces not a lover's hand.
    As writer's splendid bounty falls
    Know loneliness eclipses all.

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    Pieces of Empty
    by Twisted Heart

    A darkness fell on me today
    No sliver of a light appeared
    Inside the heart a distant call
    But its hurt voice was unclear.

    The shatter of the broken light
    Resting now among the stone
    Scattered by the winds of change
    Blown into the great unknown.

    A whisper from inside the shell
    Torn from the soul of constant fear
    Now holds the pieces of the night
    Within the darkened sphere.

    Many days have come to pass
    No beacon shines within the mind
    The tatters of a broken soul
    Unable now to cling to time.

    The pieces drift among the stars
    And scurries from the flooding gate
    The faded moon upon the dream
    Within the realm of tempered fate.

    It hangs a little crooked now
    Because the parts have lost their glow
    A darkness falls upon the heart
    Then buries deep the empty soul.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    She Only Wants To Be Held {Rondeau}

    Holding herself, another day has gone by,
    She takes her wings; she only wants to fly.
    Many tries to smile with broken frowns,
    Falling continuously to the ground;
    Her future in her heart, she must deny.

    She's not running to be by your side,
    Because there are tears finally in her eyes;
    Roses cry and nightingales sound-
    ...She only wants to be held.

    Stars gaze at a lonely sight by the sky,
    As this girl sits alone tonight to die-
    Nothing can catch what's fallen to the ground,
    She can't pick up this sadly smiling frown.
    Finally fallen, she sits tonight to cry-
    ...She only wants to be held.

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    A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a
    sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short - a
    refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the
    same metrical length).

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • CondescendingHeart
    18 years ago

    With Paper And A Pen;;
    Condescending;Heart.

    With paper and a pen,
    She sits down to write,
    with tired eyes and weak hands,
    a poem she will recite,

    giving back to those she loved,
    the only way she can; and,
    writing words of what she feels,
    that only she can understand.

    disappearing in the light,
    her words as sweet as she,
    putting her thoughts together,
    and letting her anger flea.

    She will put the day behind her,
    and forgot all they have said,
    for writing new words to them,
    helps her clear her head.

    with paper and a pen,
    she begins to tell a tale,
    for some its slipped their minds,
    but her face has grown so pale.

    She writes a sympathy of words,
    that know one will every see,
    its just a way to say goodbye,
    to whats become of the,

    She puts her regrets on paper,
    never wondering why,
    her time has come before,
    and its time say goodbye.

  • Amanda Faye K
    18 years ago


    Getting Over You
    by: Amanda Faye K

    She is out in the pouring rain
    No one can tell she is crying
    She's feeling great pain
    To think this whole time he was ling
    What went wrong?
    Wishing these feelings won't prolong.
    She is missing him so bad
    She doesn't want anyone to see
    He threw away what they had
    Sadly I don't wanna admit that girl is me.

    I am trying not to care
    Telling you how I now feel
    I would not dare
    I've told you plenty of times before
    But that you just ignored
    I thought what we had was true
    I didn't mean to fall in love with you
    Now what the heck am I gonna do?
    This was just enough to let you go
    And that I'm gonna do
    And these feelings I have hidden
    I'll try my best not to let them show

    Can't I go back to the start?
    When I didn't lose my heart?
    I wanna get it back
    Get my life on track
    I spent so long dreaming
    Even though at the same time it was seeming,
    seeming all of this was perfect
    But really was it worth it?
    I haven't forgotten a word you've ever said
    And this isn't helping me get you out of my head

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    So, Here's To Going Back. [Freestyle]
    by BriBri

    Baby, I’m yours
    You should never doubt that
    We may argue & we may fight
    But we always work our way through

    Don’t be scared of losing me
    Stop being so jealous all the time
    Baby, I promise you. .
    I’ll always be yours. I’m not going anywhere.

    I miss the way it used to be
    When you and I always got along
    Never once did we fight
    Just full of smiles & laughter

    I want to go baby. . Go back
    To how things were, how they used to be
    Before I went and messed it all up
    I’m truly sorry for what I did

    I may not understand you sometimes
    But I do understand this
    I’ll always love you with all my heart
    & I wouldn’t leave you for anything

    Baby, I want to stop all this fighting
    It’s driving me insane
    Every second that goes by, I get more scared
    I don’t want to lose you, baby. . I can’t

    So grab my hand, & hold on tight
    We’re going back to where we went wrong
    No more fighting, baby. We’re going to be okay
    So here’s to going back. . To laughter & smiles.

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    well this is the only poem i've written this year so i hope you like it...

    Me and You

    Hold me in your arms
    just this once, me and you.
    protect me in your arms
    and let the night slip by.
    hold me close
    so close, as if we were one.
    don't let me go,
    just this once, me and you.
    hold me tight
    listen to our hearts
    faster they beat,
    but still one sound.
    hold me forever in your arms,
    for we are one, me and you

  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    contest closed. i will get to the winners as soon as i can.

  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    AND THE WINNER IS!!!

    With Paper And A Pen;;
    Condescending;Heart.

    i will do your latest poemsfor as many as i have. posted in the top.

  • CondescendingHeart
    18 years ago

    Oh my;;
    Thank you :)

    When are u doing the comments?

  • CondescendingHeart
    18 years ago

    dont wanna be picky or anything;
    but since i only 17 poems and ur commenting 14 of them... i was wondering if i could pick the ones u shouldn't do... if so;

    contaminated love;
    november 11th;
    and
    Just one more drunk.

    Thanks
    Condescending;Heart.

  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    lol im pretty sure i have commented on some of yours before... you will have a comment on every poem from me. lol