hi everyone! I'm racheal!

Hi everyone, I'm new here and I thought it would be great to have the opportunity to have others read and critique my work. So, PLEASE, read what i have written and tell me what you think!!! and don't be afraid to say something negative, I'm always looking to improve!

Welcome!!!!

thank you, i'm hoping to talk to more people!! i'd love to use this site to improve!!

well, I'm Tara-kay. I'll help you get better at your writing, just a tip, only ask for comments in the comment forum, its in the rules.
but i'll read some of your stuff.

oops... hahaha!! guess i should read this stuff before i put something here!! thank you!