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THIS CONTEST IS OVER! THANK YOU FOR THOSE 7 PEOPLE WHO ACTUALLY TURNED IN THEIR POEM. YOU GUYS HAVE RECIEVED 7 COMMENTS EACH BECAUSE THERE WERE SO FEW OF YOU OUT OF 15 PLACES.

YOUR WELCOME.

May I please have I Don't Want To Go Home? Thanks! :)
And when's the due date?

can i have Take Me Away From Here? thanks
Charisma*

May I please have 'He Took Me To the Cemetary'?

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

The Contest Is Over When All Poems Are Done!!

SO TELL YOUR FRIENDS TO RESERVE FOR THIS CONTEST TO!

I Don’t Love You Anymore
please :_)

reserve. looking for paradise

Theres ALOT more people. C`mon people~

Any more takers?

Slowly Fading, Please. :]
Thanks.

Slowly Fading;

Dreams are fading way too fast.
The card board box will barely last.
Gun shots heard at least ten times.
Still searching sidewalks for pennies and dimes.

Drugs led me here, silent and alone.
Heart is frozen, cold as stone.
Been jumped four times this week.
Doctors willing to help, I seek.

Mother's dissapointed, in all I do.
Broken hearts, shattered by you.
Rape victim, tampered and torn.
Apartment up above playing bloody korn.

Forever forgotten, and never forgiven.
Street corners are where I'm making my living.
Gangs passing me by, taking me down.
Oh Lord, just one time.. Take away this frown.

Give me one night, in the house I dream of.
Doors and locks, No guns, just love.
Help me break my habbit of this.
And, once again see those I miss.

George Curious Allmighty,

The poem you reserved `Slowly Fading` is suppose to be ALL on Gangs, drugs and living out on the streets. Just not drugs. I'm sorry.

Either you change the poem entirely or I will have to disqualify you!

- reserving the twisted game you play

Can i reserve not okay please?

C`mon people. You can do it!

12 MORE TO GO!

OHhhhhhhhhhh. Okay, I'll change it then.
SORRY!!

I'm sorry it's so long but I really got into it :) If anything needs to be changed then let me know and I will change it. But I think I followed all the rules and involved everything I needed to. Hope you like it :)

I Don't Want To Go Home:

Please don't make me
Please let me stay
I can't go back yet
Just one more day?

I begged her so often
To keep me there
She shut her eyes and shook her head
As if she didn't care

You see my sister was older
And out on her own
But instead of taking me in
She left me alone

She knew what went on there
She knew what he did
He did it to her too
When she was a kid

So I pray she'll understand
And empathize with me
But she only throws me back
Instead of setting me free

I squeeze her hand tighter
As we walk through my door
But I knew I was in for it
When I saw blood on the floor

She ran from the scene quickly
And I screamed for her to come back
Now I have no where to turn...
Right then my future turned black

That night was the worst
He beat me like never before
From then on I blamed her
For all of my horror
......................................
Seven years have gone by now
He still beats us every night
But I'm sixteen now
And I won't put up with the fight

I will run away forever
But I'm leaving you this
So you'll remember the happiness
You made me miss

Dear Sister,

Why did you leave me
Leave me here to die
My life with you
Is drowning in lies

I didn't want to go home
Yet you always took me back
You are the reason
My future turned black

I will now leave you
And you'll forever know
That you caused my pain
And made my tears flow

Your abandoned blood

Midnight Sun.

That fits all the rules!

Take Me Away From Here

Not another night
Please, not one more bruise
Not another reason
To feel so abused

Don't tell me you hate me
Or that you don't care
Don't beat me than break me
This once, please me spare

My teddy is worn out
From the times I've held on
Squeezing him tighter
As I cried all night long

My pillow is covered
In little black stains
Where makeup has melted
As I cowered in pain

My heart is near shattered
And my soul is broken
I'm battered outside in
From more than words spoken

And I hate that I have
No where to run to
Near or far away
It all leads to you

The evidence shows
I'm splattered with fear
But does anyone listen?
Take me away from here.

Is there any escape
From this pit I am in
Is there a real place
To feel loved again

Where teddy's are toys
Meant for you to have fun
And makeup isn't to cover
Times you couldn't run

Do tears of pure joy
Really even exist?
Is there happiness
Among all of this?

Please somebody listen
Discern words through tears
When I cry out loud
Take me away from here.

By: Charisma*

Very Good!

thank you!
Charisma*

I'm glad it fits and I hope you like it!
And Charisma...you did REALLY good on that poem, very powerful piece :)

You guys did really good on your poems!!

C`mon everyone.

Not hard to do.

People, you need to start reserivin and turning in your poems!

can i reserve "When momma left daddy" plz

thanx!!

*Shawte*

Done.

Okay Everyone.

Start turning in your poems and reservin'!

Whens the deadline?

When all the poems are reserved and turn in.

Kk. People. Please do this.

Just a suggestion...I would post a deadline and then ppl know when they need it in. And if they don't put in by then judge it anyways...I think ppl respond better when they NEED to do something. Hope it goes well! :)
~Midnight Sun

can i have hiding behind a brick wall please, , thnks

DEADLINE IS THE 30th/31st of JANUARY!

Start reserving and turnign them in.

can i reserve pregnant and dying inside?

~Michelle S.~

Michelle,

You have Pregnant and Dying Inside.

ok great im working on it now! thanx