happy love poem

okay so lets make this short and simple

i want a love poem.. but it has to happy
it can be a love for friends, family, boyfriend/girlfriend ect.. as long as its not sad.. NOTHING SAD JUST HAPPY!!! lol i just want to make that *crystal clear*

and yeah thats about it

RULES
1. at least 10 lines no more than 40
2. MAKE IT HAPPY
3. does NOT have to be new
4. no bad words (which shouldnt be a problem cause its gotta be a happy poem)
5. have fun!!!! :)

**awards***
1st place: 10 r/r/c (read/rate/comment)
2nd place: 7 r/r/c
3rd place: 5 r/r/c
4th place: 2 r/r/c (there will only be a 4th place if more than 15 people enter)

DEADLINE!!!!!*****
january 13th

Hey I guess im the first to answer

All That Matters Is You
By Reggie Jay

Before you
My heart was a rolling stone
Before you
I had no problem being alone
Before you
I forgot what a genuine smile was
Before you
I spoke of love just because

I made my mind without thinking twice
Not a soul could keep me down
Yet my body and heart were in an internal fight

With you
My heart beats at home
With you
I've forgotten about being alone
With you
I see your smile and I see truth
With you
All ideas of love are brand new

You've brought a new insight
To a picture that made no sense
But now it just feels so right

Before you
With you
All that matters rite now is You

Hope its good enuff

ok well its IS a happy poem..but its sad in the beginning because im talking about b4 i met him...yeah..hope thats ok

You Saved Me

Never thought you'd give us another try,
Just when I thought we said our last goodbye.
I thought it was too late; we were over for good,
But it seems that the feelings withstood.

My head was saying to just forget you,
But you know what they say; patient's a virtue.
My heart told me to wait, and not to let go,
So I stuck it through, through the highs and lows.

You saved me, just when I thought it was too late,
I wouldn't have you if I hadn't decided to wait.
You fixed what was broken, kept you in my heart,
Can't stop thinking about you when we're apart.

When I finally get to see you, there's a rush inside
A million times a day you go through my mind.
When I think of everyone I've met and see,
Of everyone I've met you mean the most to me.

Before you was time going by with no meaning,
Now I realize you were the one I was missing.
Wish I could just express everything I hold inside,
I'm trying to let down my guard, just know I try.

You make me feel that I'm worth something,
You raised me up; I don't feel like I'm nothing.
You fixed my heart when I thought it was gone,
And you put up with me when I can be a moron.

I know I start arguments about nothing, and I'm sorry,
I tend to over react, but I believe in you and me.
I didn't think it was really possible to feel like this,
But you took my heart with a single kiss.

~*Who Cares?*~

Where You Sleep (Ode)
by Bryan

My heart and soul
are what you keep,
so now I worship
where you sleep.

Absolute perfection
I see in your eyes,
as you sleep
my heart forever cries.

Beautifully mastered
how you stole my heart,
sorrowful arrogance
tore it apart.

Without you here
I cant help but weep
so I sit here and pray
where you sleep.

Minutes turn to hours
hours turn to days,
but where you sleep
is where I pray.

Ode is a dedication to a person thing or place that you worship.

Bryan Hunt © 2006

i know it kinda seems sad but this one is a worship poem.

Have You Ever Fallen So Hard?
by BriBri

Have you ever fallen so hard
For someone you don’t really know
But the first time you talked to them.
They had you right there at ‘hello’?

Have you ever fallen so hard
For a completely perfect stranger
But you wanted to get to know them
Even though it could put you in danger?

Have you ever fallen so hard
For someone that you never met
But when you started talking to them
You knew it was something you wouldn’t regret?

Have you ever fallen so hard
For someone who can make you fly
By just saying ‘baby, I love you’
And you just know it’s not a lie?

Have you ever fallen so hard
For someone so perfect
Who’s like an angel to you
And treats you with so much respect?

Have you ever fallen so hard
Or as fast as you can blink, so quick
But there’s something about him
And you two just automatically click?

Baby, I’ve fallen so hard
You’re my angel from above
God sent you to me
To care and to love

Love Still Lives

For a time I thought love was lost
Powerless, pointless, not worth the cost
Kicked at my lowest, pushed into ground
With hurt like that, why fool around?
But you changed my viewpoints, guided my eyes
Led me away from my own heart's demise
Crevices in my heart are trickling light
Hopes are trying to again take flight
Warmth is filling my soul so cold
Hate no longer has it's hold

Where would I be if not for you?
Still walking the street of the lonely and used.
I'm out of the pity, left all nightmares
With my reason to hope, believe love does care
You've taken me farther from a pain that kills
And showed me places where love lives still

By: Charisma*

The Magic of a Kiss
By: Twisted Heart

Sometimes, it is a gentle touch
That starts the senses reeling
The wonder of two beating heart
Bound up with all the feelings.

Two souls have entertwined in time
Each second passing true
A moment turnes the hands of fate
Reflected love grown all anew.

The thunder of a heartbeat swells
In form it comes to pass
The inkling of a certain smile
Captured by a thought surpassed

Then eyes are tied in splendor
To the beating of two souls
That comes to still the hunger
Of the love these two can hold

A simple little gesture shown
An answer to the bliss
Held up to love and happiness
Is the magic of a kiss.

Xx No One Loves You... Like I Do xX

I don't know how to tell you
So I'm going to write it down
And try to get the words out
About this happiness I've found

Engulfed by your sweet love
You care, your heart, your trust
It's like my heart will burst
And let loose some glitter dust

You know the things to say
To make me feel truly cherished
And when you kiss me lovingly
All my fears just perish

Planting kisses on my neck
Sends those shivers down my spine
I live for the nights we cuddle up
And we sleep lay intertwined

I've finally learned to love myself
Cos of the love you've given me
And no one loves you like I do
That I can guarantee... ©

*Gem*

(For Marcus

Love's Only Everything {Triolet}

Sweet surrender - eternal bliss,
An endless touch and mending kiss,
Forbidding love to reminisce,
Sweet surrender - eternal bliss.
Love's only everything, amiss
A templed body and fast kiss.
Sweet surrender - eternal bliss,
An endless touch and mending kiss.

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A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Stealer, Stealer

I held your picture in my hand
Knowing, now, you understand
Your words, they healed my broken heart
While everyone else wanted to rip it apart

The pieces torn, the remains were scattered
I just couldn’t deal with my poor heart shattered
So I had tucked it away, for no one to see
I didn’t want anyone to want to love me

But then you came, wielding your magic key
You charmed me with your eyes, can’t you see
You stole my heart when you stole my soul
I asked myself how I could ever be whole

But now I’m not worried, you’ll always be there
For once in my life, I’ll have some to care
You won’t break my heart, you’ll help mend it so
That for now, our love, the whole world can know

*`Ciao

Falling for you
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

Slowly falling
falling for you
your eyes are so deep
so loving, but sad
they want to be loved
but like me
you are afraid
afraid to be hurt, again?
your soul so kind
so caring, but torn
it wants to love
and to be loved
i would like to answer that cry
the look in your eyes
it opens your soul
you dream of love
no sorrow, no pain
only compassion and peace
and maybe even a kiss in the rain
how you do want this life
i wold like to share it with you
for i to have that dream
and if it was a happy ending
i would want to be with you
because i am slowly falling
falling for you

this is one of my "happy poems" if you want to call it that....hope you like it

Last Sunset

I rise from the silky bed that embraced our beings
And then i breathe over ur flawless face skin,
Ur eyelashes so mystique are so never-fading...
My spirit has no regret,no painful past,no sin...

Kissing ur fresh reddish lips is like pouring rain
That falls like our desires drop on our pores
And ur hands around me are just like a fantasy chain..
Don't ever doubt it...u are the one my soul adores..

Your sateen touch over my neck makes me tremble
Just as ur unbreakable eyes make my blood run cold..
Hold me tight honey cause I am ur wingless angel;
"I love u so" - words that are million time told..

Perfect afternoon next to you as we watch the sky
We intrude in the delicate whispers of nature;
"I wanna spend my last sunset with you" I cry...
Then I slowly kiss ur mouth to be the happiness keeper...

*hey! i hope u like this poem bcos i think it's the first happy love poem i ever wrote and frankly,i really wrote it with all my heart :D*

hey guys two more days to submit !

~A Day Of Bliss~

Let's go chase butterflies
Into the nights sky,
Run with Fireflies
As if we could fly.

Swim with the fishes
Under the glossy
Water world
Gallop with the horses
On the soft sandy shore.

Let the warm summer rain
Fall upon us
Our love is strong
We will soar high
Above the universe
Like two doves
We have become.

When sunlight awakens
And kiss us with her glow
Settle down in our
Cherry blossom bed
And listen to the morning song.

~To my love Chris~

Happy Tears
By: David Marshall

When you said you loved me,
When I doubted that you cared.
I knew it would be,
Something I would want to share.

When you said I was your everything,
It made me cry.
I have a feeling your words are something,
And that you didn't lie.

When you kissed me,
and whispered in my ears.
about how much I meant to you,
While pouring happy tears.

As soon as i was convinced,
that I had no more fears.
There's nothing stopping me,
From crying these happy tears.

I love her too,
and our love is clear.
We are here for each other,
to wipe each happy tear.

© Copy-righted by David A Marshall

*Perfect*

I love the way your hair sticks up
After you run your fingers through it
I love how you are so polite
It's like your never gonna quit
I love how we're the same, but different
But it's something I won't admit

I love the hugs you give me
When I just want to cry
I love the feeling I get
When I look into your eyes
I love how tight you hold me
When you say goodbye

I love the look you give me
If I do something blonde
I love the way you're with me
Even when you're gone
I love everything about you
You don't have one single flaw

ONE MORE DAY LEFT TOO POST...

Sometimes I wonder...
by J. Lau

If everything happened for a reason,
What purpose did I serve,
When I entered into your life?

Am I just a stranger?
Who happened to be his best friend,
And knew all that happened between you and him?

Am I simply a friend?
Who you were comfortable with,
And had absolutely no feelings for?

Am I the comforter I once described?
Who was there by your side,
And comforts you when you cry?

Am I your guardian angel?
Who guards and help you,
When you needed most?

Am I the soul mate that you need?
Who shared all your joy and sorrows,
And a true friend you can count upon?

Am I the passing cloud?
That happened to be there,
And slowly disappears when the sky clears up?

Am I the rainbow in the sky?
That brings you joy for that brief moment,
And fades away when the sun shines again?

Am I the white Christmas?
That happens only on occasion,
And fulfills a part of your life when all else fails?

Or am I the destined one?
Who will love and cherish you,
For the rest of our lives?

Sometimes I wonder...
How I got myself tangled,
In this complicated situation.

But one thing for sure,
That makes all that I wondered,
Not at all important,
Is that I know... I love you so.

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Well... looking down the list of poems and reading them all, i ask myself why im trying... heck 3 or 4 of the people posting here are some of the ones i consider some of the greats here... but what the heck, heres my swing at the prize..

When I'm with you,
eternity is a step away,
My love continues to grow
with each passing day.

This treasure of love,
I cherish within my soul,
How much I love you...
you'll never really know.

You bring a joy to my heart
I've never felt before,
With each touch of your hand
I love you more and more.

Whenever we say good-bye,
whenever we part,
Know I hold you dearly
deep inside my heart.

So these seven words
I pray you hold true,
"Forever And Always
I Will Love You"

~chris engle

okay so this contest will close tonight at 5.. and ill probablky have it judged by 9ish or by tomorow at 3

good luck to everyone.

1/2 hour left to enter.. it doenst even have to be a new poem!

okay im going to start the judging now.. the winners will be posted in probably an hour!

here are the WINNERS!!!

1st: Twisted Heart-- 10 r/r/c
2nd: *Gem*-- 7 /r/c
3rd: Chris Engle-- 5 r/r/c
4th: poetess-- 2 r/r/c

and to xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex i LOVED YOU POEM!! so much.. but i made a rule it had to be 10 lines and yours was 8 .. i cant change the rules for just one person.. so i will comment 2 poems of yours anyway

and to everybody else.. spectacular job! it was soo hard to pick a top four.. after going through all the poems and being as critical as possible i was still left with a top 7 so good job to everyone and because of that everybody who didnt place can leave 1 title for me to comment

***please leave title(s) or you get no comment(s)

Awee. Crap. I must have missed that rule...It was in a strict rhyme scheme, if that makes anything better. =]
Lol, thank you for commenting still, I appreciate it.=]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

lol no problem.. are there any two poems you would like me to comment..give me titles please

aw i lose:( o well. congrats every1

wow, didnt think id hit top 10.... :) thank you for the honor! :)

by the way, im more than 500% happy with 3rd place... seeing as how its 5 r/r/c, and i only have 5 poems total.. haha. anyways thank you very very much im glad to have my work appreciated :)

anywho, heres my 5 poem titles incase.

You've made my life perfect
Dont miss your chance
"just a toy"
"your final decision"
"Forever and Always..."

dont miss your chance is a lot of long randomness, but its my feelings, so i guess its good in its own way, it WAS following a nice rhyming scheme, but the paragraph format makes it hard to follow

~chris

Eeeeep!!! Thankyou! That was so unexpected.
Can i ask you to comment my 7 latest? Is that ok?
Thanks again for the placing, it's made my night
Congrats to everyone else =)
*Gem*