SecondRound.:]

Top Ten:
Ian
Dhaval
DixieDaisy
Lisa Carter
Rocky
Absolute SOrrow
Lush.fcuk.
xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
[beloved[
leanne
LuvSuxGetDrunk.

Congradulations TOP TEN!! You've made it to the second round. :]

In this round you are writing two Sedoka's.

A Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5-7-7, 5-7-7 . A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives
And a Katauta is an unrhymed three-line poem the following syllable counts: 5-7-7
Examples are at this link:
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/sedoka.html

-Rules For This Contest-
1. No more than two poems per person.
2. No profanity.
3. Turned in by deadline: January 27th
4. Must be new.

-Rewards-
*Each round*: Everyone who entered a poem will get one more comment.
Final Three: 8 comments and spot on my favorites.

Good Luck.

ok so i'm not entirely sure if i have done this right but i gave it a go, let me know if its wrong.

Family (sedoka)

Warmth and happiness
Trustworthy, special people
Friends who will always be there

Strong relationships
Their bonds are unbreakable
Loyalty means everything.

and

New year (sedoka)

A new begining
Time to move on and start fresh
A clean slate for old and young

Look ahead with joy
Another year for planning
Your life is what you make it.

also is this the last round or will there be another?

There will be one more round after this, hun.
AND.
That is right.
You did a good job, on both poems. :]

is there a spacific genre you wont this on, im (absolute sorrow)

Family.

Family are there
To help you through lifes struggles
No matter what you have done.

You're never alone
Family help rectify
All the mistakes you have made.

And

Life.

Lifes a mystery
Take each day as it arrives
Expect the unexpected.

Treat it with respect
Hold on tight and don't let go
The futures what you make it.

**I was LuvSuxGetDrunk, I changed my name (just thought I'd let you know in order to avoid confusion.
Sorry if it's crappy, it was my first ever go at writing this style.**

No, there is no specific genre, Bryan.
Thanks for asking. :]]

The ones I don't have by the 20th I will private message..
:|

sorry, i only have one right now but im working on the second one right now.

I'm really sorry this took so long..A lot has happened and I just couldn't write..Thank you for your patience.
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Snowflakes

Have you ever seen
Snowflakes dancing to the ground?
Lost in dreams of tomorrow?

Speaking graciously,
They fall to the ground, dancing,
Waiting to be accepted.

Rain

Have you ever seen
Rain glisten in deathly sun?
Sparkling for tomorrow.

Crying out to hear
What tomorrow left behind;
Forgotten, they sing of time.

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A Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5-7-7, 5-7-7 . A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives
And a Katauta is an unrhymed three-line poem the following syllable counts: 5-7-7

No need to apologize.
I hope everythings okay. :]

Your poems were good, btw. :]

When will this be judged?
xx

Is this contest still open?