does anyone know what i mean

Rain rain keeps pouring down
never never reaches the ground
rain rain its filling me up inside
i run keep running but nowhere to hide
rain pouring on me faster and faster
beating me down harder and harder
unable to take this constant pain
unable to block this pouring rain
rain rain inside me its over flowing
i choke I'm choking but but rain keeps pouring
i cant breath i cant move
i cant say nothing i cant break through
I'm drowning I'm drowning cant you see
the rain the rain its killing me

*i just wanted to know if anyone knew what i was talking about in this poem-its not rain..dose anyone know what I'm REALLY talking about????

Yeah, sleet. Clearly you live in the North of England.

heh...no...sorry...but no

sorry not really...good answers but not exactly right.

Tears?

Yes, I understand it...you are basically using rain as a metaphor of the loneliness and depression that is building up inside to the point where you can't take it anymore (over flow)

Agrees with Corinne ^_^

ouch..that hurt...okay, sorry my poem is to juvenile for you. and yes i am a teen so yes i still feel as most teens do. so if you are to Mature for my poetry than dont read it!....and corinne, you are VERY VERY close its a differnt feeling...

Scuse me. I used to be a teen. I never felt "drowned". By anything. And I'm a product of Thatcherite Urbanism. If you were born to the iPod generation you really don't know just how very lucky you are.

I'm a teen and I don't feel as most teens claim to feel. I'm not sad over the fact my boyfriend dumped me (if I had one anyway) I'd be more sad if someone known for helping others died.

is it about the same as my sisters

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=797705

did you recently lose someone you loved? i use losed loosely like a breakup or a death either way, you loved that person, and missing that person is filling you with depression and sadness, because you aren't exactly sure how to deal with them not being there? am i on the right track?

To the Op, first of all, literaure is subjective, so it doesn't matter what you meant. Your meaning is NOT the REAL meaning. Every meaning mentioned in this post, including rain--the wet stuff that falls from the sky--is the real meaning. If you don't know what subjective is then go look it up. Call it a...learning experience. A poem with many different interpretations is better than one with just a single straight forward, it has to be this meaning anyways.

Stop being concerned with exacts according to you. Learn to write and allow. It is much better when you allow. If your stuff doesn't allow anybody to have it, then it isn't worth spending time on this subject.

I think you have a drinking problem. You will drown if you keep pouring it down.

^^ lol. Love it. I agree with Edward cos it's classic! lol