Titles Contest! Joint Contest.

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    CLOSED FOR JUDGING! CLOSED FOR JUDGING! CLOSED FOR JUDGING!

    This a joint contest between me and Leanne.
    We're going to give you some titles, and all you have to do is write a poem relating to the title.

    *Rules:*
    *Must reserve In order to avoid confusion.
    *Must Rhyme
    Anything else goes!

    *Titles
    Toxic Passion-Done-xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    Erotic Lust
    Sweetest Sin-Done-Dixiedaisy
    Secret Wish-Done-George Curious Allmighty
    Broken promises
    Hidden Desires-Done- disturbed one
    Dirty Little Secret
    Wild At Heart-Done-*Gem*
    So Misleading-Reserved-TeRIfiEd
    Lonely heart-Done- Twisted Heart
    RestlessNight-Done-Condescending;Heart.
    Untouched-Done- My Decadent
    Helpless
    Time Bomb-Done- HiddenxSoul
    Cruel Intentions-Done- BriBri .x. ♥
    Twisted Liar
    Blinded By Love-Done-~*Who Cares?*~
    Betrayed Trust
    Simply Insane-Done-silhouette, of something unimagi
    DarkestFear-Done-TheWorldFell&UWerentThere

    After we have judged, we will each pick our OWN top five.
    The five I choose will recieve comments from me, the top five Leanne chooses will recieve comments from her.

    Prizes:
    1st- 10 comments, votes, and added to favourites
    2nd- 8 comments, votes, and added to favourites
    3rd-6 comments and votes.
    4th- 4 Comments
    5th- 2 Comments.
    1 Honourable Mention by each of us.

    Deadline-31st Jan.

    Have fun!
    xx

  • Daisy if you do
    17 years ago

    May I please reserve Sweetest Sin?
    Thank you in advance,
    Dixie

  • CondescendingHeart
    17 years ago

    hmmm im stuck between so misleading and cruel intentions... ummm restless please but could i possibly chance it to restless night if possibly?

    great titles by the way.

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    I'll do Darkest Fear.

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Condescending;Heart:
    I have edited it to RestlessNight for you.

    xx

  • silhouette fairy
    17 years ago

    could i reserve simply insane
    please and thank you

  • CondescendingHeart
    17 years ago

    Eeeeee... i have to go to school so i wrote it fast; hope its okay.
    Its Snowing!

    Restless Night
    Condescending;Heart.

    Out the window time pasts by
    The sun rises and then it sets
    Giving time to start a new day
    And let go of past regrets

    Although she slept not at all
    The day before was good
    But night time is always the loneliest
    For a love so misunderstood

    Broken Hearted she lays alone
    Her fingers frosted to her drink
    never can she have enough
    to leave her bottle in the sink

    The one she held so close
    So soon he got away
    Now she thinks countless hours
    Of if he had of stayed

    Not so much does she miss him
    But someone at night to hold
    So she cradles a bottle of whiskey
    that leaves her lips so cold

    She'd rather have a restless night
    Then sleep with someone knew
    She'd rather drink her whiskey
    Then to say what shes been through

    She can not sleep again
    For she knows shes not alright
    shes bought another bottle
    for another restless night.

  • BECCA lessTHANthree
    17 years ago

    ill reserve toxic passion pleaseandthankyou! :)

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    So Misleading, Please.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Can i reserve 'Wild at heart' please?
    *Gem*

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    17 years ago

    can i have blinded by love? thanks:)

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx Wild At Heart xX

    She sits alone in the corner
    While the party’s in full swing
    Sips her drink and stays quiet
    She’s a funny little thing

    Everybody knows who she is
    But nobody knows her name
    She’s the girl in the background
    The one out of the picture frame

    The girl who’s sweet and shy
    Pretty but in her own way
    The one who is really interesting
    But no one hears what she has to say

    They don’t know what she’s like
    No one bothers to discover
    To find out if she’s fun or nice
    All they look at is the cover

    A girl who on the outside
    Looks so serious and smart
    But if you look on the inside
    You’ll see she’s wild at heart ©

    *Gem*

    (A bit rushed, i had to hurry with it =(

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    Can I reserve "Time Bomb" please?

  • Leanne
    17 years ago

    Wooo keep em comin ppl =D

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    Condescending;heart,

    Sorry if i spelled your name wrong but I just wanted to say WOW, ur poem is amazing!

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    Darkest Fear

    Your name to me is a sin,
    I say it every time this razor touches my skin,
    I say to myself, I will not love you,
    Only if people knew.

    Everything you've done to me,
    Has never made me free,
    I feel the hurt; I feel the pain,
    And you can't even show the shame.

    I hate you for everything you did,
    Trying to keep everything hid,
    You didn't want people to know,
    What I had to show.

    You always lied,
    So I couldn't find someone to confide,
    You made everyone hate me,
    You blinded their eyes so they couldn't see.

    You messed up their eyes,
    With all your lies,
    Winning with everything you had,
    I hate you dad.

    You told everyone I was on drugs,
    And just another one of the street thugs,
    You told everyone I drank and stole,
    Just wanting to see me fall into a bigger hole.

    But dad here comes my darkest fear,
    And down my cheek falls a tear,
    Dad, everything you said you knew,
    Is that what you see in me, becoming true?

    I'm going to rewrite this when I get home. Its horrible and I can't think because I'm in school and everyones talking. So yeah. I'm rewriting it!

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    May I please have Lonely Heart? If so, thanks lots.

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Lonely Heart
    By: Twisted Heart

    Upon a bed of broken hope,There lies a lonely heart
    The soul was shattered by the pieces, As it fell apart.

    Tainted by the wounds of time, It lay in slumbered waste
    Forever lost among the hopes and dreams of yesterday.

    Unable now to lend a comfort to the painful tears inside
    Covered with a cloak of sorrow, it's found a place to hide.

    Buried deep within the thoughts, that faces every day
    Are burning questions of the games that were always played.

    Upon the edge of sanity, There comes a sweet release
    A place to lay the heartache down, and finally go to sleep

    A haven to the hurtful words that formed an alibi
    Followed there among the truths that died among the lies.

    Now, lonely is the heart that waits, upon the bed of hope
    Contained within the bitterness that's crushed the very soul.

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    Okay maybe I won't rewrite mine. I jsut had a few minutes to think about it. I like how it is now.

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    Time Bomb
    by HiddenxSoul

    You’re a time bomb baby
    You’re just carrying on
    Like the rhythm of a friendly beat
    From a person’s favourite song

    You’re a time bomb baby
    And you may just explode
    Just calm it down, soothe the pace
    Or I’ll put you on slow mode

    You’re a time bomb baby
    The flames are falling through
    Red-hot burning scars
    Completely cover you

    You’re a time bomb baby
    And for once I am quite scared
    No longer are you the man I adored
    No longer the one I knew that cared

    You’re a time bomb baby
    And you’re moving much too fast
    The calmness that you once endured
    Has been forgotten in the past

    You’re a time bomb baby
    And you’re completely out of reach
    Just come back to me, my dear
    And listen to my speech

    You were a time bomb baby
    And utterly lost by now
    As time moves on, without you here
    I’m left to carry on somehow

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Can I please reserve Secret Wish?
    Thanks. :]

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Can I please reserve 'Cruel Intentions'? Thankss.

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Secret Wish.
    By Teria Westerviller.

    The heart I broke.
    The love I pushed away.
    The dreams I ruined,
    And, tears that fell that day.

    The words I said.
    The faith I crashed.
    The one I loved,
    completely smashed.

    I ended it that day,
    along with my life.
    I tore you apart,
    and hell was rife.

    I did all I said
    I'd never do.
    I did it all,
    and, to you.

    I stole my dreams,
    then stomped on them.
    I created fears,
    filled with sin.

    I brought to myself,
    A secret wish.
    That I could have,
    the one I miss.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Cruel Intentions.
    by BriBri .x. ♥

    You’re well aware of what you’re doing to me.
    It was all predetermined from day one.
    Building up the trust just to get to the key.
    Capturing me and then crushing me like broken glass.

    You have me in the palm of your hands.
    & you know you have me hooked.
    Everyone told me they knew your plans.
    But, I was so willing to take that risk.

    Everyone said they had you all figured out.
    Except me, who acted like a stubborn fool.
    They all knew what your intentions were about.
    & that it was going to be very atrocious.

    So here I am, all broken up inside.
    Wishing I would have listened to my friends.
    Now I have no where to run; no where to hide.
    And it was all because of your cruel intentions.

  • silhouette fairy
    17 years ago

    Simply insane
    by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

    Glinting in the moonlight
    the man raises it
    slowly breaking the skin
    he takes the victim's life
    then tossing the knife aside
    he walks away
    blood smeared across his face,
    with a bellowing sound he laughs into the night
    the glimmering of the moon shines
    it is full tonight
    he won't need the knife now
    slowly pain consumes his mind
    and he pulls at his clothing
    arching his back he screams
    it slowly changes to a howl
    now he stands on all fours weeping
    then with a snarl takes off for the forest
    creeping up on couples he devours them
    only to feel heart broken afterward
    slowly the night passes
    and now he must change back
    slowly the pain comes again
    he howls into the night
    then slowly it changes to a cry for help
    no he is captured and confused
    questions fly by
    not know what to do he tells his story
    as the inquiring men listen they give him strange looks
    then he ends and the men walk out the door
    "do you believe him?"
    "no he is simply insane"

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    17 years ago

    Blinded By Love

    Last night as we lay in my bed in each other’s arms,
    I realized how happy I was, and how safe I am from harm.
    Our noses touch as we gazed into each other’s eyes,
    Then you said something that caught me by surprise.

    You said to me, I want to wake up next to you everyday,
    Marry you, and be together until our hair is old and gray.
    I really do love you, and think you’re the one for me,
    I think that you and I are seriously meant to be.

    We kissed as I smiled in pure happiness,
    With those words I lost all doubt and stress.
    I confessed I had felt the same (and that is true)
    So I replied, I really do love you too!

    We kissed some more, as a single tear formed in my eye,
    He didn’t see it, but I was so happy I could cry.
    Just when I thought he couldn’t get any more sweet,
    He said something to me that truly swept me off my feet.

    I want to fall asleep with you in my arms forever,
    I think that we truly do belong together.
    Last night I had a dream of our wedding day,
    Sweetie I love you, so come whatever may.

    I fell into your arms; I couldn’t help but smile,
    I haven’t been this happy in a very long while.
    Never imagined I’d find made for just me from above,
    But I’ve fallen for you; I’m blinded by love.

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • lost in lovee
    17 years ago

    ill do secret wish

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    i'll take hidden desires plz

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    ~ANtoNiA~
    I'm sorry but Secret Wish has already been done.
    Maybe you would like to choose one of the titles that are still open?
    xx

  • BECCA lessTHANthree
    17 years ago

    sorry im going to have to unreserve

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    No problem.
    There's still a few titles going, anyone else?
    xx

  • Leanne
    17 years ago

    ~Bump~

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Well this doesn't seem to be moving fast at all o.O
    And the closing date will be soon o.O
    Someone have a title, for me and Leanne, pretty please =)
    xx

  • My Decadent
    17 years ago

    Could I please reserve "Untouched"?
    Thank you.

  • My Decadent
    17 years ago

    Untouched

    Between walls of darkness it lays,
    Never listened to a word it says
    But I can feel it breaking inside
    And hope I can help it survive,

    Because if it would ever die
    So shall the world and you will cry
    For hatred and anger are locked within
    Along with the list of your each and every sin.

    So many times by malice clutched
    And always by love untouched,
    My blackened heart sobbs in silence
    Hoping for feelings untouched by violence.

    I am Death and your time has come,
    My untouched heart is now undone,
    It's now broken and feelings pour out
    And the remnant pieces can't stand your shout.

    © My Decadent

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Sorry this took so long...ive been loaded with homework lately...so...anyways...i know this isnt very good but its kind of a true story.. i'll explain after

    Hidden Desires

    Everyone always asks,
    If they are going out,
    They are a couple from heaven,
    There is no doubt,

    Everytime they say no,
    They deepen the hole with lies,
    They know love exists but chose,
    To hide it in disguise,

    They wont show it because,
    It might not be there,
    Is it bad chemistry,
    It cant be, they care,

    She wont say a thing to him,
    Cause she thinks she doesnt see,
    He wont say a thing to her,
    Cause lying is too gutsy,

    Even though sometimes,
    They look great together,
    Hidden Desires dont last,
    But true feelings are forever
    -----------------------------------------------------------

    K...me and my friend like...fight like brother and sister or like we were goin out...and...we even kinda look alike...everyone always asks us if we are goin out...we say no...everyone thinks we should go out..but...i wouldnt...i dont know about her...but i wouldnt...if i could play any line from a song for her...this would be it...I hate everything about you...why do i love you...and by the why do i love you part...i mean like...as in friends...not like...love love haha

  • Leanne
    17 years ago

    ~Bump~

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    ~Nudge~

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Seven Titles Left Still!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    OMG. Can I have "Toxic Passion" instead of "So Misleading"? Please, please, please! I"ll get it done as soon as possible, I promise!
    "So Misleading" was/is really hard to write...May I please switch? =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex