OMG ITS A ~*Who Cares?*~ CONTEST YAY!!! PARTY!

I care!! and I finished my poem!

Taking Over Me

The thought of you still takes over my mind
There's still a part of my heart that I'll never find
I could spend hours just staring at the phone
Baby, neither of us should be this alone
[You're Taking Over Me]

The way your eyes still makes me feel
Do you still think that this is real?
Talking for hours makes it feel alright
Boy, does any of this seem right?
[You're Taking Over Me]

I can still remember the way your kisses felt
How the one look in your eyes would make me melt
How gently you would reach for my hand
Knowing, in our hearts, no one but us would understand
[You're Taking Over Me]

I was giving up, but doing it slowly
Hoping you'd say that you still love me
I was afraid my chance would be too late
But I don't know if, any longer, I can wait
[You're Taking Over Me]

My thoughts of you can drive me crazy
'Cause you are the only one who can save me
Come rescue this Princess Distaster
'Cause I just keep falling faster and faster
[You're Taking Over Me]

*whispers*
You completely consumed me
I've been taken over
By You

Hope ya like it!!
♣ Ciao

yay! new poem! lol. ok so all u other reserves....did u guys forget? n all u other ppl that r just opening it...reserve away!!!! i want to see this going a tad faster...

Reserve Under Your Spell please

Hmmm...I just wrote a poem that could fit 'No More' or 'With You, I Believe'....I don't care which one, so you can decide.

I also have a poem written a couple weeks ago that would fit perfectly with 'Yours Forever' ...but it is erotic/explicit..is that ok?

May I reserve two titles please?

If there is only one poem per person, that's fine too. No worries :)

With You, I Believe

Heart broken, a pain I have endured too long
A raging gale swept my love of life astray
Loss of hope, no desire--this is my song
Vision overtaken by black, white, and gray

Victim of affairs, falling to a lack of care
Standing by as all that was becomes anew
A happy future dissolving as my eyes stare
Those I trust lying, innocence to construe

Trapped in suffocation, walls closing in
So close, a breath from the rope tightening
Everything crashing down upon a minion
Then you stepped in; pure melody to sing

I had given up faith in there being a chance
For a glimpse of light, a taste of saccharine
You came to me offering a second dance
Generosity and security, a feeling obscene

Holding my hand in the bitter of night
Taming my shivering, in tender touch
Embracing me calmly in deepest fright
Happiness released in your gentle clutch

My life had been a book of treachery
Hot tears, dripping day in and day out
For the first time, there is love for me
This I believe, with no hint of doubt

Shedding radiance on my shattered dreams
Rekindled trust behind an unlocked door
Healing my sorrow, hemming new seams
Uplifting perspectives, anguish no more

yeah i only really want one per poet..sry. but thanks for entering:) and idc if its explicit or not. its all good. just w/e:)

Alright tizight. Well, I'll just leave this poem then ^

does this contest close tomorrow?

no. i hope itll end fairly soon tho...reserves are still out there...come on ppl. ill prob close it by the weekend.

so you'll close it even if all the spots aren't filled?

I'll have mine in by Friday

yes id like more spots filled, but i cant force ppl 2 enter lol. and okiee:)

ppl...i was on the 2nd page ;-( that hurts

aww, that must be why the spots aren't getting filled! lets keep posting comments so people always see it and are tempted to enter

omg u guys u need to hurry i have a feeling soon im not going to be in the mood to read happy things. im serious. right now i feel like crying my eyes out. my boyfriend i think is gonna break up w/ me..then this contest will just piss me off. please hurry.

omg what makes you think that!? aw maybe u should judge them now if you are really sure that he is going to.. but i dont see why he would want to !!

well..i am not very experienced in the dating category..hes my 2nd boyfriend ive ever had. and my and my 1st bf were banned from seeing eachother ever again. anyway..well today we were talking and this is what happened..i need to let it out so i might as well post it in my forum...so sry for babbling but...:
Him do you think i treet you like cr**
Me no....y?
Him because i feel like i dont treet you right
Me hm. well i dun
Him why
Me idk just dun. y do u think u do. lol. or how. or w/e
Him because im not around you when were at school, and i feel like im trying to push you farther than your ready for.
Me 1. yeah i dun get the most attention, but i know u got other friends n so do i so its fine. 2. no ur not
Him and all we ever do is just kiss.. idk theres more to that in dating... and idk the kissing is fun and all.. but it feels like its just a kiss.. even tho we both like eachother..it just hasent felt special recently
Me .ok.
Him do u know what i mean?
Me not really. but i dun make us just kiss n what not. w/e tho..
Me so essencially ur bored w/ me...
Him no
Me .ok.
Him just it feels wierd.
....then he said brb..i said ok. he came back i said ok wb. he said thanks..i said yep. he asked what's wrong...and i asked him if that meant hes breaking up w/ me..he said no. but how can u say it feels weird and not be thinking about it? i mean come on. but i sent him an email a few minutes ago because he's not online anymore asking if he does want to break up w/ me or not...and now im waiting.

i will judge no matter what...BUT..if we break up..ill be in emotion leave and will be crying for about 2-3 days so i might be late to judge the contest. idk though..i guess i just g2 wait 2 find out.

yeah. he just broke up w/ me. yep. ok so give me a few days.

aww u take ur time chickie evrythingz gona be ok :).. the right person will come along 1 day.. i mean look at me gawsh iv bin single 4 like a year! but i know there are plenty more fish in the sea :) take care k xox

well its not over yet who cares, but yes, i would keep the thought of breaking up as a possible option...its strange he brought up those things, then said he didn't want to end? i'm a bit confused about your relationship...do you spend enough time together do you think? if you are much more physical than mental...as in, you don't talk very much, connect on an intellectual level...then maybe it is best to let go. either way, best of luck and take care babe :)

-jane

jane-thanks but it is over. if u saw the post under...he broke up w/ me at 9:27 pm last night..but i will get to this contest i promise i wont ditch it.

briddy-thanks for the encouragement. i was single for exactly 1 yr 2 months 28 days when my now..ex (bleh that sounds bad) asked me out the 1st time....so i know there'll be others..i just despise being single...meh w/e

aww feel better hun! It sucks I know. I broke up with my xguy (rents told me to) the week b4 christmas... =] *hugs* hope everything is okay!

♥Ciao

thanks. u kno wat i hate the most. hes talkin 2 me right now...he can see my icon clearly says heart broken..my font is all...grey...w/ a black background. my away messages keep saying..im not ok. and all this stuff..and he acts as if he didnt do anything and hes talking to me as if we're still goin out or something. bah. i hate boys. but then again..i love them. w/e

oh man what a cock face.. guyz just don't realise how a girls feeling sometimes do they?

lol. i love ur insult thats really funny 2 me. no i guess he doesnt. he said sry again yesterday...i think we just need 2 talk about y he broke up w/ me. ill try n judge this 2morro or the next day.

Is the contest closed?

I'd like to submit a poem.

ohk then.. soundz great :)

gem im wanting 2 close the contest r u gonna turn in ur poem...? u as well the world fell.

well i sent them messages hopefully theyll have em in soon so i can get this contest over w/. at least im not crying anymore. and i promise i wun let my bad attitude towarrds this contest affect the judging:P

um..a stroll on the beach is not a title i have up there.....:/...?

lol... um so how many entries are you waiting for?

2. still. i havent gotten emails back from em either...hmmmmmm...well i said 2day or tomorrow 2 them...so hopefully a.s.a.p.

ohk sweet as

:( still no replies..dang

oh dam wat r u gona do if they don't reply soon?

I'm trying to do Kissed By An Angel.

I'll have it in as soon as possible. i think I'll do it during School Lunch and hpfully have it in by the end of school.

So i'm trying to get it in.

ok. so its u and gem we're waitng on...hmm..i wonder where gem is. she said shed have it in by the weekend b4..

oh. do u know if shes been leaving comments on other discussion boards? cos she might have just forgotten or something.

yeah i saw her in another board. ill just keep trying.

I'll have to drop out. It was my nan's funeral yesterday and i haven't wrote a poem since she died and i still don't feel up to it. Sorry