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  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    CLOSED FOR JUDGING!

    Okay, so I want happy love poems. Give me smiles.
    Rules:
    no profanity (not even little words)
    no erotica or ANY sexual content
    must rhyme
    NOTHING RELIGIOUS

    Have fun!

    One winner!
    3 comments and votes!
    Charisma*

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    17 years ago

    New?

    or can it be old?

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    either or...doesn't matter :)
    Charisma*

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    17 years ago

    Blinded By Love

    Last night as we lay in my bed in each other's arms,
    I realized how happy I was, and how safe I am from harm.
    Our noses touch as we gazed into each other's eyes,
    Then you said something that caught me by surprise.

    You said to me, I want to wake up next to you everyday,
    Marry you, and be together until our hair is old and gray.
    I really do love you, and think you're the one for me,
    I think that you and I are seriously meant to be.

    We kissed as I smiled in pure happiness,
    With those words I lost all doubt and stress.
    I confessed I had felt the same (and that is true)
    So I replied, I really do love you too!

    We kissed some more, as a single tear formed in my eye,
    He didn't see it, but I was so happy I could cry.
    Just when I thought he couldn't get any more sweet,
    He said something to me that truly swept me off my feet.

    I want to fall asleep with you in my arms forever,
    I think that we truly do belong together.
    Last night I had a dream of our wedding day,
    Sweetie I love you, so come whatever may.

    I fell into your arms; I couldn't help but smile,
    I haven't been this happy in a very long while.
    Never imagined I'd find made for just me from above,
    But I've fallen for you; I'm blinded by love.

    ~*Who Cares?*~
    (He Does)

    hope thats ok. btw in the 1st line..i hope u dun take that as sexual cuz if u do thats not what i meant we were watchin a movie lol

  • Bryan
    17 years ago

    closest thing to a happy love poem

    A Forever Love
    by Bryan

    These last 5 months have gone by fast,
    but my love for you will forever last.
    The way I feel, I cannot say,
    even though I feel it every day.
    My heart is set on your pretty face,
    It keeps me alive in this haunted place.
    My feelings for you run far, vast, and deep,
    a day without your beautiful smile makes me weep.
    I sit here now as the days roll by,
    thinking back and wondering why.
    That I didn't tell you from the start,
    when you said hello, you stole my heart.
    Don't want it back I just want you,
    to come back to me, my love is true.
    I want to know if you love me,
    if you do then I will guarantee.
    That I wont love anyone ever again,
    cause our love will last until the end.

    Bryan Hunt © 2006

  • The Queen of Spades
    17 years ago

    Only You

    Crowded room,
    Filled with nothing
    But you, only you
    Catch your gaze
    Oh, your eyes
    Burning ever so bright
    Turn away
    As blush creeps in
    Magnetic field
    Takes me out of body
    Close to yours
    The inaudible fragrance
    Of sweat and honey
    Draws me in
    I'm captivated
    The earth is so full, but
    There's only you

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Have You Ever Fallen So Hard?
    by BriBri .x. ♥

    Have you ever fallen so hard
    For someone you don’t really know
    But the first time you talked to them.
    They had you right there at ‘hello’?

    Have you ever fallen so hard
    For a completely perfect stranger
    But you wanted to get to know them
    Even though it could put you in danger?

    Have you ever fallen so hard
    For someone that you never met
    But when you started talking to them
    You knew it was something you wouldn’t regret?

    Have you ever fallen so hard
    For someone who can make you fly
    By just saying ‘baby, I love you’
    And you just know it’s not a lie?

    Have you ever fallen so hard
    For someone so perfect
    Who’s like an angel to you
    And treats you with so much respect?

    Have you ever fallen so hard
    Or as fast as you can blink, so quick
    But there’s something about him
    And you two just automatically click?

    Baby, I’ve fallen so hard
    You’re my angel from above
    God sent you to me
    To care and to love

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx You Always Seem To Know xX

    You always seem to know
    Exactly what to say
    When I'm feeling down
    Your words make it okay

    Whenever I go quiet
    You let me know it's fine
    You don't force me to talk
    You let me tell in my own time

    It always surprises me
    Whenever I feel low
    Cos I don't have to tell you
    You just always seem to know

    Even when I'm smiling
    Hiding behind a mask
    You know thats it's an act
    You don't even have to ask

    And when it gets to much
    And the tears begin to fall
    You're right there by my side
    Ready to catch them all

    You've made my life much brighter
    With everything you do
    I don't know what I did
    To deserve someone like you! ©

    *Gem*

  • David Marshall
    17 years ago

    I look into your eyes

    By: David Marshall

    I look into your eyes to see the future ahead.
    As long as we are together, no tears are shed.
    Day and night I think of you.
    Wondering if your thinking of me too.

    You brighten my day more than the sun.
    My life was so boring, but now it's so fun.
    Nothing can go wrong, your my glimmering star.
    You've healed my heart, you've healed my scar.

    Living with out you is like life with no air.
    I wish I could show you how much I care.
    I was in a shadow of great despair.
    Then I turned around and you were there.

    You saved me from a life of torment.
    You healed and helped with the love you sent.
    I thank God every day I met your kind soul.
    It's easy to say my heart you stole.

    I look into your eyes and begin to smile.
    Risking everything for you is quite worthwhile.
    I look into your eyes, it's you I think of.
    I look into your eyes, and say it's you I love.

    I look into your eyes, I'll never leave you.
    I was so sad, but now my life's a new.
    I'm so Happy my sorrow now dies.
    At the moment I look into your eyes.

  • debbylyn
    17 years ago

    One Wish

    Elusive love sought not my heart
    Impostors did seek refuge there.
    A curse upon my weary soul
    Soon lifted in your tender care.

    Your name invokes a melody,
    My heart hums in your embrace;
    The lyrics of our song are penned
    As I gaze upon your face.

    I've one wish for time eternal,
    To grant our love clemency,
    And take away this distance
    That keeps you apart from me.

    For true love has a haven
    Within my longing soul it dwells
    If my one wish be granted
    Only trust and time will tell.

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Reasons Why I Love You
    by ♣ Lucky ♣

    I love the way you smile
    And the way you say you care
    How you tell me not to go
    And how you say youll always be there

    I love the way you kiss me
    How you leave me wanting more
    How your hugs feel like home
    A feeling Ive never felt before

    I love how you tell me Im beautiful
    And when I look into your eyes
    Theres something inside of them
    That makes me finally realize

    I love the way youre there for me
    When no one else will be
    I love the way you support and cheer
    And come to see just me

    I love the way my one look
    Can bring you to your knees
    I dont have to say a word
    I never mutter please

    I love the way you hold me
    And how our hands fit perfectly
    How you and I go together
    How people know us as we

    I love the way youre goofy
    How youre not afraid to show
    Whatever it is youre feeling inside
    So everyone else can know

    I love the way you tease me
    But how not to be mean
    How I tease you about other girls
    And you, about the boys Ive seen

    I love the way your hair
    Used to fall around your face
    But you cut it oh so short
    I just seems out of place

    I love the way you say my name
    And how you understand
    The way you hold me by my waist
    Or just take me by the hand

    I love the way you tell me things
    For no one else to hear
    How you whisper softly in my ear
    Ive never ever felt so near

    I love the way I can tell you
    The secrets Ive kept inside
    And how you love me no matter what
    All these emotions I no longer hide

    I love the way your eyes
    Can lock right into mine
    When you stop to tell me
    Everything will be just fine

    I love the way you call
    All the times you said you would
    I love the way you talk to me
    Even though you should

    I love the way you kiss my head
    And blow away my hair
    Its those little things
    That let me know you care

    I love the way youre happy
    And know Im happy too
    Id never be anywhere else
    Than stuck right here with you

    (Ciao ~)

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Thanks to all who have entered. Keep 'em coming!
    Charisma*

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    Don't Wanna Say Goodbye

    Since you've been gone
    I've got nothing of anything
    Can't do something to live
    Spend my whole day crying

    No day or night
    You used to hold me tight
    Now the moon is looking me like
    I'm just so guilty

    I can't take it
    Even the flowers you gave me
    Sing along like
    Come back to me

    No matter what you have said
    No matter how i treated you
    No matter what we've done
    To each other

    Won't say goodbye
    Don't wanna say goodbye

    And the sun is smiling to us
    Shining brightly above us
    As long as we have soul alright
    No doubt our hearts belong
    To each other...

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    My Confession

    I'll tell you of my secret confessions,
    Of all my lies and imperfections.
    I'll tell you of all the love to display,
    For the hungry soul has much to say.

    I'll start out with a simple question
    To begin my tale of confessions.
    Have you ever felt a love that grew
    You know you will never love anew?

    The screaming does not protest,
    Against a simple soft caress.
    A small hidden truth is this:
    I fell in love by a gentle kiss.

    True love can never be explained;
    It can tell a story but never be named.
    My tale ends with a final confession:
    I love with all my heart; that's my imperfection.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    17 years ago

    i know this just opened..but im curious..when does this contest end? no rush just bored n curious:)

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    *Perfect*

    I love the way your hair sticks up
    After you run your fingers through it
    I love how you are so polite
    It's like your never gonna quit
    I love how we're the same, but different
    But it's something I won't admit

    I love the hugs you give me
    When I just want to cry
    I love the feeling I get
    When I look into your eyes
    I love how tight you hold me
    When you say goodbye

    I love the look you give me
    If I do something blonde
    I love the way you're with me
    Even when you're gone
    I love everything about you
    You don't have one single flaw

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    when i feel I have enough poems...lol...or the time to judge it all!
    Sorry I am not being more specific!
    Charisma*

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    17 years ago

    NVM that didnt rhyme i htink enough. it was DQd in another contest for not rhyming. hum.. so i enter this one. my short poem. =]

    Simply Put
    by Sociopathetic [Lauren]

    One Look
    All it took,
    One glance
    You had your chance

    One Look
    All it took,
    One smile
    Every once in a while.

    One simple action
    caused a crazy,
    chain reaction
    You caused me to,
    Fall so fast for you

    Simply put you only said
    one little word
    that now sticks in my head

    As i passed you by
    all you did was
    simply wave,
    and simply say 'Hi.'

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    17 years ago

    its cool i was just curious lol.

  • BECCA lessTHANthree
    17 years ago

    Grow Old With You
    by Becca ♥

    Lying here
    On your floor
    There's nothing that
    I could want more

    Than being here
    So close to you
    In love so great
    In love so true

    I hear your heart
    It's every beat
    and every sound
    Surrounding me

    I see your face
    A memory
    Of you becoming
    Part of me

    I feel your breath
    I'm in a daze
    So magical
    Close to your face

    I smell your scent
    So embracing
    Wonderful...
    And breathtaking

    I taste your lips
    Touching mine
    I am floating
    On could nine

    And I can't wait
    Please know it's true
    I want to
    Grow old with you

  • BECCA lessTHANthree
    17 years ago

    when is this contest going to be judged?

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    Hope yah like it! :)

    "Creating Memories"

    I stood by the sea
    Felt the mist-filled breeze on my face
    The tide washed over my bare feet
    As my soul your arms embraced.

    The sand remembered each of our steps
    As we walked hand-in-hand;
    The moon setting softly on our skin
    As the night captured our hearts in a blend.

    And as I look into your icy eyes
    They melt with the tears you cry
    And they silently promise,
    "I'll never leave your side."

    My fingers are tangled in yours
    and my mind enveloped by your care...
    If the whole world crumbled down
    God, himself, would us spare.

    So let us never this moment forget
    Never let it escape our minds
    Rather as we leave here tonight
    We shall anticipate the next time...
    we create another memory.

  • Michelle18
    17 years ago

    when is the deadline?

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    I'm closing tomorrow evening. Sunday that is.
    Charisma*

  • oldthings
    17 years ago

    I'm not sure if this counts, but it's the love poem that i like best out of anything i've written.

    "Don't Forget"

    Oh how great life can be!
    The least expected things,
    Finding someone you can love,
    The best part of being human beings.

    What If we could not feel this thing?
    If we could not feel the joy,
    If we could not feel the pain of love?
    Would not life then be a ploy?

    A waste of time, a game, a joke,
    No point in seeing it through?
    To have loved and lost is painful, yes.
    But the saying's no less true.

    Do the heartache of the fights,
    And the pain felt at the end,
    Make the good times you have felt
    Seem any less of a god send?

    Think before you answer,
    And think now very hard.
    If you could take it all away,
    Would you take away the scars?

    Now with the scars your heart has grown,
    I want you to remember what you gained.
    Remember sitting on her porch,
    Or kissing her in the rain.

    Remember the warmth that you shared
    And walking in the park
    Remember the look she gave only you
    And things done in the dark.

    How perfect things felt when you held her close.
    How you missed her when she was gone,
    How you loved the smell of her hair,
    And how her will could be so strong.

    That subtle way she flirted,
    That only you could see,
    And then how out of nowhere
    She would kiss you openly.

    How great she was, how you would brag,
    How proud you were that she was your girl,
    How even if you bickered, and fought
    You'd still give her your whole world.

    How she looked, and how she moved,
    How she smiled, and smelt,
    The way she said I love you,
    That would make the most frozen heart melt.

    Think back, think back, and remember all,
    Don't let any memories escape,
    Look at them and tell me now,
    Was the love you had not great?

    Parted though you may be now,
    And gone as she may be,
    Does your heart not gain a smile
    As you review your memories?

    I think it does, and I think you know,
    That given the choice to forget,
    You would hold on dear with all your might,
    And chose to remember your regrets.

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    There were so many AMAZING poems in this contest, that I couldn't just choose one winner! You guys truly WOWED me with your talent! Soo

    1st goes to xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex!!!!
    It was a beautiful poem, with a very good ending! I loved the ending!

    2nd goes to ♣ Lucky ♣!!!! Your poem was perfect in repetition and sweet stanzas. It just put a smile on my face and was sooo heartfelt!

    3rd is a tie between Becca and Midnight Sun! Each of yours were good for different reasons. I enjoyed the simplicity of yours Becca. Midnight Sun, I loved your expressions of the beach and how they perfectly intertwined with thoughts of love.

    First place has three comments. Second place two, and each of you in third get one comment each. I'll do them as soon as possible!

    Also, I wanted to mention the poem "Don't Forget" It was beautiful and heart touching. It truly stated that you never would take back love. It was outstanding in that!

    Congrats everyone!

    Charisma*

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Oh, wow.
    I won a 'love' contest.
    Lol. This baffles me.
    I'm really glad you like[d] it. That makes me smile.

    Any comments and votes are appreciated. So, thank you tons. =]

    And congradulations to the other three!

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    aww this is awesome. I'm glad that you like mine. (Lucky) you can choose the two you would like to do, I'm really not picky. =] Thanks again, that poem (means) meant a lot to me... =\

    ♥Ciao

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    Thanks Charisma! And congrats everyone! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Charisma--
    Thank you for the comments.
    I really enjoyed them and I'm glad you enjoyed reading.
    I like how you saw my poems, as well... in your own mind's eye. Wonderful to hear people put thought into it.
    Thanks again for the comments.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    No problem! It was a pleasure! Congrats everyone! I have the first two places done!
    Charisma*

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Thank you Charisma! Your comments were very helpful and I really appreciate them. =] I liked your contest a lot!

    ♥Ciao