WITHIN TEMPTATION Contest! 2 WEEKS ONLY

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WINNERS:
1. Debbylyn
2. Daenerys Stormborn [The Sphinx]
3. Liquid Dreams

May I reserve The Swan Song?

The Swan Song

Swans in the moonlight
Circling the rivulet, so cold
Illuminating feathers white
Shimmering and bold
Arched necks, curved grace
Dancers upon the water's frame
Refinement in the quiet face
Alike, but never the same
A ritual to gentle livid eyes
A mating waltz for two
Elegance uncompromised
Polished beauty deeply true
Blossoms of pure esteem
Statuesque they unite
A heart formed in the stream
Then suddenly take flight

I'd like to reserve Angels please x

I'd like to reserve
2. Jillian (I'd give my heart).
Thanks. :]

May I reserve Forsaken?

May I reserve, It's the Fear?
Thanks!
Charisma*

May i reserve Somewhere?

and wanna know the rules,i don't know them

may i reserve memories

may I reserve Aquarius? and could you post the official rules please?

Can I reserve a dangerous mind? And can we know the rules, lol. Thanks! :)
~Midnight Sun

I'd like to reserve pale.. :)

thanks a lot!

x

It's the Fear

It's the fear of letting go
Making me grip so tight.
It's the fear of losing you
Keeping me up at night.

The chance that maybe
Your face I will not see,
Has me clinging to your soul
So as you're not set free.

I don't think tomorrow
Is worth fighting for today,
If I know I'll be without
The one I love's sweet face.

You are my entire world.
It's my fault I'm in so deep.
Now, it's like a game
And I'm playing it for keeps.

Love is worth everything.
It's everything I need.
The more I am around you
The more hunger I must feed.

See, that's why you can't go.
Your a craving I must have.
And if I let you go,
Would you really come back?

So, it's the fear of losing you
Keeping me up at night.
It's the fear of letting go
Making me grip so tight.

By: Charisma*

I added some basic rules

~*~"Memories"~*~

The smell of you; your fragrance.
The sweet aroma lingers.
I smell it everywhere I go,
From the tips of the Earth
To the deepest, darkest place.
It seems as though I'm followed
Not by a predator,
Unless that's what you are
The way you ripped my heart.
The memories of you haunt me
I can feel your presence near me
Though you don't care anymore.
Photographs of you chip my soul
Like sandpaper on my lips, you are gone
And all that remains are memories.

xA Little Bit Dramaticx

Was that your poem for this contest or was it just something else?

Liquid Dreams-
The title was Reserved Already

Forsaken

I’m captured by the cascade,
A simple snowfall
Floating, fluttering, dancing in the sky,
Symphony caring not the destination
Only the beauty of the waltz
Lighting in landscape altering display

As I keep my heart contained,
No symphonic release in this room,
Fancy patterned strains hold brief temptation
A white interlude that melts, forsaken,
In the monotony of my quiet cell
The beauty of Winter’s serenade silenced

Somewhere

Everytime I feel like a homeless
Sleeping under a bridge
No way i do this but
I'm lonesome just as they are

Sometimes I feel like a bedridden
Passing days in bed
No way I'd be like this but
I'm powerless just as they are

I need to do something
Something to spend my life
I see a teacher in a suit
I admit I imitate them now

I need to go somewhere
Far away from my hometown
A place that I think I belong
Somewhere familiar now

Hope you like it

Never mind Liquid dreams, I'll count yours in, I didn't reserve it on time.

thank you!!! =)

lol, no problem

when's the cut-off date? Thanks! :)
~Midnight Sun

Something else...these don't have to be lyrics do they?

Hope this counts! And enjoy! :)

A Dangerous Mind:

Living with you ... I've had to fight to survive
I'm existing with a mystery, in darkness you thrive

That stern look in those icy cold eyes
Make me feel as though me you despise

I go to sleep each night no knowing what you'll do
Will you let me live, or with me are you through?

Please don't stare at me in such a way
Tears are welling as you lead me astray

Please let me go, and let my skin have breath
Do you truly hate me...are you leading me to my death?

I would have never told you yes at all
If only I had known that your mind would fall

I never wanted to live in a way so blind
Who would have known of your dangerous mind

ya, when is the 2 weeks over?

hmm... I guess the last one is "Stand My Ground"? I don't mind; I'm happy with it :) Please reserve me!

Stand My Ground (2 Rictameters)

Deep down
She wants to win
She's trying to push me
I know that she wants to hurt me
Every breath almost turns into regret
When she laughs, I envy her joy
She just loves to tease me
Her jokes kill me
Deep down

I won't
Let her in... she
Can't win; I won't let her
She flashes her pearly teeth, tries
To hurt me with her smile, as if I will
Surrender when I realize
She has him; and not I
I can't let her
I won't
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Rictameter:2/4/6/8/10/8/6/4/2

last and first lines of a rictameter must be the same

Come on People!

6 RESERVED GET THEM IN!!

When is the deadline? :)

This SUNDAY is the DEADLINE!!

Results IN

yay!!! thank you!

Thanks so much! I'm honored!