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  • Teria
    17 years ago

    I love this idea. :]
    I'm in!

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    I did..

    Nothing Gold Stays.
    ( I really liked your poem )

    Spring, oh yes, so far away.
    Yet, we blossomed so freely.
    Our dreams became one,
    And our lives became fun.
    Summer's but a fantasy,
    So, majestic and beautiful.
    Right by your side,
    I could've waited forever.
    As my love grew stronger,
    My heart grew weaker.
    Just as the leaves in the fall,
    I began to fade quickly.
    Lost you all at once,
    While my soul became cold.
    Awaiting winter so I fit in,
    and you become my past.
    Then, come spring..
    You'll completely melt away,
    Proven; Nothing Gold Stays.

  • Bridget
    17 years ago

    cool im in , so i can just do it on any of your poems?

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    When's the due date? Cause I'm not sure I can do it right now but it does sound REALLY cool. And can more than one poet do the same poem? Or must we reserve? Thanks! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    are we allowed to completely change the genre...if so ur poem this time is a love poem but id like to change it to like...dark/death/suicide type

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    can i take the alphabet format and create a poem?

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    totally!! ill have to do it tomorrow though...

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    alright thx....and...unless ur on vaca for all of feb...thats a long time for a contest i think lol

  • Bridget
    17 years ago

    are we allowed to change the title of the poem?

  • Bridget
    17 years ago

    ok.. um im in quite a few contests at the mo so if i enter my entry might be later rather than sooner

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Hey i finished mine...The poem i used was...This time...u might not like it cuz ur version was a love poem and i turned it suicidal lol but oh well...

    You can either read it here...or see what else i added to the desciption...i will post a link to that at the bottom...

    This time

    You shine like a star,
    Whenever you see light,
    No matter how dark it is,
    You help me through the fight,

    I lay here all alone,
    Society seems so far away,
    But I crave conversation,
    Theres so much I need to say,

    A future that doesnt fit,
    But Im still dreaming,
    This isnt actually happening,
    But inside Im screaming,

    I think we've gone too far,
    We've crossed the line,
    Do you feel it,
    We cut too deep this time
    ----------------------------------------------------------

    Heres the other one:

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=831980

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    cmon people submit somethin...make her feel like the good poet she isnt lmao jk ily

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    oops, i forgot i was in this one!!! im doing it rite now...

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    *And Ignorance Was Bliss*

    I'm crying on the outside,
    But I'm dying within.
    I go through everyday,
    Wishing we could just go back again.

    Whenever I called, you were always there,
    I can't stand to be without you.
    You've been gone far too long,
    And now I feel like I don't know you.

    Now, I wish I did something
    But I couldn't see
    I was blinded by
    Stupidity

    And love?
    Is just a four-letter word.
    It doesn't mean anything,
    It's so absurd.

    I hate you,
    Because you promised we'd never part.
    But I hate myself more,
    Because I've kept you in my heart.

    *i changed some parts, i didn't want to do that much to it... i liked it b4*

    Forever♥Yours