Need your opinion please help

I am going into a competition for poerty in my school, i was just woundering if you guys could have a look at my poems i have on this site an if you could vote for my best one please it would really mean the world and be very helpfull please please please be very truthfull even if it is critisisum i dont mind

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thank you :)

I like the poem "FORGIVE ME" and think that one would be a good poem to use, also I like "The Boy"

I really liked your Time poem. However, I think you may change a few things to it. The meaning is nice, but you could make it stronger.

I hope you don't mind but I got bored. I took your poem and messed around with it.j Here's what I got. Just let me know if I can add it to my collection of poems, I'll link yours at the top of course.

It's Time

It's time for a dreadfully beautiful morning,
When the rays reflect upon
Her departing gown,
And the time for the light,
Shines with prominence;
It is time to depart.

Time for my life to branch to the sky
Maybe I will fall,
Beneath the earth,
Or maybe,
I soar through the stars,
That the Gods laid before us.

It's your time to let go,
And hope for the best,
Your little girl is flying your nest,
To find meaning for her life.

You have kept her safe
Kept her strong through all the faults,
So rest easy now
My dear mother,
The pain won/t last long,
It won't be there at all,
Knowing that I will survive,
Because you were there...

I'll go through and fix yours in a better manner as a comment. It'll keep your orignally stuff there. It will just be minor changes. I'll have to do it tomorrow.

my favourite is CONFUSED!!! i LOVED IT!!! its a gud read. its a bit lengthy but you finished it off nicely........ if ur going to put something in a school contest..... enter more then one..... ur a brilliant writter!!!

wow your poems are really good i like then keep up the good work..check mine out Mandz