I need your opinion

I am going into a competition for poerty in my school, i was just woundering if you guys could have a look at my poems i have on this site an if you could vote for my best one please it would really mean the world and be very helpfull please please please be very truthfull even if it is critisisum i dont mind

your opinion counts
thank you :)

your poems are all good... and you obdviously put your heart into your writing... i dont think anyone can criticise your poems because there is nothing seriously wrong with them, just paragraph your poems is my only advice. you have the basics captured, as in the language you have used
so good work and good luck in your competition

sarah

Which one do you think wuld have a good chance ?

i sent you an email!!

its about the

'its not just me' poem

Thanks but i am in school at mo i will get it later thanks