Fairytales.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    A happy ending or not...
    You decide the fate, the destiny.

    Choose a title from below and follow the rules. That easy I tell you.

    RULES:
    >>New poem
    >>One per person
    >>Must rhyme
    >>Must be fairytale
    >>Choose a title from below
    >>Have fun, be silly, be whatever.
    >>Profanity is prohibited

    (I don't mind if the poem comes out depressing.)

    The contest ends on the 26, tomorrow. (Or when the poems are completed)

    Any questions? Just let me know.

    TITLES:
    Beauty vs. Beast

    Three Wishes

    Wicked

    Glass Slippers--> ∫Bëløveđ∫

    Winter's Beauty-->disturbed one

    Through A Looking Glass

    The Ugly Duckling-->Daenerys Stormborn [The
    Sphinx]

    To Neverland-->*Charisma*

    xx

    xx

    I'll just wait untill those titles are taken if they aren't through with by tomorrow. BTW---> One title per person.

  • silvershoes
    17 years ago

    May I reserve The Ugly Duckling please?

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Yeap.

  • Mommy And Me
    17 years ago

    is this still ending today??

    i won't be able to write one until after my exams tomorow for i am studyingso i can pass my finals.

    -/2 Terra

    ps- if you hold it off till tomorow night i should be able to do one.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    well ill judge about 15-20 hours from now. Hows that sound?

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    To Neverland please
    Charisma*

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    To Neverland (Peter Pan...with a twist)

    Slipping into fairy dust
    Thinking happy thoughts
    Following a young boy
    Where troubles are not

    Out of my bedroom window
    Soaring into a star
    Reminding me that fantasy
    Really is that far

    But gladly I go with him
    Escaping my life down here
    Where I worry all the time
    And am constantly in tears

    Almost there, it's beautiful
    More than the eye can take
    Waterfalls, and oceans
    An extravagant landscape

    This young boy that I've followed
    And several of his friends
    Showed me an amazing place
    Where good times don't end.

    Pirates and villains lurk in the dark
    But never win any wars
    Safe within the forests thick walls
    Vines as my safeguarding doors

    At one time, I thought I'd go back
    To the land where time goes on
    But I decided I would rather stay
    Than live a life full of such wrong

    And I found out in Neverland
    You do grow up just a bit
    So I'm glad I stayed with this boy
    And this journey I didn't quit

    For he grew up to be a young man
    And a lady I turned out as well
    But we stopped at a sweet young age
    And for each other we fell

    Now I am his beloved woman
    And he is my one and only man
    Far away from the struggles of earth
    And all of old age's plans

    We can keep on sharing good times
    And loving each other forever
    The beauty of this wonderful place
    Is that you leave....well....never!

    By: Charisma*

    (i've always loved the story of peter pan. It's my favorite, but i think that wendy and peter should have stayed together...grown up a little...and got married. I think we need a break from reality and the fact that she never stayed was disappointing. Now I've had the chance to recreate it. Thanks!)

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    im glad. the end of that. jeez, how do i describe it, but i liked it.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Any other takers?

  • Mommy And Me
    17 years ago

    THREE WISHES!!!

    haha im glad this contest is not ending right now :) tehe

    well anywhos instead of putting my screen name can you put ( -/2 Terra ) i am changing it to that right now

    -/2 Terra

  • Mommy And Me
    17 years ago

    THREE WISHES!!!

    haha im glad this contest is not ending right now :) tehe

    well anywhos instead of putting my screen name can you put ( -/2 Terra ) i am changing it to that right now

    -/2 Terra

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    mhmm...
    but i dont know if judging will be done so quickly or not. i can get very busy, as you guys probably know. im sure you all are busy too, occassionally at least.

    How's this sound:
    1st place-->5 comments
    2nd place-->4 comments
    3rd place-->3 comments

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    anyone else want to join this contest?

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    me, please!

    May i reserve Glass Slippers?

    thank you!

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    Glass Slippers

    Classical fairytale
    Wishes take a longshot
    Knights on horses must prevail
    For endings with good thoughts

    Ever think, did Little Miss Cindy
    End up truly
    Her small feet squeeze slippers
    After step mom hurt her

    She's dressed in her beauty
    Ready to dance
    Trying to find a prince
    Whom she'll give a chance

    She's natural, hardworking
    Been bent up with hurt
    Barely breathing
    Hands covered in dirt

    May tonight be a night
    She'll forget her spite
    If it's worth the fight
    Dance your heart out

    Moving to the beat
    Dancing with
    Her own two feet
    Becoming her own music

    Hair always tied behind
    Is finally let loose
    A ball gown did she find
    Along with Mother's shoes

    Party in the dark
    Glowsticks light it up
    A walk around the park
    Listening to ducks

    No one wanted to dance
    You didn't get a chance
    To find a guy, to love someone
    Who'd treat you like a queen

    Night is young
    But day is old
    As larks do quiet
    The sun loses gold

    Suddenly, sitting
    Alone at a bench
    There he is, smiling
    Looking, staring

    Deep into your eyes
    His heartwarming gaze
    Sending shivers down your spine
    And melting the ice around your heart

    Step mum's chains have broken
    As you steal away
    The fairytale won't end
    At least for today...

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    I would like to see others take this contest on. I want to quickly fill in the spots, and have the poems written.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    I wrote one for Beauty vs. Beast,
    But I don't think it's 'fairytale-ish' enough for you...
    That's why I didn't enter.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Let me see it anyway. I may except it. idk. but i do want to see what happened.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    [Edit]

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    wow. ur right i cant take it but that is really good.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Well..
    Thanks for reading it anyways. I tried. =s Sorry. I might try another title later.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    o its fine. i dont mind if you try another title.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    any one else?

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    YUP. Anyone else?!?!?!?!

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Cmmon. How hard can this be?

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    I killed two of the titles. There are three spots left.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    o ok. good luck catching up!

  • Mommy And Me
    17 years ago

    OH NO! sorry i totally fogot about this contest. :(

    but right now i am to busy with my family and stuff so sorry, i don't have enough time to write anything right now . you can take me off the reserve list :(

  • silvershoes
    17 years ago

    Crap, I need to write this poem....Hopefully I'll get a chance today. I actually really do want to write The Ugly Duckling :) So don't worry about any lack of interest on my part.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    haha. no problem. do hwat you wish. at this point, do as many as you wish. haha.

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    can i have winters beauty please?

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    sure you may have it disturbed.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Any one else?

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Ok. I'm sorta bored of waiting. So please give me the poems by the 8th of february. I may judge that night, or the day/weekend after. If I only get a few submissions I'm going to go ahead and just give them 5 comments each.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Come on!

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    ANY ONE....
    GOING ONCE!

  • silvershoes
    17 years ago

    Ok, this isn't my best...but I figured, I'd better write this poem sooner than later! Here you go.

    Ugly Duckling

    Calmly she waits for recognition
    But none see the hidden veil
    Behind a face of incognition
    She rests within an empty shell

    Those who speak her name
    Have naught but approbation
    For she plays a fair game
    Be it her only bequest sensation

    Ugly duckling, swimming alone
    Beating feat against a current
    Falling upon frozen stone
    She sees not her sole deterrent

    For one who holds no beauty
    Harnesses what lies within
    Embracing deep fluidity
    In a world of shadow sin

    A shame to live in such a place
    An ugly duckling
    With an ugly face

    Such an ugly, perfect thing.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Going twice!!!!!

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Ok. I'm judging in a few. So, in last minute?

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    1. beloved
    2. charisma
    3. stormborn.

    congratz.'

    ill give you all 5 comments each.