Never ending poem :-]

there was a fat cat,
who loved the smell of fish,
who beg its owner,
it must be its only dish

he begged and begged
his owner to buy
that smelly fish
or he would cry

the owner boomed,
in a loud voice
you silly cat
its gonna be my choice

he sits back
wearing his new cap
sipping hir beer
and thinks he might get a dear

a deer a buck
a elk a moose
maybe no shot
just a noose

but whatever is there
It would be such fun
To go out in the misty air
With the peeping sun

so he takes his child,
out to the winters storm
headed to the video shop
to buy some porn

That wasn't very nice
for you to have to say
but why am I complaining
I don't care anyway

wut is that supposed to mean? why do u have to critique other peoples poems? its not very nice.

We now have damn philosophers on our hands, speaking of irony and injustice.. look at your speech it looks like someone has allowed you to escape a child's classroom on "cookie break". All I have to say is keep it up..

Bravo Zulu..

I have on more thing to say
To you Ms. Anthropic
You don't initmidate me at all
infact I think you're psychotic

I think its pretty
interesting
that people go on
arguing

But I guess atleast
your making rhymes
and they make sense,
unlike mine. XD

Atleast it sounds nice,
Music to your ears
Even if its not so great,
as long as it appears.

Can't we just keep the story going? It sounded fun and I was reading a long and then got here =S