New Contest. xD

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    I'm holding another contest..

    The topic is:

    Cheating. Not a person cheating on you.. but you cheating on someone. I want you to write a poem about how you cheated on the one you love. [You can make it up.. Doesn't have to be real]

    RULES:
    1. MUST be about the topic -duh-
    2. MUST be your own -duh, duh.-
    3. MINIMUM cussing, or none at all
    4. MUST reserve a spot.

    Winners:
    First place.. 7 comments [maybe more knowing me :] ]
    Second place..5 comments [maybe more]
    Third place.. 3 comments [maybe more]

    I say 'maybe more' ; cos my last contest were the same amount.. but i did like, 10 for first.. 7 for second.. and 5 for third. ;; it just all depends. i get caught up!

    RESERVES HAVE TO BE IN BETWEEN 3-5 DAYS!

    OH && YOUALLL have a chance for my favs. :]

    So have fun!

    & it'll end when i have like.. 10 poems or so.

    Get to writin'.

    SPOTS OPEN:

    1. xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex [[DONE]]
    2. Corey [[RESERVED]]
    3. Sociopathetic [Lauren] [[RESERVED]]
    4. ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ [[RESERVED]]
    5. ¤Kitty¤ [[RESERVED]]
    6. Forever♥Yours [[DONE]]
    7. Twisted Heart [[DONE]]
    8. Ray Lawson [[DONE]]
    9. shay [[DONE]]
    10. *Gem* [[DONE]]

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    May I:
    Post a poem I wrote about cheating that doesn't have a signifigant person? It's really toward someone cheating on me, but I really think you'd like the poem..and I'm really proud of it... =s I know it's a lot to ask, but I thought I'd ask anyways...
    Thanks for your time.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Um.. Sheena, yeah. i guess you can do that :]

  • Corey
    18 years ago

    Umm..I'd like to reserve a spot...but could you say when the poems are due by? like...I know you said when you get 10 poems but if I reserve a spot when do you want it by?

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Um.. like three-five days?

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    18 years ago

    Reservation Pour Moi Remercie?
    (Reservation for me thanks a ton)

    xxx

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    sure thing, hun.

  • ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ
    18 years ago

    Id like to enter

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Kay. :]

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Acid Hate

    Press your body close to his, lust for what you cannot confide,
    Tease me with your thoughtless, deathly lips, look around through eyes of cyanide.

    To my ears that wish not to hear -
    "I do not love him" you spit and plea,
    "You are my love" you lie awake; your body will not satisfy me.

    Press this hate deep into your skin of forgotten, buried lies.
    Tell me of the night you spent, uttering sexual cries.

    Piercing left-overs is all we are, moving beneath your frame,
    Sex appeal and all the lies,
    when you finish your laughing game.

    "I want a child, a miracle, someone to love me and share ecstasy";
    Spread my arms and stab my heart, take away my dignity.

    Take this acid, full of my burning love and hate,
    Find the words buried deep by fate . . .

    You're never happy with lies covering your eyes,
    You're never happy with your sexual cries.

    So press your body closer to his and lust for what you cannot confide,
    Tease me with your cheating lips; look through eyes of cyanide.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    YAY. XD

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Come on people!

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Anyone?

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    welll...idk. if i can find time i will.
    but it wont be true though..ill have to think about it.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    ill just reserve you. If you can't.. tell me and ill unreserve.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    ok.

  • disturbed one
    18 years ago

    im not gonna enter but i think this will be a hard contest for some ppl because of the minimal swearing rule lol...

    umm...can it be like...talking in the 3rd person...like...she was left in the wake of his terrible mistake...rather then like...i cheated on u and now u should cry...foo lmao...umm ya...can it be 3rd person?

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    yea i think the expectations are too much if you want more to enter. make it just a cheating poem. arent u asking ppl to write about how THEY cheated on others. i don't think many write poems on that, even though id think thats funny. doubt anyone would want to share that...unless their point of view was different. ooh i just thought of an idea for the poem.

    can it just be made up?

  • Sandra D
    18 years ago

    can i reserve a spot?

    thanx!

    Forever♥Yours

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    would like to reserve.
    thanks, jeannie

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    umm...can it be like...talking in the 3rd person...like...she was left in the wake of his terrible mistake...rather then like...i cheated on u and now u should cry...foo lmao...umm ya...can it be 3rd person?

    ^^ Yes.. It can be.

    Kitty, YES. you can make it up. It doesn't have to be true.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Okay. TWO MORE SPOTS LEFT!!

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Shay..You didn't reserve a spot, first.

    Therefore, didn't read the rules..

    But, this one time.. I -WILL- accept your poem.

    Please read the rules next time.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    ONE. more spot left.

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve please?

  • Gem
    18 years ago

    Xx Jeopardized xX

    Lying next to the man she loves
    She feels an overwhelming guilt
    For while he works to keep her safe
    Another relationship was built

    Her friend was to keep her company
    It was just some harmless flirting
    She didn't mean it to go so far
    She can't stand the thought of him hurting

    That night he worked late 'til gone twelve
    Was all to give them a better life
    That was when she slept with her friend
    Dug in and twisted the knife

    She told herself it was just loneliness
    But she knows that's really no excuse
    She had no will power or self control
    She allowed herself to be seduced

    She lies awake and watches him sleeping
    And her heart constricts with pain
    The best thing in her life is jeopardized
    And she only had herself to blame ©

    *Gem*

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    OKay. Now.. just waiting on reservers. xD.

  • Sandra D
    18 years ago

    ooh! ill work on it tonight, i have it in after school tomorrow...

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    OKay, Hunny.

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    Tuesday Afternoons
    by Twisted Heart

    I put the lipstick upon the counter
    As I stare at the one who stares back at me
    A stranger to a friend I once knew
    I've traded her for some male company. .

    I'm patiently waiting in this motel room
    For a man who says he loves me
    But he cannot leave the wife and the kids
    He says they're too weak and too needy.

    She's been my best friend since we were just kids
    I've looked through her eyes for such a long time
    I do hate the way that I've acted on this
    But the feelings for him are getting stronger inside.

    It started as kicks, just a wee bit of fun
    To him, it probably still is
    But his arms, when they hold me, is pleasure
    A feeling I'm finding so hard to resist.

    I long for the time when we'll be together
    I yearn for his touch, He'll be here soon
    Just one day a week, we find time to spend
    His wife's always busy, on this afternoon.

    I hear, as he opens the door to our room
    I give a last look at myself
    I know I should hate the person I see
    But she's living her own kind of hell.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Okay. Just waiting on six more of the reservers. xD

  • Sandra D
    18 years ago

    *Unfaithful*

    I have so many problems right now,
    I know that's not an excuse.
    But you weren't there,
    And he was so sweet.
    He said everything would be alright,
    As he took my hand and kissed it.
    And there we laid, hand in hand.
    He kissed me, so I kissed him back.
    I didn't mean for it to as far as it did.
    But I thought it was okay,
    Because you weren't supposed to find out.
    I wasn't thinking about us,
    And now my heart is filled with guilt.
    I won't blame you if you end this now.
    You didn't do anything to deserve it.
    Because in the end,
    I was the one that was unfaithful.

    *sry, my computer wasn't really working yesterday... that's why i didn't have it in after school. and writing about cheating on someone was harder than i thought!

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    COME ON PEOPLE.

    GET THOSE RESERVES IN.

  • Sandra D
    18 years ago

    tell them that you'll start judging without them... then go mwahahaha!! lol, jk

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    ^^ LMFAO.

    Ok people.. TIME TO HURRY UP & GET THOSE POEMS IN.

  • Sandra D
    18 years ago

    B-(clap clap clap clap)
    B-U-M-P
    wooohooo!

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    GET THE RESERVES IN PEOPLE!!!