NEW Song Title Contest!

CLOSED FOR JUDGING! CLOSED FOR JUDGING! CLOSED FOR JUDGING!
Titles:
Out of your mind-Reserved-Teriaerifrica
Time to burn-Reserved-~*TasH*~
Misunderstood-Done-Sociopathetic [Lauren]
Misery-Done-Wings Of Flames
Lonely Girl-Done-sunsetwithyou
Numb
Take me away-Done-I Still Believe In Destiny...
Forgotten-Reserved->liquid dreams
Fall to pieces-Done-¡Britt!
Trouble-Reserved-Paige
When the time is right-Done-*Charisma*
Bullet in the head-Done-xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
Miracle-Done-princesrainbow
I can't stop the rain-Done- SXE~Skittl3z
Too little, too late-Done♥ leanne ♥

Prizes!
1st Place-10 comments, votes and added to favourites
2nd Place- 5 comments and votes
3rd Place- 3 comments and votes
H/M 2 comments

Closing Date-20th Feb or whenever all the poems are completed if that is earlier.

Have fun!
xx

Reserve me too little too late please :)

does we write a song or just a poem...and umm...can we use lyrics from the actual song if we know what it is?

i will take numb cuz i love linkin park they rox my sox lol

It has to be a poem, I don't want a song, and yeah you can use words from the song if you know what it is, just try not to use to many.
Hope that helps =)
xx

Reserve "Bullet in the head" for me.

Thanks.

when the time is right please!
Charisma*

When the Time is Right

When the time is right
I'll tell you how I feel
I whispered these words
So I didn't forget the deal

The deal between my heart
And the laws within my head
Knowing then I couldn't say
What should have long been said

There was a time those words
Could have been spoken
But I was too young then
And youth can't be broken

Now, I'm finally old enough
To share this heart of mine
But you've found another
In that little gap of time

When the time is right
....I know it will never be
The time is just to haunt
The fact you're not with me

By: Charisma*

alrighty i will get started

can it be old. i have a poem by one of the names..

Could I reserve time to burn please?

jeez...i cant think of anything....

OH WAIT....my friend was telling me something that happened earlier =) i think i can do it

resever me trouble
xD

Yep, it can be old or new.
xx

'Out Of Your Mind'
I'LL TAKE IT.
Thanks.

ill take fall to pieces

Misunderstood
by Sociopathetic [Lauren]

You can hear his headphones blaring
beneath his over-sized hood
you all think he doesn't care
but hes just misunderstood

the cuts on his wrists what make him come
but he has a good reason why
his home life's a disturbing mess
and he wishes to not be alive

his father left when he was three
he was a sick and twisted man
but he comes around once in awhile
and hurts as much as he can

the teachers thinks hes just trouble
and i think that you do to
but nothing thats happened in your life
compares to what he goes through

suicide is not an option
cause that would leave his mom alone
and his so-called father would beat her
and her pain would be unknown

what you don't seem to realize
is that this is his form of relief
he needs to focus his anger
and must control his grief

you think you know what he is like
but you don't have a clue!
he is son more complicated
than others who visit you

you think you've made a breakthrough
when the music stops
you wonder if he just might talk
until you see the clock

he stands up from his chair
and takes off his over-sized hood
he than says in a distant voice
"understanding does no good"

Jeepers! These songs are like AMAZING!!

Come on people, take the titles and get them done!
xx

i'll take forgotten

Only five more to go!

can I reserve cant stop the rain???

~Nudge~

Come on people, start getting your poems in =)

xx

Could I have Lonely Girl? Thanks!

Can I reserve Take Me Away... would that be by chance the Lifehouse song? Just curious =]

♥Ciao

hey sorry im going to unreserve because i just cant write a poem for the title i chose that doesnt suck lol :D

Take Me Away [Acrostic]

Take me away to a far off place
Alone, right now, without your embrace
Keeping to myself, it hurts so much
Ever longing for your touch

Mystified just by the thought of you
Exhausting all options, even though they're few

Always hoping that you'll come to me
Wishing that maybe one day you'll see
Angels and demons will no longer haunt
You are baby, the only one I want

♥Ciao

This is closing soon, so get your poems in!
xx

ok i know its alittle late to say this but i cant think of anything...so im gonna have to drop ive been suffering from writers block lately...but its startin to come out so maybe i'll join ur next contest
sry for the inconvenience

=[
Is it possible to reserve a poem that is already reserved...since it may not get done?
I badly want "Bullet In The Head"...But that's the only one I think I could come up with something decent.
Just a question. If not, I understand. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Hey... like EoS said, can we double reserve? If we can, I'd like 'misunderstood'... thanks :)

Sheena, yep you can do one that is already reserved seeing as it hasn't been done.
Beloved-Yep you can double reserve.
I'm going to give this an extra day or two for the poems that aren;t in yet, from now on it's first come, first served.
Have fun!
xx

I am so sorry that I forgot when the deadline was. But here's my poem if you'll still take it.

Lonely Girl
By Sunsetwithyou

The clouds have moved in
All around me is gray,
Mind clouded in confusion
These memories falling like rain.
They surround me with happiness
But torrents of you forever will fall,
Drowning me in my sorrow
Remembering days when sunlight illumined all.

If I never loved you
I would be no worse off than I am,
I would still be mourning a love
That I could never have.
I am the lonely girl who still cries at night
Hoping your memories of me won't go cold,
For in dreams you are the one who still saves me
In dreams it is your hand I still hold.

Too little too late.

Blinded by the passion
Wrapped up in so much lust
I guess I couldn't see that
In you I just couldn't trust

Those nights you left me hurting
Tearing apart at the seams
Inside my heart was breaking
Finding solace in only my dreams

Declarations of love were made
I truly bared my soul
It seemed to you like victory
You knew my heart you had stole

Slowly my sanity started to fade
I knew things had gone too far
I'd become so weak and helpless
The world around me seemed bizarre

My soul-mate, in you I thought I'd found
But how wrong could I be?
Watching you with someone else
Is a sight I couldn't bare see

Inhaling deep breaths as I packed up my things
To leave you I just couldn't wait
No amount of begging will help you now
Its simply too little too late

To stop the rain

I try to breath
I'm suffocating
Try to heal
This heart that breaking
I try to survive
Please save me
This life I live
Please trade me

Words I've spoken
gone unheard
Tears I cry
Go unseen
I was scared
You flee from thee
Could you please
Believe in me?

To stop the rain
I feel it splashing
To stop the wind
I feel it thrashing
To stop the pain
I feel inside
To say a word
Is to lie

Hormonal hurricane
Twisted tornado
Full of pain
Rod of lightning
Do not strike
Roll of thunder
Hear my cry
Let it end tonight

To stop the rain
To see me smile
Let my heart rest
For a while
Cast the light
And watch me shine
One last time
Before you strike

wow its hard
but challenging
maybe next time ill try

i would like to try miracle
but it doesnt rhym and its short
it goes like this::::

*Miracle*

days have passed
lonely night is here to stay
why you have to go this way
now im missing you so badly

miracle is all i need
for you to stay
and make my day
you can wipe this tears away

so miracle were are you
i need a miracle so badly
that can change my life away
can you bring back this person
that i want to stay with forever
until our souls rest

Misery

The hill tumbles up so high,
And the grass sways in mourn,
The sky is dusted black and Grey,
As tears shall break the dawn,

Birds have been silenced,
Lakes frozen cold,
The breeze whispers softly,
As the young turn to old,

Goodnight dearest friends,
As God puts you all to sleep,
Standing among the willows,
As the droplets start to seep,

Your oak casket creaks,
As they lower it to your tomb,
Bouquets of roses upon your heart,
As your death becomes my doom,

Family turn to leave,
Friends do the same,
I stand alone and know,
I have never done you shame,

'Alone again,' I whisper,
'Like we always used to be.
Why didn't you come to talk?
Why didn't I ever see?'

I choke upon each breath,
And splutter the words to you,
'Please be happy now,
Cause now I don't know what to do.'

I blink and stars fall,
"One wish," I cry,
"It's been granted.
It's time to say goodbye."

thanks! I'll get on w/ writing it :)

when is this over?

♥Ciao