[[ TRIOLET POETRY ]]

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*****RESULTS AT BOTTOM!! :D

okay so this contest is going to be titled.. but i dont want a regular poem i want a "triolet"

**A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is : ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines.

EXAMPLE
"In Mourning Black"
Fair maid, clad all in mourning black
Rides off upon her golden steed.
A mocking gesture: heart she lack'd.
Fair maid, clad all in mourning black,
Sheds not a tear and turns her back
With no regrets for wicked deeds.
Fair maid, clad all in mourning black,
Rides off upon her golden steed.

Copyright © 2003 Dendrobia

RULES!!!!
1. you MUST reserve your poem before submitting
2. must be a triolet
3. title must be somewhere in the poem
4. no profanity
5. you ARE allowed to edit your poem after you submit it up until the 13th i will not read the poems before the 13th so feel free
6. HAVE FUN!!!
*****please submit poem like this
NAME(can be your username):
TITLE:

POEM:

DEADLINE: Tuesday February 13 at 5PM
**NO EXCEPTIONS

|l TITLES l|
- On The Ride
- Dry Tears(RESERVED:♥ ßïŦŦëŊ)
- Shadows Past(RESERVED:Bryan)
- Waterfalls(RESERVED:*Gem*)
- Back to You(RESERVED:Teriaerifrica)
- If I Fail(RESERVED:Sondos)
- Dont Hesitate
- Slipping From Reality(RESERVED:Paige)
- This Perfect Thing
- This Is Goodbye
- In The Corner
- All We Know(RESERVED: Rachel)
- Starving for You
- Lay Here Alone(RESERVED: disturbed one)
- The Time is Mine(RESERVED:∫Bëløveđ∫)
- Lost My Power
- This Conspiracy(RESERVED:xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex)
- Live With Passion
- Burn This Fire(RESERVED:*Charisma*)
- Down Your Neck

**AWARDS**
1st: 10 r/r/c
2nd: 8 r/r/c
3rd: 5 r/r/c
4th: 2 r/r/c (only is ALL titles are filled)

only is ALL titles are filled???

Man, I like the titles, they make it hard to choose from. I may or may not join.

no one? ... c`mon it'll be fun

:/

May I pull out? If i reserve? If so, then you can reserve me.

shadows past

I'll give it a try.
Burn This Fire please!
Charisma*

I'll try.

'Back To You.'

Please and Thank you. :]

MAY I HAVE DRY TEARS

♥ ßïŦŦëŊ
Dry Tears

She's glad for one day of comfort
Only because she has suffered
People trying to help her with the exhort
She's glad for one day of comfort
Though dry tears are hard for her sort
She'll be glad to die tougher
She's glad for one day of comfort
Only because she has suffered

hey it Paige its Paige lol!!!
xD

If I Fail
please

ill write it in a bizzle

x

Can i reserve slipping from reality

Paige xD
Slipping From Reality

I am slipping from reality
Stepping into the back of my mind
Not coming back mentality
I am slippimg from reality
Not gaining any stability
For there is no time
I am slipping from reality
Stepping into the back of my mind

lay here alone plz

to ♥ ßïŦŦëŊ i was skimming your poem and its not in the correct format.. you didnt follow the ABaAabAB rhyme scheme.. so feel free to fix it

thanx for telling me

I'd like to reserve 'A Conspiracy'

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

This is my second Triolet and I love doing them. I hope you enjoyed this.
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This Conspiracy

This conspiracy of tall tale's and lies, a place we do not go, were no other confide
A new hidden secret left in the dust, full of a forbidden, tragic lust.
Alas! Something has moved inside, an emotion that had long ago died,
This conspiracy of tall tale's and lies, a place we do not go, were no other confide.
Tragic tales of forbidden things hide among all that is gone all that as been defied.
Alas, nothing is as it seems, such as trust, a hidden thing of lies and utter disgust.
This conspiracy of tall tale's and lies, a place we do not go, were no other confide
A new hidden secret left in the dust, full of a forbidden, tragic lust.

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A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is : ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Heres mine

Disturbed One
Lay Here Alone

As I lay here alone,
In my deep dark solitude,
I try to make my feelings known,
As I lay here alone,
Darkness is my home,
This is how I conclude,
As I lay here alone,
In my deep dark solitude

i fixed it
xD

wow...great job sheena

whoes sheena?\

I'd like to reserve..

Xx The Wolf xX

The wolf howls with a haunting sound
It's call echoing through the night
Poignant, sad, heard from miles around
The wolf howls with a haunting sound
As it travels quickly in leaps and bounds
To catch a glimpse is a rare sight
The wolf howls with a haunting sound
It's call echoing through the night ©

*Gem*

I am Sheena, Bitten.
And thank you, disturbed one. I appreciate and am glad you like it. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

oh hey sheena great poem
xD

Haha. Thank you. =]

XD yepp no prob.

gem thats a great poem but i dont think that was any of the titles...im not the creator of this contest so im not gonna say any more but i dont think it was one of the titles

wow.. your right disturbed one.. what the heck.. grr.. i hate when people dont read all the rules.. is not that hard.. lol :)P

to *gem*.. nice poem but you didnt reserve a title.. and the wolf isnt one of my titles.. if you would like to reserve a title you may but this poem wont count

lol xD

I didn't scroll doen enough to see the titles, i didn't know sorry. I'll write another

becca ♥. It was an honest mistake before you start getting all high and mighty about it. Sheesh.

and Bitten? Or whatever your name is, do you find something about me funny? Cos you're doing it in the other forums. You have something to tell me to my face?
Kid.

I'll reserve Waterfalls please, unless anyone would like to have a go at that?

Burn This Fire

Gathering wood to burn this fire,
So once it’s over, the flame is gone.
I’m putting out my old desire.
Gathering wood to burn this fire
Watching the blaze grow ever higher
It will be ashes before the dawn.
Gathering wood to burn this fire
So once it’s over, the flame is gone.

By: Charisma*

anyone else.. there's still plenty of titles open!

can u mark mine as done so no one gets confused and reserves it...

thx

Xx Waterfalls xX

Thundering down the mountain side
So powerful yet so beautiful
Bask in the splendour it provides
Thundering down the mountain side
A never-ending rushing tide
Is this much beauty possible?
Thundering down the mountain side
So powerful yet so beautiful ©

*Gem*

oh sorry disturbed one i though i marked it down

to *Gem* i wasnt getting all high any mighty about it.. its just annoying because ive made other contests before and people dont read all the rules.. i guess it just bothers me because i always read the whole first post before entering a contest and i assumed everyone else did..