ONE DAY CONTEST COME FAST!!!

This will be due tomorrow!!!

Because it is Valentines day tomorrow and I was just listening to one of their songs.

I want all of you to write a poem and call it "A bullet for my Valentine" or something similar

Rules:
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1. Finish by Tomorrow...Feb 14th 2007
2. Length 10+ lines but plz nothing that will take forever to read
3. Title your poem "Bullet for my Valentine" or something related
4. Must Rhyme
5. Have Fun! It shows

Bullet for my Valentine

Now I lay me down to eternal sleep,
I pray to god that you will keep-
My valentine safe forever more,
But now I must leave, with a bullet in my core.

As we walked on the beach, his hand in mine,
I dreamt of how we’d be like this for all time.
Suddenly, shots rang out I hit the sand,
And pulled you down with me, still holding hands.

The gunman came into sight, as he aimed at you,
Just as he shot, I knew what I had to do.
I leapt in front, as the bullet hit my chest,
But I know that what I did was best.

The gunman ran away, as I lay bleeding on my love,
‘Never fear sweetie, I’ll see you again above.
Don’t give up hope, you’ll find someone new,
But for now baby, I must leave you.’

With that I died, now I get laid to rest,
Without any guilt or pain in this chest.
I lost my life to the man I called mine,
I took the bullet for my Valentine…

~*Who Cares?*~
hope thats ok

lol if we keep this up ill have no competition...:/

The competition has arrived!
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Bullet To My Valentine

Pull the tricky trigger -- danger to your head
With a kiss and a blow, like that I was dead.
Throw them onto the bed for a faithless [[whoa]],
To the other person, [[shhh]] they'll never know.
When destiny met fate in its debut, you fled,
With a bullet to your heart and "fuck you" to go.

"Weather's nine below insanity," god said,
"Might as well just put a gun straight through your head,"
Sleep with another when you loved me long ago.

... Pull the tricky trigger.

Take bullets for me -- your feelings go unread;
Whisper the candy sweet words to him instead,
Make an army of hearts and lies to bestow,
Set dangerous fires of fake hearts aglow
With a kiss and a blow, like that I was dead.
... Pull the tricky trigger.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

thats actually 16 lines. but ikd. dont listen to me lol.

Muahaha... I want to try, too :)
Hope this isn't too long... this was fun :-)

I Wouldn't Take The Bullet

I would never take the bullet for you
I'd push you to the ground
I'd keep you there till time stood still
Until you aren't found

I'd never take that bullet
I love you too much to die
I'd rather see you while you're here
If we both can stay alive

I don't mind if you hate me
For not taking that bullet
In the end, you'd have died too
Of the guilt caused by it

I'm sorry if you wanted
Me to take that lead
If I ever did,
It would be one to my head

That way, like the love song goes,
My heart would still go on
If I lay inside a coma,
Would you dare to sing that song?

If the killer wants to choose
A gold piece for their gun,
They may try to shoot me
Because I'd die for love

If you were to take the the hit instead
And you, instead of me, lie dead
I'd cock the gun again
And put it to my head

I need you, want you,
You should be mine, must be mine
My love for you is simply true
The best treasure I'll ever find

You I wouldn't want to die for,
But you, I'd want to die with
And live with you, just the same
Maybe with some kids

And once again the world would go
On; we'd still be living
If that bullet ever hits us,
May we both meet up in heaven.

yay some poems =)

beloved i find that to be a weird poem...some stanza r like...abcb some are aaba...some are abcd...but it still all fit together

for the other two poems...great job!

I changed the rules adding that it must rhyme...If you already submitted dont worry...but if you are yet to submit please make it rhyme

Ooh good contest!

Umm

Here are my final choices...

1st-...even though i dont really know what u were getting at here....i chose Ecstacyofsuicide this spot
2nd-Beloved...Great poem
3rd- Who cares... lol reading that it kinda sounded rude...lol...3rd place is...who cares lol...not the poem it was great =)

Awards

1st- 5 comments and a fave
2nd- 4 comments
3rd- 3 comments

lol oh well. at least i placed:P

haha.
Congrats! the competition was fierce!

lol :) thank you

i dont really stick to rhyme schemes... if it rhymes, that's just natural...

you could think of it as ABCB

Awe, yay!
Disturbed--
Reread it; the poem is about someone cheating on someone and the other person killing them for cheating on them. XD [[Thank you, my ex!]]
Hope you enjoy it even more, now! =]

And, thank you for the placing. Obviously, [being the fact that it's what I feel] that poem means a lot to me.
And congrats to everyone else.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

lol everyone posted...but nobody posted what poems they want read :P

lol ok

i want:
im better then that
bullet for my valentine
and
there goes my everything

thanks again:)

done

Please comment on these:
______Thank You!!________

1)If Everyone Cared
2)To Be Free
3)My Fairy With No Wings
4)Crying Is Its Own Poem
5)Artist's Past

thanks:)

Umm there was only one problem beloved...i clicked on ur profile and only numbers 3,4,5 were there...so plz choose 1 more...second place was only 4 poems