By The Candlelight

  • TimidOutburst
    17 years ago

    CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED!
    RESULTS AT BOTTOM!!! AND CONGRATS!!!

    Hey Guys,
    I haven't done a contest in a while and felt like doin' one. So the idea for this one is something soothing. Or relaxing. I wanna read something that just makes me take a deep breath and smile. It doesn't have to be REALLY happy, but I want something maybe romantic or something about nature, or something fantastical. Take me on a journey with this one! Give me the feeling of reading a good book by the fire with a nice hot cup of coffee.
    I hope all that makes sense, lol. Just do your best and have fun! Any questions just ask! :)

    Rules:
    1) Can be old or new but must fit the rules (or it will be disqualified....with fair warning of course)
    2) No profanity
    3) Can not be religious (so it's fair)
    4) You must reserve...cause there are only gonna be 15 spots.
    5) Must have a title (I like to be drawn into a poem with a good title)

    Due Date:
    February 28

    Awards:
    First ~ 7 comments
    Second ~ 5 comments
    Third ~ 3 comments
    (possibly two honorable mentions)

    Reserves:
    LOOK BELOW!

    Have fun!!!

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    17 years ago

    RESERVE. =]

    thanks darling. =]

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Reserve

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Fire In A Fireplace

    Grasping in tales of forgotten woes,
    Memories stand, they tire.
    Rest absorbed in belligerent shows,
    Sleeping through embers of fire.

    Burning so brightly, thusly is Hell,
    Moving, jumping, flickering.
    Turning woes to calling, trailing songs,
    Flames seem to be mocking, bickering.

    Promenade within a song to your flames,
    Enjoy sweet taste of ashes.
    Rest absorbed in belligerent shows,
    Warming rooms with flickering lashes.

    Houses glow to warm a touching soul,
    Moving pictures, fires burn.
    Turning woes to calling, trailing songs,
    Dancing waves, flickering flames hereby yearn.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Bridget
    17 years ago

    i think iv got a poem for it but im not sure if it quite fits the criteria.. i would like to reserve anyway though, and if it's not what your looking forward then just let me know :)

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    SHOOT YOU GUYS!!!!! I accidentally signed in under my second account (which a joint account with my friend) and I meant to do it under Midnight Sun....so I have to just re-post your reserves. I just thought I'd let you know that this is the name you should look for. Sry for the confusion!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    RESERVES:

    1 Sociopathetic [Lauren]
    2 xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    3 ~BRiDDY~
    4 Twisted Heart
    5 kiara
    6 yellowfeverlime
    7 Roddy Flores
    8 -anti-depression-
    9 J. Lau
    10 ∫Bëløveđ∫
    11 Laura �
    12 Bryan
    13 *Charisma*
    14 debbylynn
    15 disturbed one

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Would like to reserve a spot, please

    Thanks
    Jeannie

  • kiara
    17 years ago

    may i researve a spot plz

  • kiara
    17 years ago

    shadows life
    by kiara vinton

    Shadows dance through the glade
    As they are carried by the wind
    But the shadows dance on unafraid
    Even though they are stalked by mankind

    They take one step forward and two steps back
    Making the shadows copy their glee
    Even though the shadows are black
    They are as peaceful as the sea

    Together the two races dance
    With movements so enchanting
    But when the moon rises the shadows take a chance
    As they escape into the night without planning

    They form one blanket of shade
    With holes wear there is light
    Which is the only source which makes them afraid
    But when the battle becomes to bright

    They escape back to their masters side
    Or hide in the corners, not wanting to be found
    But at night the shadows return full of pride
    As they try to take over light and ground

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    17 years ago

    reserve

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    so are we doing this together....or ??? lol I'm confused. Help me out!
    Charisma*

  • Melissa
    17 years ago

    ~Spring reveals herself~
    By Melissa

    Spring reveals herself
    and lays a blanket of lush green grass,
    I say, hi to the birds of harmonic melody
    that song reminds me of life

    Mother earth points to the dandelions at my feet
    and I make it a point to waste my wish
    petals of white caress my thighs
    singing their song of he loves you, he loves you not

    Miss sunshine spots a rainbow in flight
    and she smirks at my drowning heart
    I say hey, do you even know what it's like
    to own the kind of love that no one wants?

    Sunny says, how do you intend on growth
    if the rain forgets to cleanse your soul
    and how do you expect to find that pot of gold
    if there are no puddles to follow?

    I say, these tears only remind me of my sorrow
    and this mud that you call soil
    keeps dirtying my soul with impurities,
    leaving me with a smudge of imperfections

    Sunny says, well it is late and I must set,
    but know this, I'll be back tomorrow and the next
    so don't shut me out and live in a world of gray
    it is I who can chase the darkness away

    I whisper under my breath, who does she think she is
    with all of her wisdom and good advice,
    all I need is someone to sing me a lullaby
    and lay me down to sleep tonight

    Little Miss Luna reveals herself
    and feeds me some of her sparkling light
    she says, hush your sweet little heart,
    have no fear, for I am here to tuck you in...

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    Sorry Charisma! I was checking on our account and then forgot I was on TimidOutburst and went to make a contest. I meant to be under Midnight Sun so this is just mine. But we'll have to do another one soon....:) Ttyl!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    17 years ago

    Well.. i just wrote this one. and it turned out sad.. but its still -i think- relaxing.

    Paper Valentine
    by Sociopathetic [Lauren]

    Happy Valentine's Day Dear.
    How Long it's been since we met.
    On this day sixty-two years past,
    Yet a day i will never forget.

    Reminiscing on the distant past,
    Brings crystal tears to my eyes.
    Remembering that paper heart,
    Seems to always make me cry.

    You were such a beauty, perfection it's true.
    Hair smooth and silky, the color of fire
    Porcelain skin, and deep sapphire eyes
    You became the object of my desire.

    Average i was, never given even a glance.
    Not a Valentine had i received in a long while
    But you came over, with a heart in your hand.
    and left on my face a permanent smile.

    With that paper heart, i was given a chance
    To prove to the world what i could be
    a man, a lover, a good husband and father
    To be with you was my true, and only destiny.

    Years ticked by, but our love stayed strong
    Through every obstacle that got in our way
    You were the perfect wife, the perfect mom
    You were my support through every day.

    So now the sparkling snow falls,
    Around your silent, perfect grave
    I'll see you soon, but till then
    Have a Happy Valentine's Day

  • J Lau
    17 years ago

    Reserve please... but I'm posting an old one... so posting right after.

  • J Lau
    17 years ago

    Love... for what it's worth...
    by J. Lau

    Love is blind;
    Love is real.
    Love is unconditional;
    Love is illogical.
    Love have no guidelines nor boundaries;
    Love have no rules nor reason.
    Love cannot be measured, nor can it be defined;
    Love cannot be forced, nor can it be brought.

    Love leaves no room for selfishness;
    Love leaves no room for disrespect.
    Love asks for nothing but honesty;
    Love asks for nothing but commitment.
    Love comes with anticipation;
    Love comes with desire.
    Love shows support;
    Love shows appreciation.

    Love is about loyalty;
    Love is about trust.
    Love is about giving;
    Love is about sacrifices.
    Love is about the present, and it's all about forgiving;
    Love is about understanding, and it's all about compromising.
    Love is about sharing - the joy and laughters;
    Love is about offloading - the burden and sorrows.

    Love cannot be selective;
    but requires acceptance of the person as a whole.
    Love cannot be partial;
    but requires sincerity from the bottom of your heart.
    Love is surreal;
    but can be painful.
    Love is eternal;
    but can be fragile.
    Love can deepen with time;
    but needs reassurance;
    Love can magnify with care;
    but needs attentiveness.

    Love leaves no regrets,
    and leaves behind a trail of memories;
    Love completes the circle,
    and redefines the meaning of life.
    True love comes once in a lifetime,
    for it will also last no less then a lifetime.
    True love can only be realized when you learn
    how to treasure, the one in front of you
    and open up your heart... to truly feel...
    LOVE... for what it's worth.

    < - - - - - - - - - - - >

    To all the lovers out there... may you ALL treasure the one you have and moments you share
    To all the singles out there... may you ALL find the destined one for your heart to flare

  • Bridget
    17 years ago

    When the Light Comes Alive
    by ~BRiDDY~

    The light slants through the window,
    Illuminating the floor,
    But moves away as the curtain flickers,
    Now pausing on the wall.

    It dances all over my room,
    A duet with the breeze,
    As soon as the curtain becomes still,
    The light itself will freeze.

    It becomes brighter as a cloud frees the sun,
    I try to shield my eyes.
    The light keeps on partying, stronger than before,
    Inviting more friends inside.

    The whole room is filled with light now,
    Every flicker of light is an individual being,
    They chose my room to have a disco,
    So exhilarating, definitely worth seeing.

    I get up and join in,
    Dancing, getting to know the light
    We are wild, ecstatic all through the day
    Until suddenly it is night.

    The room is no longer alive,
    The wild vibe that was there has fleed.
    The curtain is still flapping,
    But the light has gone to sleep.

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    reserve please

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    Somewhere Close

    Your head on my shoulder
    Entangled in warmth
    My hand on yours
    Laughing, joking
    Playfully

    When I'm sad and crying
    Really need a friend
    Please be there
    Just let me

    Put my head on your shoulder
    Find a way to let me hold on
    Hold me, hug me
    Smile and laugh

    Like nothing ever happened
    Make me smile
    Make me see
    A side of you I haven't seen

    I wish I may, I wish I might
    Have you on my shoulder
    And hold me close
    Somewhere in my head

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    Everyone's doing really great.... but only 5 spots left. Keep 'em coming! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    i want to reserve my place..it's an old one

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    My Valentine,My love

    Don't think you are all alone my darling
    Tilt your head up to the sky,you will see me as a bright star
    Waving at you,please dance with me my love
    Lean yourself on to me and watch clouds passing our feet by
    The stars will be our lights and moon will sing pretty love songs

    When you are tired of dancing you may want to taste my cherry
    My lips will be eager to hold yours,just close your eyes my sweetie
    Let my tongue to tickle you,before Cupid comes to watch us
    Chocolate and roses as a gift he will bring he loved us my everything

    We will take off each others clothes to feel
    And let roses be our blanket as we cherish each other
    Release your inner lust,make me a lot of hotter
    Do what you want to do,it's your night and mine too
    To call all of our yearning,every kind of love that we will

    When we wake up at morning,sun shines brightly
    It was just a dream,a 'special day' dream
    But some kind of dreams come true
    Just like my valentine is near and holding me

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    i'm sorry that i didn't wait for you to reserve completely but i have some things to do,and i may not be able to come here again today,i apologize to you

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    It's really not a problem, Laura...a lot of ppl do that. I'm just glad that you entered! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    Keep 'em coming! 4 spots left everyone!!! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    I'm just letting everyone know that if everyone reserves and gets their poems in before the last day of the month then I'll judge it earlier. Just thought I'd let you know. Thanks!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • Bryan
    17 years ago

    reserve me a spot

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Is That Stardust in Your Eyes
    By: Twisted Heart

    As I sit among the cinders as they sweetly burn
    I think of all the dreaming done within this heart that yearns
    I catch a spark of glimmer from the passing of the light
    And so it makes me wonder if its stardust in your eyes.

    Do you see the flames that flicker as the crackle breaks the night
    Along the edges of a star thats caught up in the light
    A midst the ashes of a fire that brings the umber shine
    Like Rubies and the diamonds fair that glitter so devine.

    The tiny little dancers are dressed up in red and white
    Mixing oh so joyfully with yellow burning bright
    The popping of the flames that stir the ashes once again
    Has lent a sense of homage like its welcoming a friend.

    The umber burns a little flame and give a gentle glow
    Along the casing of a dream that singes at the coal
    Is it just illusion that the flames resemble flight
    Caught inside the stardust that reflects within your eyes

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    Hmmm, anymore takers?

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    I'll reserve.
    Charisma*
    P.S. Does it have to rhyme?

  • debbylyn
    17 years ago

    I'll reserve too.

    A Poem's Kiss

    A Poem's kiss
    Flows from my pen
    To your heart
    Lingering, longing
    As a silent embrace
    Though we're apart

    Our words touch
    As lips, softly searching
    Verses thrill the soul
    Separation of One
    In lonely sky blue
    Until we are whole

    Sorrows in stanzas
    Writ with abundance
    As tears frozen in time
    Deep and lonely
    'Til ocean is river
    And you become mine

    *This poem can also be read by reading line 1 of each verse in sequence....lines 2 and so on.

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    It doesn't matter to me whether they rhyme or not...I like both equally, as long as it's tastefully done! And thanks for reserving you guys! Just one spot left!!! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Heaven and Earth

    When you said you'd take me on a journey
    I didn't expect one like this,
    Where my heaven and earth would collide.
    I have watched the night's skies stars gently skim over the water, gracing them with their beauty.
    I have rested upon the moon's craters,
    With you by my side.
    I have seen comet's so close, you can feel their burn
    As if a warm fire on a windy night.
    I thought that my chance for a love like this would never come,
    But here it is, and there you are.
    You've brought me heaven, and healed my earth.

    By: Charisma*
    Yeah, it's diff....

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    ok i'll give it a shot i guess

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Ok heres mine...its not only soothing but i put alittle humor at the end for all you finding nemo fans =)

    Soothing Tide of the Ocean

    Sit back and relax,
    Read a book or fall asleep,
    On the cold beach,
    Listen to the waves and how they weep,

    Swim with a dolphin,
    Hold on to its pointy tail,
    Hold on as long as you can,
    You might even see a whale,

    Visit P. Sherman 42 Wallaby Way,
    Do some sweet moves with Squirt,
    While your at it, Find Nemo,
    But make sure you dont get hurt

  • Bryan
    17 years ago

    Wishing You Were Mine
    Bryan

    Your beautiful eyes, twinkle like the stars in this black sky,
    illuminating goodbyes, cease as the moonlight begins to die.

    Intoxicating lips burn my already blushed face,
    your captivating beauty, such a sweet and warm embrace.

    No place left for my wounded heart to hide,
    no feeling more painful than this feeling I have inside.

    You know its true, that no matter what I do,
    I'll wait for an eternity just to be with you.

    With the face of an angel, pretty eyes that shine,
    it seems that I'll remain here forever, wishing you were mine.

    i know, not my best but i had writers block,

    Bryan Hunt © 2007

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    Ok, no spots left...I need to make sure everyone's are in, and when they are then I'll judge it. And don't forget that the due date is the last day of the month! So make sure and have them in. Great job you guys, and I can't wait to judge it! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    As far as I can tell everyone's poems are in...but I'm gonna leave the goal date as the 28th for me to judge it. That way you won't be dissapointed if it's not ealier and you'll be suprised if it is! Lol! :) So just keep looking for the winners! And if you haven't sent yours in yet then make sure it's in by the 28th....I won't judge until I'm positive everyone has there's in. :) Thanks for the support!!!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    17 years ago

    :o mine isn't in but i already wrote mind up so i will post it today. Sorry, i'm a slowpoke, my apologies. *runs away, timid and scared* i'm on my cell phone now, so i don't wanna type it up. .......