Inspiration

  • Midnight Sun
    18 years ago

    Does it have to be new?
    ~Midnight Sun

  • Midnight Sun
    18 years ago

    ok I'll try! :) Sounds like fun....oooh, but does the poem have be ABOUT what inspires you...or it just has to be inspired?...sry for so many questions
    = /
    ~Midnight Sun

  • David Marshall
    18 years ago

    Dont you have to be inspired anyway to write a poem? So if im inspired by a girl or love, does it have to be about her? or how she inspires me? Sorry, i just like being specific. it settles my confusion.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    wait ok. i just wrote a poem a few minutes ago, and my inspiration was my ex, and how i have moved on. is that inspiration, i'm confused..lol

  • Beautiful Chaos
    18 years ago

    Hold On

    When you feel you can't go on,
    When you cannot find a friend,
    Look inside to find some comfort,
    Help yourself to mend.

    What is it you are missing?
    What is it that you need?
    Can you find no inspiration,
    In this world so full of greed.

    There is beauty found in music,
    There is warmth found in the sun,
    There is love out in the world,
    That can never be undone.

    Though the road may crumble,
    And at times just disappear,
    If we just hold on,
    All will become clear.

    Pain is never pleasant,
    But it helps us come to know,
    Just how strong we really are,
    It helps us all to grow.

  • Romantic Lover
    18 years ago

    Ok, I'll take a shot at this.

    He enters the room
    So gracefully and fine
    Attempting to erase the thought
    Wishing he was always mine

    Oh, this is so wrong
    The thought of him and me
    There are complications galore
    With him I can never be

    But each time he appears
    My heart begins to race
    Consuming my inner soul
    Haunted by his handsome face

    He’s a diamond in the rough
    He makes my heart sing
    Inspiring me so much
    Poetry, I began writing

    Expressing my deepest thoughts
    That flow through my heart
    My feelings began to surface
    Which were suppressed from the start

    It was the poetic language
    Which brought two hearts together
    A love which is grown
    And will be alive forever.

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    .... must... enter...

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    Warmth Within Words

    Deep inside the candlelight
    It flickers within flame
    The sudden glow I feel inside
    As letters spell my name

    I wonder, why did I
    Get named such a thing
    As K-r-i-s-t-i
    The name is a bee sting

    I wish I could have named myself
    Instead of mom and dad
    Then I think of other subjects
    Like parents I wish I had

    Then I think about my friends
    How could they like me?
    Looking in the mirror
    I don't like what I see

    I see this girl that needs some help
    Who's inside that mirror?
    She doesn't know herself
    How can you describe her?

    My memory whispers,
    She's a poet... an artist, a singer
    Just writes, draws, and sings
    To get rid of the hurt

    Sometimes, some days
    I wish it wouldn't say
    All these negative things
    That get in the way

    I close my eyes,
    And let out my breath
    I want to sigh
    So I'll get some rest

    Looking at my paper
    Once a slate wiped clean
    Now written, like magic
    Is what inspires me

  • ellewen
    18 years ago

    I wrote this a couple days ago hoping it would apply for a contest of some sort... is it considered new?

    well here it is anyways

    -To stop the rain-

    I try to breath
    I'm suffocating
    Try to heal
    This heart that breaking
    I try to survive
    Please save me
    This life I live
    Please trade me

    Words I've spoken
    gone unheard
    Tears I cry
    Go unseen
    I was scared
    You flee from thee
    Could you please
    Believe in me?

    To stop the rain
    I feel it splashing
    To stop the wind
    I feel it thrashing
    To stop the pain
    I feel inside
    To say a word
    Is to lie

    Hormonal hurricane
    Twisted tornado
    Full of pain
    Rod of lightning
    Do not strike
    Roll of thunder
    Hear my cry
    Let it end tonight

    To stop the rain
    To see me smile
    Let my heart rest
    For a while
    Cast the light
    And watch me shine
    One last time
    Before you strike

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    thank u :)

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    I read some of the poems here, and I loved them. They were pretty awesome. GREAT JOB!

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    Thank you ^_^