Words You'll Never Say

Hey Guys! I want poems about wanting to tell someone you love them, but losing your chance because they found somebody else. So they'll never know.
Rules:
Don't cuss at ALL!
Don't go all erotica or sensual...i'll dq you.
Don't be religious (it's not fair in judging)
Have fun!

I haven't set a deadline because it just depends on when I see that poem that really touches me.
Prizes are on hold because of the sites technical difficulty. They will come though. So get writing because, I do want to close this sooner than later!
Charisma*

I'll reserve, but Idk if I will be able to... you never know..

♥Ciao

Hope you will accept poems written from before... if you like this one, you may want to check out some of my other writings... All the poems I wrote last year were written to reflect my true feelings in that past year of my life. Hope you'll like it.
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Truth is...
by J. Lau

I used to think
That I can control,
The feelings I had for you
And the thoughts of being with you.

I kept my distance,
I held my stance.
I treasure the friendships,
And I wished you both happiness.

I knew that it will not
Be an easy path,
But it turns out to be much rougher
Then I could ever imagine.
Cause deep down,
It hurts like crazy.

Truth is...
I cannot hold my feelings back
And ignore its existence.
I cannot pretend l am not jealous,
That I'm not the one by your side.

Truth is...
I cannot ignore the pain anymore,
When comforting you when you fall.
I cannot stand seeing you being hurt over and over again,
And there's nothing more I can do.

Truth is...
I'm not being truthful and fair to myself,
Cause it hurts so much inside each time you cry.
I cannot leave this wound open,
And not distance myself to let it heal.

Truth is...
I had feelings for you ever since the day we met,
And it only grew deeper as time past.
I know that I should not feel this way,
But I can't help myself thinking of you each day.

Truth is...
I was sure that you were the one,
ever since we met again that day,
Around the end of June.

I don't know what to do anymore,
My logic is overwhemled by my emotions.
I still wish that everything will work out,
Between you and him.
But if one day in the years to come,
That fate finally grant me the chance.
I wish that we will be together,
Forever less a day...

For that is the day,
I wanted you to know...
How I truly felt ... about YOU.

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Ooh i wanna try i think i have an idea...stupid writers block has been gettin me for awhile

ok...i think i got this..but idk. ok...so im writing about this guy i like(d) aka my ex...but he found someone new..? thats it? lol

hmm does it HAVE to be about the person finding someone new...or can it be like...words you will never say to them cuz they walked away from a friendship or something

ok im done mine...if it sucks...blame the time that i did it...lol...i wrote it falling asleep so...ya...here it is...i didnt bother doing it about friendship lost after all...i just did what u said lol

These words you will never know

The night my porcelain sky fell,
Dying in my own little cell,
The angels weeped and cried,
The tears would not subside,

Oh how i wanted to tell you,
The words that precede I do,
But that moment never came,
You are so provakative, what a shame,

I could have been yours to love,
In a fight, yours to shove,
I could be your shoulder to cry on,
But now your chance is gone,

Your so quick to judge,
A huge mark from a little smudge,
I hope finding out what I have to say,
Bothers you until your darkest day,

But life isnt all that fair,
And you dont even care,
So Ive let you go,
Theres words you will never know

Mines an old one, i may replace it later if i write a better one if thats ok?

Xx Your Juliet xX

All I want is the best for you
Even if you’re not with me
We once shared so many happy hours
But it wasn’t meant to be

But I want you to be happy
No one deserves it more than you
You gave me so much happiness
So I have no choice but to…

Let you go without a fight
And tell you everything’s just fine
Turns out I wasn’t your Juliet
I was just your Rosaline

I know you used to love me
And I loved you just as much
But now you love her more instead
And the memories are cold to touch

But it’s because I love you
That I’m going to let you go
I hope you have a happy life
Just wanted you to know

*Gem*

these are all good so far, but disturbed one you need to remove the word hell from your poem. yes, i'm picky about cussing even in the small degree. it's my "thing" if you wanna call it that. But it was a great poem so I don't wanna dq it so if you can change it, that'd be great!
Charisma*

Charisma,

I'd like to do this one but I was just wondering if I could write about how I love that person but afraid to tell him and not about how I didn't tell him and I lost him.

ok no prob i changed it...theres not that much that would go with it that rhyme with fell...thats y its not as good...but oh well...atleast im not dq'ed

To TheWorldFellAndUWeren'tThere....yes you can do that....

And thank you disturbed. It's still good! :)
Charisma*

A Mid-Summer's Eve
Bryan

Her face is beautiful
like a mid-summer's eve,
that makes me think back
to memories I retrieve.

Of all the days I stared
at her beautiful face,
its all I have left
in this horrible place.

I sit here now
filled with glee,
on thoughts of summers
she spent with me.

All this time I wanted
to tell her this,
but the chances go by
and every time I miss.

A special place for her
my heart still keeps,
whenever she is around
my heart still leaps.

I don't know how
but i know its true,
cause when I wrote this poem
I thought only of you.

Bryan Hunt © 2006

i changed it 1 more time =D

The Secret I Keep
By: Twisted Heart

We pass each other almost every day
Not once do I stop to speak
I get so scared that you'll find a way
To uncover the secret I keep.

I don't even smile, for I'm sure you will see
The love I hold deep in my eyes
Will it be a look that will tell the tale
Or a smile that covers the lie

I try to avoid you, I turn from your way
For too many nights I dream of you
By not making contact with your lovely eyes
I can still hope you haven't a clue.

I see you with friends, you laugh at a joke
The sound of it makes my heart race
But I still leave alone, at the end of the day
With the trueth that I find hard to face.

You seem so content with your life as it is
Filled with women and all of their charm
But each night as I lay in my lonely bed
I dream I am laying inside of your arms.

But dreams are so lonely, I find no release
And the hope of a love that will last
Breaks free from the dreams at the light of a day
And moves from my mind way too fast.

So I go through the day with glances of you
And the knowlege of all, I don't speak
I find comfort in this for the end of the day
Will cover the secret I keep.

great job guys. Keep em coming!!!
Charisma*

i'm working on mine, should have it in soon! =]

Ciao

Thanks Charisma!!

Living With A Heart, Broken

I regret my mistake more and more each day
For all those words I never got to say
You left too soon and my words, unspoken
Leave my heart feeling so bruised and broken
Torn in two, my feelings left unsaid
Are constantly spinning around my head
They’re causing such a tremendous ache
Threatening to make my heart break
If you give me a chance to say what’s on my mind
Maybe then my tensions will finally unwind
You left me standing there, hurting for more
All our notes are locked away in my drawer

I still wonder how my life would be changed
If you were still here, would it all be rearranged
Would my plans run smoothly or fall to the gutter
I would scream the words that I could barely mutter
I Love You! I need you, with me, by my side
To help me dry up the tears that I cried
I’m sorry I never told you how much you meant to me
I just thought I had a little more time, don’t you see
I never realized you’d be gone so fast
I still can’t help it; looking into the past
You were my only, my reason to stand tall
You never pushed me down, you’d help me when I’d fall

You were the one who could make my day bright
Without you now, nothing seems right
I guess you never knew you meant all this to me
I love you so much, my Boo, you’ll always be
But now you’re gone, what can I do
Who’s gonna be there for what life puts me through
Who's gonna be there when life gets rough
Who’s gonna be there when I need someone tough
Who’s shoulder will I lean on when I need to cry
You’re the only one I want; you’re my guy
But now all my words will be forever left unspoken
Because I’m Living With A Heart, Broken

Hope ya like it! =]
Ciao

Ok, i found one that may work

I Love You, You Love Her

I love you, but you always love someone but me,
I love you through your bursts of acne.
Without you in my life I feel broken and empty,
Even if you've never loved me, you're all I see.

She says she's in love with you,
After just one day, it can't be true,
I've liked you 2 years, time's no issue.
When she's around you, does she unglue?

Does she dream of you, night after night,
Are you the only reason she remains in the fight-
Called life? Does she write and write-
Poems about you in darkness and light?

Does she post them all over, for people to read,
To give her the support that she wants and needs?
Does she feel only with you she can succeed,
Has she dreamed every night of you two getting married?

And before bed each night, does she cry?
Does she think that without you she should die,
Does she love you half as much, I ask for a reply!
Does love you even at your shows when you're drunk or high?

Has she been to three of your band's shows in a row?
And has she cried when you didn't show-
At our chorus concert? Does she simply glow-
When you're around her, this I'd like to know.

So if she really loves you, she could say yes to ALL of these,
She would be willing to climb over the Rocky's-
Or over endless turquoise seas,
Just to see a glimpse of your face, to put her heart at ease.

All of these things I've done or, I'd gladly do,
Just to get you to love me too.
I'll wait forever, since patience is a virtue,
I'll wait forever to hear the words "I love you"

This is a promise I'm willing to keep.

~*Who Cares?*~
did it fit this time. btw he dun know i love him.

hey i want to join but itll be a couple days for me to enter a new poem....wait can it be one you've already entered?? ill think of one to enter as soon as possible!!
~kylah~

I can'tI can't be like that I can't hurt him again He loves me I hurt him once I didn't know how he felt then I didn't mean to hurt him I didn't I promiss I won't do it again I know he loves me sooo much
That's why I can't hust him because I love him too
I know we have a future to be together
You just have to promiss me you won't hurt me
I just wonna let you know I love you I love how you love and comfort me We love eachother We do We really do!!
~kylah~
I really hope this works but its ok if it doesn't...

who cares...yeah, your poem didn't fit my outline above. The person doesn't KNOW that you love him, and you don't hate him, you just wish he could have known. so if you'd like to change it, that'd be fine!
Charisma*

ok. im still confused...too bad. i removed the poem

... I'll enter :)

i tried another, does THIS one work? sry 4 bothering u...i get confused a lot...:/ i put it ^ there where my other 1 was

yes it works. Thank you and no problem!
Charisma*

My Shoes

I used to think you were wonderful,
More than anyone could ask for
You were the one I loved the most
But in the end, who hurt more?

Was it me, for trying, attempting,
Accepting advanced rejection
In hopes of maybe, some day,
Gaining your affection?

Or was it you, for going after
Someone that poured their heart out
Even though the same type
Was left alone, here to shout?

You ran to me for advice
When the world turned a cold shoulder
I smiled, put you in her shoes
Telling you to hug and hold her

Saying that if I was that girl
That waited for so long
And swore to take a bullet
How could anything go wrong?

Joking about how much she loves you
Sadly, in a way, I'm that same girl,
I let her try on my shoes
That's the reason why it hurts

You see, I handed my shoes
Over to her on loan
I wanted her to have a chance
To see you when she gets home

It should be me wearing those shoes
I had them first; they're mine
Some twisted Cinderella fairytale
That's spoiled over time

She's my step sis, sweetly asking
To try them on just once
I can't wait 'till Prince Charming
Finds out that she's a dunce

I'm thinking about giving up
Locked inside this pantry
Right now you're on a date
So no Prince Charming can save me

I think I should have given up
A long time ago
I tried to sound my feelings out
But now you'll never know

I told you that I liked you
You thought it was a hoax
But now the joke's on you
My love was just false hope

I chased you for three sweet years
But you never turned an eye
So now, the time has come to say
I think this is goodbye

Your girl is calling on the phone
You might want to pick up
Please talk after I already go
I think I've had enough

I'm tired of your girlfriend
She's wearing out my shoes
To love someone that's taken
Please tell me, what's the use?

I cried and screamed for many days
And yet, I hooked you up
You don't like her, but you let her say
The two of you are in love

It breaks my heart to know that
Friends think you two are on
The same page, for I know that
They can't tell that they are wrong

I'm sorry, but I love you
It's too much to deny
But I cannot blame myself
Those shoes are really mine

a very neat poem. I am keeping this going because I'm still hoping for more entries. Thanks everyone!
Charisma*

do you have a set date, or are you waiting for more people?

Ciao

waiting for more people....
Charisma*
:)

I Melt With You

It's a rhythm i found in your heart
That makes me sing at nights
Sometimes it is your guard
You make me melt with your eyes

Sometimes I sing it slow for you
To dance with me in dreams it's why
I'll see when you hold me it's a clue
You make me melt with your smile

It's the place that you look upon me
We aren't equal we don't have possibilities
Of being together,I'm just your secretary
You make me melt with your realities

I see in your eyes,your wide smile
You're happy with who you're with
It's not me i know this,it's my pit
You make me melt with your bliss

It is a new but an old one:)
I did it today but was not for this
Hope you like it...

Should Have Told Her

Does she know the way I feel?
I feel like it’s so obvious.
Can’t everyone see it on my face.
See that I’ve fallen in love.

I want to tell her
Express me true love.
I’m afraid of what she’ll say.
Afraid that she’ll turn me down.

I keep telling myself I’ll tell her
I just have to find the right moment.
Find the courage to say I love you
But what if she walks away.

I knew this day would come
The day she found someone else
I’ve lost my chance to tell her
To tell her how I feel.

Why didn’t I just say it?
It couldn’t have been any worse.
She would have at least known.
Now, she’ll never now I love her.

thnx

Keep it up ;)

Get ur entires in write away :P

get it ? ^

CLOSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WINNERS:

J. Lau and *Gem*

Both of you will receive 3 comments and votes! Your entries really described how I felt and what I wanted this to be about. But there were many good entries. Thank you all for your entry!
Charisma*

congrats winners!!!

Ciao

Wow... Thanks for the placing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Please comment on any 3 that catches your eyes.

Thanks!

J. Lau

congratz

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all of these poems are excellent!