joint contest!! [titles] ACROSTIC!!

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WHAT IS AN ACROSTIC POEM?!?!?!?! :]
*Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually relating to or describing the title/topic word.

EX: trapped within life

Trapped within life
Retreat to the unknown
Allowing no one in
Pleading to be shown
Praying endlessly
Entangled in her own
Deadly ways

Waiting for a turnaround
Intrigued by all the woe
Tucked inside existence
Hoping to end sorrow
Into this world of hers
Not a soul, no God will go

Lifeless and strung out
In here for one too many days
Forever she is trapped in life
Entangled in her deadly ways

© becca ♥

**RULES**

1: please reserve before submitting.
2: must be acrostic
3: NO PROFANITY please :]
4: must be in by, March 6 at 4:00 pm
NO EXCEPTIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5: three people per title :]

***TITLES***

- Beneath the skin
1: poetess
2:
3:
- Behind closed doors
1: ~Flying High~
2: princesrainbow
3:
- Shadows in the night
1: ImperfectionIsBeauty
2: Afraid of the Dark
3:
- Sweet surrender
1: [..n.e.m.0..]
2: ¡Britt!
3: Bryan
- painful memories
1: Holy Hellcat
2:
3:
- dusted eyes
1: Grotesque Angel
2:
3:
- jaded dreams
1: *Charisma*
2:
3:
- the last sunrise
1: ~*Who Cares?*~
2: Sociopathetic [Lauren]
3: -anti-depression-
- behind your walls
1: ∫Bëløveđ∫
2:
3:
- tears dont fall
1: disturbed one
2: Italian Stallion
3:

*****AWARDS!*****
First place: 8 poems; 16 comments
Second place: 6 poems; 12 comments
Third place: 4 poems; 8 comments
Fourth place: 2 poems; 4 comments
**you will recieve 2 HONEST comments on each poem.. one from each of us**

:] good luck kiddies!!

Becca,

for some of us we don't know what a ACROSTIC is!

It'd help if you actually TELL US what we're doing and how. Like directions.

lol sorry i forgot, i just put it in now :]

HEY GUYS!!! waasssssup?!?!? im the other judge on this contest :] good luck. and have fun :[)

JOIN OUR CONTEST!!

please :D

we give good comments :D

OOH!!! the last sunrise!

ok im done. not the best, but im still gettin used to these acrostic things:P

The Last Sunrise

This is the end of everything I knew,
He left me here, to find someone new.
Everything just seems to be going wrong…

Last night you broke my heart again,
And now you and I, will remain just friends.
Sunrise to sunset, I still think of you,
Though you’ve found someone new.

Sunrise to darkness, darkness to light,
Uttering you name in pain through the night.
No where to turn, no where to go,
Remember the memories from long ago.
I will move on, but this is the last sunrise,
Summer has ended, clouds fill the skies.
Earth has ended, so this is goodbye.

~*Who Cares?*~

Ooh just cuz i just listened to it like 5 mins ago...and i really like the song....can i plz have tears dont fall =D

to ~*Who Cares?*~ you spelled "sunrise" as "sunrisd" making your acrostic incorrect feel free to fix it before the judging date :]

The Last Sunrise

cause Aiden Rocks. =]

lol oh geez thanks

sweet surrender please! =]

Ciao

Nevermind, i lost my train of thought, cant think of anythin right now

behind your walls plz

Behind Your Walls (Acrostic)

Beneath your tough
Exterior
Hurt as
I am, I will
Never leave you behind;
Doubtlessly... did

You know that
Our friendship is an inspiration
Undefeated, nobody can
Rip us up successfully

Waiting, in the depths
All around us
Lie silent caves, each echo
Louder than the first,
Somehow bring me closer to you

I have mine! =]

Sweet Surrender [Acrostic]

Summer times spent lazily idling around
Welcoming the reprieve of the cool night's ground
Enjoy it while it lasts, 'cause Winter comes in time
Enjoy your life and let teh problems unwind
Take your time to admire all the beauty surrounding you
Savor the glory and don't think about what you're going through
Understand nothing and don't even have a care
Realize where you are and what is there
Remembering nothing, live for the moment now
Explaining the summer, some don't know how
Nice, some call it, but that's not the right word
Drab, some call it, I'd say that's absurd
Exquisite and unique, something new each day
Remember it well and don't let it slip away

Ciao

Can I reserve a spot for Behind Closed Doors please?!?

~!Flying High!~

I'll take one for 'painful memories', ouch.

jaded dreams please!
Charisma*

Jaded Dreams

Just another night with faded dreams
And usually I'd enjoy them, but not now.
Don't you know they conclude in disaster?
Everything ends with you leaving,
Dying, and there's nothing I can do.

Dreadful little nightmares in pink ribbons
Reappearing as something good,
Ending in something horrible.
As always, I lose you. Watch you go again.
My mind can't take these jaded dreams.
Spare me reality while I sleep.

By: Charisma*

ONE MORE WEEK!!!

any more takers?? :D

more people should sign up!!!!

c`mon.. all the cool kids are doing it

lol :D

how about this.. if we get twenty people.. thats 9 more people we'll add first AND second place to one of our favorites :D

Hi!! can get " Behind Closed Doors"

princesrainbow = }

Behind Closed Doors

Black surroundings
empty houses
how could this happen
in such a way
no one feels me
dont even see me

could it really happen
loosing patiance
over this thick door
shouting your name
each day feeling
down for not hearing me

doors are locked
on the darkest day
of my life
restless is i feel all those
shouting worth of nothing

8 more people for a favorites award!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Can I get a reservation for 'Dusted Eyes' please?
Thankyou, i will write it tomorrow.

Cheers,
GA

Can i reserve shadows of the night please??

laura
x

how many poems are we allowed to enter? one? or as many as we want?

Well you haven't put my name up yet but. . . .heres the poem anyways

SHADOWS IN THE NIGHT

Shandows are moving, where no-one should be,
Hearing a movement that cannot be seen,
A slamming of woodwork, where there is no door
Do not be frightened these things do no more,
Other than frighten with movements at night,
When you are blinded through lack of sunlight,
So don't you be scared of the shadows at night.

Into the darkness, they will now creep.
Near by your bed when you are asleep.

Total pitch darkness lures them nearby,
Heavenly lightness will shoo them, bye bye.
Even though they make you feel you will die.

Never loose faith, in the midst of the night,
Ignite a match, and they'll flee from the light,
Going to where the shadows can be seen,
However never forget, don't you dare scream,
The shadows exist, only where light has been.

your only allowed to enter one poem :[ sorry but if you have a poem submitted and you change your mind and would like to re-submit one then by all means do so. but only one will be judged

um sweet surrender please

4 more people for a favorites award!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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c`mon whats it hurt to try????

*** IMPORTANT MESSAGE!!!!***

we are extending the deadline to TUESDAY MARCH 4th at 4:00pm

NO EXCEPTIONS!!!!!!!!

c'mon guys!! dontcha want the favorites award?!?!?!

lol; saying dontcha made me think of that song, dontcha wish your girlfriend was hottt like meee

:] lol i apoligize for my retardedness!

I'd like to reserve, "tears dont fall"

Please and Thank you, Joe

Tears Don't Fall (Acrostic)
by Italian Stallion

Tears don't fall
Embedded they are
And no matter what
Rounds the corner
Somebody cares for you

Deciding weather it's true
Or not, is up to you
No body can tell you what to do
The reason I'm telling you all of this, is

For the first time, I came to realize
All my life I was sad and down
Looking for an answer that didn't exist
Looking for someone to love, when really I was loved all along

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

lol thats funny. i read dontcha in the 1st sentence and then i stopped reading to sing the dontcha wish ur gf was hot like me, then i continue reading and u said it too. lmao wow

3 more people for a favorites award!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

c`mon.... only 3 MORE PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!