my poem's name

  • Nee
    20 years ago


    Standing Beside The Window wtching The Falling Rain
    Waiting For Seeing Someone Or For You To Return
    I'm All Alone Just Thinking Of You Coming To Me So You Can Erase My Pain...

    Baby Why Don't You Care?..
    I Love You And I Swear..
    And I'm Ready For Doing Anything You Ask For
    Sweety I'm Not Asking You To Look Or To Stare

    I Just Want You To Feel My Love
    So I Can Live In This Life..

    And I Think I'm Not Asking Too Much
    I Just Want You To Ignore Her Fake Touch
    Coz I Know She Doesn't Love You That Much

    And Let Me Be Your Last Love

    hey I need a name for my poem..i put it (would you let me be..?) but i'm asking for your opinions
    thx alot
    nema xxx

  • Brandy Sansotta
    20 years ago

    I think Last Love would work or just shorten your original title to Let Me Be

  • Nee
    20 years ago

    thx alot :D
    xxxx