••Omg this is soo sad••

  • xViagraTheCookiex
    17 years ago

    Omg these are just soo sad.. i cried.. seriously.. im a wimp.. lollz

    Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.

    and this one..

    YOU CANNOT STOP UNTIL YOU REACH THE END THEN YOU MUST HAVE
    A VERY
    BIG HEART...
    Mommy.. Johnny brought a gun to school, He told his
    friends that it was cool, And when he pulled the trigger back, It shot with a great crack. Mommy, I was a good girl, I did What I was told, I went to school, I got straight A's, I even got the gold! But Mommy, when I went school that day, I never said good-bye, I'm sorry Mommy, I had to go, But Mommy, please don't cry. When Johnny shot the gun, He hit me and another, And all because Johnny, Got the gun from his older brother. Mommy, please tell Daddy; That I love him very much, And please tell Chris; my boyfriend; That it wasn't just a crushAnd tell my little sister; That she is the only one now, And tell my dear sweet grandmother; I'll be waiting for her now, And tell my wonderful friends; That they always were the best; Mommy, I'm not the first, I'm no better than the rest. Mommy, tell why'd it have to be me? No one deserves this, Mommy, warn the others, Mommy I left without a kiss. And Mommy tell the doctors; I know they really did try, I think I even saw a doctor, Trying not to cry. Mommy, I'm slowly dying, With a bullet in my chest, But Mommy please remember, I'm in heaven with the rest. Mommy I ran as fast as I could, when I heard that crack, Mommy, listen to me if you would, I wanted to go to college, I wanted to try things that were new, I guess I'm not going with Daddy, On that trip to the new zoo. I wanted to get married, I wanted to have a kid, I wanted to be an actress, Mommy, I wanted to live. But Mommy I must go now, The time is getting late, Mommy, tell my Chris, I'm sorry but I had to cancel the date. I love you Mommy, I always have, I know; you know it's true, And Mommy all I wanted to say is, "Mommy, I love you."
    ****In Memory of The Columbine Students Who Were Lost****
    Please if you would, Pass this around, I'd be happy if you could, Don't smash this on the ground. If you pass this on, Maybe people will cry, Just keep this in your heart, For the people who didn't get to
    say

  • my name is Llama
    17 years ago

    there both so sad. the first one has the most saddest endings. i was like woa

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    VERY SAD INDEED. I have tears in my eyes from both of them

  • Willow
    17 years ago

    i hope it's normal to be crying over these. but they are so sad.

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    They are very sad, I have read them before.

  • Startle Me
    17 years ago

    I've never read it before
    But thank you for sharing it with us.

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    here's one I wrote.

    He told the police.
    They were too late.
    She was there.
    Lying on the cold grey concrete.
    Her face was solemn.
    Like she was asleep.
    He wept and wept.
    No one said a word.
    He kneeled over her.
    Confused about the world.
    People lied.
    About how they can relate to his feelings.
    But no one could.
    He took the ring from her clammy finger.
    And held it like it was her soul.
    He kissed her lips.
    As one last attempt to proclaim their love.
    He left when they took her.
    He went to a bar.
    To drink the night away.
    He drank.
    He drove.
    And another mans sweet heart's blood ran cold.
    The funeral was held that next week.
    Everyone was there.
    Dressed in black velvet.
    Except him.
    He was in a cell.
    Tears stained his face.
    A man came up and said
    "I can end it right now for you."
    He graciously accepted.
    The next week he was besides her.
    Six feet under.
    Now.
    He looks up at her.
    She looks down at him.
    She potties him.
    So does the woman besides her.
    Who he killed.

  • sugarfacex
    17 years ago

    omg that is such a sad thing...i know some people that something like that happened to xx

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    17 years ago

    I've read them both before, I really didn't find them tear-worthy. Perhaps I am just weird like that.

  • lala
    17 years ago

    that was one of the saddest things I've ever heard.....so sad...

  • kori
    17 years ago

    for the first post, i think it is really sad. but i think its also that girls fault and i hold no sympathy for her.

    and the second one is really sad, too :(