HELPPP

  • LostLikeTearsInRain
    17 years ago

    hi, im pretty new here but have been writing poetry for a while. i was just wondering if it makes a poem "sloppy" to change the rhyme scheme throughtout the poem. i cant truly express wat im feeling unless i do though so i really just need 2 know
    thank you

  • NuovoVesuvio
    17 years ago

    whoever said you needed a rhyme scheme to begin with?

    Don't use rhyme for the sake of it. That's sloppy. Only rhyme if you have a reason to do so. Most people here who rhyme don't even know why poets choose to rhyme in the first place.

  • LostLikeTearsInRain
    17 years ago

    thank you vix that REALLY cleared things up 4 me and i can tell u put a lot of time in2 that and i greatly appreciate it

  • NuovoVesuvio
    17 years ago

    THANK YOU VIX I LOVE YOU DO YOU WANT TO GET IN BED WITH ME?

    Haha. Yoking. Vix always gives top advice, albeit formal, partial and longwinded.