Britt!'s Contest :)

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Oooh. It's between ''Our Song'' & ''Don't Move On''

    haha. I LOVE THE TITLES. Oh me oh my.

    Uhmmm.. Can I please reserve 'Don't Move On'?

    I'm REALLY going to try to do this. I've had writers block. for awhile. so hopefully I can!

    I have an idea.. but if I can't. I will deffinitely let you know soon!

    Thanks, hun.

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    oo. ooo. ooooo.

    I WANT ANOTHER NIGHT.. PLZZ!!!!

    I wanna return the favor for doign my contests.

    Your an amazing writer Britt.

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Can I please reserve "Our Song"

    Thanks, Joe

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Oh. I forgot it couldn't be sad.. haha. OHmy. I'm glad you reminded me.

    HOPEFULLY, I'll think of an idea.. Hrmm..

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Can I please reserve Stay beautiful?
    Thank you

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Thanks. Me too.

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    It's okay. Everyone else does it so yeah. Lol.

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    This is the first poem I've written that doesn't rhyme.

    Stay beautiful

    As I gaze into your eyes
    I see the love you have for me
    And that you care for me so
    I know you'll always be there

    No matter what happens
    And no matter what
    The world throws our way
    I know we will make it through
    Because we have each other
    And together we are strong

    You have a beautiful heart
    And a beautiful soul
    This is why I love you
    And always will
    So stay beaufiful

    --------------------
    Hope you like it

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    I like to suprise people. xD

    Thank you.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Britt, I'm working on the poem right now. I should be done here pretty soon..

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Don't Move On
    by BriBri [x]

    We're crazy in love; like one of those forbidden romance movies.
    So incapable of being indissoluble [strings attached].
    Spend our days at the beach & nights by the moonlight.
    Compatible; most people say [so perfectly matched].

    ..... (Don't move on) .....

    Love; so deep nothing can stand in the way.
    Conquering all mistakes, everything that goes wrong.
    Happiness overwhelms our souls [like a cup over flowing].
    Spinning in circles around each other to our favorite song.

    ..... (Don't move on) .....

    Laughing endlessly, splashing around in the water.
    Whispering adulating words in each others ears.
    Cuddling by the warmth of sweet scenting candles.
    Keeping one another safe from their fears.

    ..... (Don't move on) .....

    Noticing; it's not only fairy tales or made up stories.
    Wishes, fantasies, prayers, & dreams really do come true.
    The man that has always accompanied me in my dreams,
    I've come to find, that man was you.

    ..... (Don't move on) .....

    [[I hope that this is happy enough for you. haha.]]

    It was actually really fun to write & made me really happy & hyper. haha. :]

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    YAY! :]

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    Britt,

    YOU GOT THE LOVE POURIN OUT OF ME!! LOL. I wrote a love poem.

    Another Night

    It's been another night,
    Where I'll wait by the phone,
    To listen for your phone call,
    To tell me you made it home alright.

    It's hard to be a firefighters volunteers girlfirend,
    Knowing you could vanish in a second,
    But I'll make it through just fine,
    I got this far so I can make it to the end.

    Baby, I can't believe I found you,
    You're so amazing,
    You've became my everything,
    I dare won't let you go.

    Everynight is a another night,
    That I will hear our song,
    Waiting for your phone call,
    To hear your loving voice.

    The way you talk with a southern accent,
    Makes my head spin with laughter,
    The way you tell me you love me,
    Just makes my heart flutter.

    Another night hearing your voice,
    Is a night closer to holding you close,
    Another night hearing your voice,
    Is a night closer to living a life-long dream of mine.

    The way you say ' I Love You ',
    Or the way you sing to me,
    Or the way we can talk about everything,
    Keeps making me love you even harder.

    Baby, I will forever be yours,
    Because another night is like another day,
    Being loved by you,
    Just thought you should know, I love you.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    ^ She's got me writing love poems too. I wrote one for this contest. & another with the title ''To Good Is True'' cos i liked it. haha.

    THANKS, BRITT. I NEEDED THE INSPIRATION!

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    lol. I entered that one in your contest too if you havent noticed yet.

    Right now I'm kinda worried.

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    Can i reserve I melt with you?

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Our Song (Acrostic)
    by Italian Stallion

    Our song was slow and long
    Unlike any we've ever heard
    Remembering the times we've laughed and danced

    Singing along to our love song
    On occasions such as these, our
    Nervousness disappeared, as we danced at the
    Galleria in Venice, Italy

    © Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    i could be the one please britt dear! =]

    ~Ciao

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    haha I finished it :]

    I Could Be The One

    I could be the one
    Who would hold you tight
    I could be the one
    You're on the phone with half the night

    I could be the one
    Who kisses the pain away
    I could be the one
    Who would love you everyday

    I could be the one
    Who whisks away the fears
    I could be the one
    To dry the hidden tears

    I could be the one
    Who will always take your hand
    I could be the one
    Who will always understand

    I could be the one
    Who wll always be there for you
    I could be the one
    Whose love will always be true

    who knows...
    you could be the one..

    ~Ciao

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    lol I already entered one...but I'll do another :)

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Ok....I'll do Simple kind of man

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    haha you reserved the wrong title for me...but I'll do that one too if you want...haha

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Simple Kind Of Man (Song)
    by Italian Stallion

    I'm a simple kind of man
    I take life as it comes
    I'm in no kind of rush,
    I just like to relax

    I listen to music
    And even write a little too
    I play the guitar
    For some home town folks

    They say it is soothing
    And I should play some more
    Maybe even throw in
    A few lyrics or two

    You see, I'm a simple kind of man
    I take life as it comes
    Cause I'm in no kind of rush,
    I just like to relax

    I'll go fishing when I want
    And have a drink or two
    Sit out in the sun
    And even catch some rays

    My life is nice and simple
    And that's how I like it
    I'll take it one step at a time
    And see what it brings

    Cause you see, I'm a simple kind of guy
    I take life as it comes
    I'm in no kind of rush,
    I just like to relax

    Yeah that's right,
    I'm in no kind of rush
    I just like to relax

    © Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    wow Joe you're fast at writing! lol

    Ciao

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    if we can do two, I would like Come in with the rain

    Ciao =]

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    OH! If we can do another one.. I want ''Too Good Is True''.

    Cos cos cos. I already did that one :]

  • in.need.of.a.lucky.charm
    17 years ago

    hi there, i made this for "Come in with the rain"

    Baby it's looking cold tonight,
    It's growing dark out there,
    I can't wait for you to walk through the door,
    And escape the arctic air.

    The fire is stoked and crackling,
    The lights are warm and dim,
    Inside is so inviting,
    When the outside is so grim.

    So hurry now, it's getting late,
    The rain begins to pour,
    No need to ring the bell or knock,
    For I'll be waiting by the door.

    I'll peer out the window every now and then,
    Just to see when you will show,
    I hope you have your coat and hat,
    For I think it's starting to snow.

    I see a shadow in the night,
    As the lightening strikes the sky,
    Kick off your boots and step inside,
    So I can hold you untill you're dry.

    Baby just come in with the rain,
    As the thunder roars above,
    Darling you have made it home,
    You have come home to your love.

    soo pretty please may i reserve this title?

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    I Melt With You

    It's a rhytm i found in your heart
    That makes me sing at nights
    Sometimes it is your guard
    You make me melt with your eyes

    Sometimes I sing it slow for you
    To dance with me in dreams it's why
    I'll see when you hold me it's a clue
    You make me melt with your smile

    It's the place that you look upon me
    We aren't equal we don't have possibilities
    Of being together,i'm just your secretary
    You make me melt with your realities

    I see in your eyes,your wide smile
    You're happy with who you're with
    It's not me i know this,it's my pit
    You make me melt with your bliss

    Is this okay?hope you like it:)

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    Thanks alot honey

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    whoo hoo! all done! can't wait!!!

    Ciao

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    congrats winners! =]

    ♥Ciao

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    Congrats winners:)

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Woohoo Thank you, and Congratulations to all the winners. They where all good. :)

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Congratulations to all the winners.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    OMG, YAY!!!!

    Hahaha. & I thought I couldn't even write one for it. :]

    You just made my day! & Thanks for the comments. I know you've commented like.. all of mine.

    So that's okay haha! The placing is enough for me :]

    Thank you, hunny.

    Bri x

  • in.need.of.a.lucky.charm
    17 years ago

    thanks for the placing hun, but most of all, thanks for the inspiration!!
    much love and many kisses,
    bex