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ok i just wrote a poem midnight encounters and A Lovers Deceit i'de like some feedback on them. I usually write dark and one of them is. But its not my normal dark. It kina has a rhyme to it, the ohter on is very much NOT my style of writing. And it was very difficult for me to write because i don't normally do that sort of rhym and beat. But Personally I think it came out pretty good.......What do you think?

I will comment, could you please comment on 'phantom kisses'?

will comment...could u read
truth hurts' plz??