Britt!'s Contest #2

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    When i'm here i want to be the first to reserve
    Can I have Leave The Pieces Hun?
    Thanks xxx

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Hello Britt :) I'd like to reserve, "Everywhere I Go"

    Thank you, Joe

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Can I reserve Not your girl?
    Thank you.

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    amazing titles!! I'm stuck between Tell Her You Love Her, Starts With Goodbye, and Teardrops on my Guitar

    ah!!!

    *rock paper scissors*

    Tell Her You Love Her please!!!

    ♥Ciao
    ps. thanks for the comment!

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Everywhere I Go (Song)
    by Italian Stallion

    You're everywhere I go
    And you're in everything I see
    And every song I hear
    I tend to think of you as well

    But, what can I say?
    You're beautiful
    Inside and out
    And no matter what
    You'll always be in my heart

    You see, I'll try to explain
    Nice and simple and plain
    The way you make me feel
    When you are near

    You're everywhere I go
    And you're in everything I see
    And every song I hear
    I sit there and cry

    You see, it's hard to explain
    This love I have for you
    I don't really know what to say
    Or even what to do
    I just know I want to be with you

    I know it won't be no easy feat
    But I'm up to the challenge
    For all that it's worth
    And I don't care how long it will take

    You're everywhere I go
    And you're in everything I see
    And every song I hear
    I'll think of you and begin to tear

    But, what can I say?
    You're beautiful
    Inside and out
    And no matter what
    You'll always be in my heart

    © Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Can I do another one? If so, Can I please reserve, "Starts With Goodbye"

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Tell Her You Love Her

    Go tell her you love her
    She won't wait for you forever
    Don't wait until she says something
    You guys are so perfect together

    You shouldn't keep that bottled up
    It will rip you straight apart
    Maybe she feels the same way
    Wasn't it love from the start?

    Please, don't leave her guessing
    Believe me, can't you see it in her eyes
    She wants to hear she's beautiful
    She knows that you've realized

    Go, tell her that you love her
    She needs to know how much you care
    Don't worry about me; I'll be fine
    I'll always be standing there

    ~Ciao

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    o0o second title!! Teardrops on my Guitar!!

    ~Ciao

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Starts With Goodbye (Acrostic)
    by Italian Stallion

    Starts with goodbye, and
    Together we cry
    Another night, with you
    Running through my mind
    The pain is there, it won't
    Subside

    Without you near
    I'll go insane
    Talk to me please, for
    Hours, minutes, and even seconds

    Goodbye's I'm not good at
    Oh how I always tend to cry
    On occasions such as these
    Don't leave me here alone
    Be by my side and hold me tight
    You're the one I want
    Entirely, until the end of all time

    © Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    ^^ lol ahh yea, when I'm in the mood to write, I can write like a lot of poems really fast.

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    thanks Britt!

    Ciao

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    you should just do them! lol =]

    Ciao

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Can there be 2 people to a title...cuz i REALLY want Teardrops on my guitar!!!...im like...almost done it already

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Go ahead. I'm not reserved. it's rightfully yours! =]
    Ciao

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Can I have ''Another Picture To Burn''?

    Thanks.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    OH. And when do I have to have it in by? Cos I'm busy today. But I may be able to start on it later tonight.. & idk.

    Lol. & If I CAN'T do it, i'll let you know soon!

    Thanks Hun.

  • FlirtingWithDeath
    17 years ago

    I want Cold as you =]

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Okay! :] I'm trying to think of an idea noww. Or how to put it into words. & Im leaving in twenty minutes [maybe] so yeah.

    But I think I can do it. :]

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    i love the artist taylor swift you've used as your song titles for a few, but to help you close this contest, I'll do neglected. That okay???
    Charisma*

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    YAY! thanks alot!...i'm still trying to stay focused im easily distracted so...ya...distraction and writers block are my 2 biggest issues...

  • in.need.of.a.lucky.charm
    17 years ago

    aw no, theyre all gone :(

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    I hope you arent disappointed

    Teardrops on my guitar

    With a pick in my hand,
    A guitar on my knee,
    I strum the strings,
    And play a sad melody,

    The story tells of a boy,
    With no one to hold,
    When the lights go out,
    And the nights get cold,

    Thinking out my past,
    My emotions run deep,
    Childhood memories strike a chord,
    Making me want to weep,

    Something about this tune,
    Is so realistically bizarre,
    As I strum the final notes,
    A teardrop falls on my guitar

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Neglected

    You give me everything I need
    But not what I desire
    Friends is fine for friends
    Can we take it a step higher?

    You can make me laugh, always.
    I smile at the end of every phone call.
    When we talk, it’s beautiful.
    So why do we keep hitting walls?

    Is it so difficult to ask me that question.
    You know my answer would be yes.
    You can’t possibly believe,
    The way we are is really best?

    I’m feeling neglected and alone.
    Am I the only one who thinks this is right?
    She must be absolutely what you want.
    Funny, I thought this was an easy fight.

    I lose and she wins the perfect prize.
    There’s not even a second or third place.
    It’s all or nothing, you or lonely.
    I can’t look her in the face.

    I’m sorry I’m doing this to you.
    I want to save this friendship we have.
    It’s just killing me that I lost
    And there isn’t any way to go back.

    I’ll get over it, but not right now.
    Please don’t watch me cry these tears.
    No, I can’t explain myself to you.
    Just go on assuming, I’m battling fears.

    Neglected….no…just alone.
    You want to be my everything
    Except that one special person
    That would be my everything.

    By: Charisma*

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    Leave The Pieces(Acrostic)

    Leaned on him for many times
    Especially the hard ones he pulled me
    An angel he was,couldn't see his devil sides
    Vanished by his kisses but it's hard for me to be
    Eased without his soul that i was too addicted to say

    +Leave the pieces of me and please leave me alone

    Thrilled every single day when i got myself thinking him
    Healed my own wounds,ready to get myself up
    Endured so much to him,it's my turn to dump

    +Leave the pieces of me and leave me alone

    Pierced my heart when i was about to say
    Ignited by his eyes and i was to regret
    Eventually it really was that good day
    Cosy smiles for me to step into gate
    Enticed by embrace when he asked
    Smiled and said yes to be his wife

    +Don't ever leave me alone

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    cmon people only like 4 more poems need finishing....then the anticipation can be over...i have a feeling it will be hard to mark this one...

    Good luck to all

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Here ya go.. ;]

    Another Picture To Burn [Terzanelle]
    by BriBri [x]

    How pessimistic it is; just another picture to burn.
    Ashes, ashes -- bringing your lies & deceit to a crumble.
    How pessimistic it is; just another picture to burn.

    They'll be no downfall; I won't stumble.
    Allowing memories to disintegrate into thin air.
    Ashes, ashes -- bringing your lies & deceit to a crumble.

    Disguising yourself, burying that affair.
    Flutter, flutter [fly away into the wind].
    Allowing memories to disintegrate into thin air.

    Running; far from yourself. [[Shh]] nobody knows you have sinned.
    Reality crumbling beneath your feet.
    Flutter, flutter [fly away into the wind].

    One step forward, two steps back & [[delete]].
    Crush down walls made of all your lies.
    Reality crumbling beneath your feet.

    Never look back -- fact; you can't revise.
    How pessimistic it is; just another picture to burn.
    Crush down walls made of all your lies.
    How pessimistic it is; just another picture to burn.

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    RESERVE ME!!!!! QUESTION! CAN U SUBMIT 2?

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    ^^ All the titles are already taken, So from my view point I would say no, but then again this isn't my contest...BRITT what do you think?

  • FlirtingWithDeath
    17 years ago

    You can have mine, i'm having a brain fart >< I was doing Cold As You

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    I'd like to take ` Cold As You plz.

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    I'll do it if no one else will, but that is only if you let me Britt...lol

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Open Toes (Acrostic)
    by Italian Stallion

    On the verge, almost there
    Pondering about unknown matters
    Entailing my love life
    Noting the inconsistencies

    That made it crumble apart, but
    On the up side
    Embedded these memories
    So close to my heart

    © Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    so are we done now Britt?

    Ciao

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    I'm trying to get Cold As You done. I just got home from school after I tried to finish my state project and had to study my music lesson. It's 7:07 Pm my time right now. So I hope I sitll can enter it if I can write it.

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    o0o gotcha! Thanks!

    Ciao

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    will it be judged this weekend? cuz the suspense is killing me lol....if not on the weekend do u have any ideas of when?

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    haha, well if that is what it comes down to, then sure why not, but lets just wait and see what happens first.

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    Britt,

    I am so sorry but I just can't seem to do it.
    Having 2 friends die and one of my friends baby on the way is just kind of pushing me out of writing right now. I'm sorry but I have to unreserve. Thanks.

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    I'll do it if no one else wants it.

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Cold As You (Acrostic)
    by Italian Stallion

    Can you distinguish the difference
    Of Love and Hate?
    Looking for an answer?
    Don't ponder any longer

    An act of knowledge
    Soars your way

    Yearning for such an answer
    Only brings sorrow,
    Until you can see the light that is

    © Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion