"Death Row" A kind of demented poem, it is very deep, it tells a

Hey can you read my poem? It tells a story and shows much emotion, I am 14 and I have a great passion for poetry... You don't have to rate it or leave a comment, I would just like people to read my new creation... It is called "Death Row" it is sad but demented. (I am not a murderer lol) Thankyou for your time :)

Done and done. :-)

Not bad. Not bad at all. Try posting it in the dark section, it feels like it was born to belong there. You did quite a good job with the rhyming, and it was totally easy to understand your meaning. You didn't have me looking for a dictionary either, so I'm grateful.

P to the S. Remember, poetry doesn't always have to rhyme.
Again, good job.